Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 8

yipepe first oen2 rpelyy sur sur meri surrrrrrbhii ji ossumm partt mannnnn u knwo i haf eben reaidng but itne din se i ahrdly repelid en ver neways i m here again osusuumm mujeh kuch sikha likhne meien awwww ;luv u dear

wowww ....too coolll yaar
im lovin it...cont soon

SURBHI!!!!!!!!! Hey Bhaggu!!! I love you yaar!!!!! Can't wait for the A-Y scenes!!!!! Jaldi jaldi continue soon!!!!!!! Chaithi kar kudiye. Intezaar vi nahi honda mere kolon!!!!!


Komz

heyyyyyyyyy surrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!! nice part yaar really luved it a lot!!!!!!! 😉 ur writin skills r increasin chap by chap!!keep it up!! 😉 😉 m soooo happyyyyy ashi finally managed 2 save da day (nite i mean 😆 )waitin 4 da nxt chap 😉 😉 😉 plzzzz cont soooooooon!!!! 😉

surr !!! woooow
awsume part !!! 😃 😃loved it 👏
dyin to read the nxt part 😳 😳 😳
plz cont sooon

Hey sur...cont soon...the story is really progressing awesomely 😳 😳 waiting for next part eagerlyy☺️😍cont. soooooooon.. and hope ur exams went awesomlyy if they started or are over😳 😳

PS: Are they done? Or are they started? Or are they going on?:-? 😆

Hey thanx a ton for ue feedback guyz!!!!!

@Komal:Komz!!Thanx yaar!!n tu fikar naa kar agli baar post akrungi toh 2 chapters saath mein post kaungi!!k??

@priya:Thanx a lot!! 😛 N ya trust ashi to do things like these!!! 😆

@lubhnahl(Sorry dont know name):Thanx a lot!!Will definetly cont soon!!!!

@snehal:Thanx a lot!!! 😃 Those smilies made my day!!!

@NItz:Thanx a lot!!my xams rgoin on...got a 2 day break b/w two xams so thought might as well visit the forum!!!they r ending on the 8th so the next chapter wud b around that time!!!Thanx again!!! 😊

WOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sur jus'v read d 1st part!!!!! OMGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!! it's awwwwwwwwwwsom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! jus luv it luv it luuuuuuuuv it............ frm soo many days i wa seeing u've kept updating thought would read sometime l8r being relaxed afta exams.. buh lol couldn't resist jus v read 1st part.. gonna finish reading all parts maaaaaaaan u rock!!!!!!!!!!! u jus rock hun!!!!! it's totally totallyyyyyyyyy like remix!!!!! i absolutely feel i'm seeing remix new epis thrugh yo fic!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAHHH............ i so was missing remixxxx! as i havn't watched remix very much.. started luving afta 2 years it got aired off by seeing some clips online!! 😕 now can b bit relaxed as remix is gng on again!!!!!!! through yo fic.. jus luv it a lottt!!!!!! keep continuing!!!!!!!! n 1 request, plzz neva stop dis fic, lub ya muwwaahhzzzzz..... 🤗

awesome work surbhi . it was real ashi style. after a long time i had read a real ashi thing. please continue soon, we are waiting. 👏

@hiba: hey thanx a lot yaar!!!Im working on the next chapter n will complete it as sooon as xams get over!!!u havent seen remix much rite??No probs..ill try my best to recreate remix ka magic thru my fic!!

@gungun:Hey thanx a lot yaar!!Ill definetly cont soooonnnn!!!!