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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
heyaaa......sur readdddd urr fic long time ab con idnya...as usual u rockk sry canttt reply much u kwno nah studies and alll

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey ash!!Thanx a lot!!No probs!! 😛
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Chapter 5
Everyones sittin in the canteen.....as its lunch time.....n the girls r as usual raving bout sam.....
Ashi:Oh wow sams a total rockstar na...kya amazing guitaring ki yaar usne...
Vrinda:Haan yaar...Uske looks..uska talent.....wow!!!Woh toh top to bottom wow hai!!
Pri:Haan......unhein dekhke mujhe woh feeling aati hai...jaisi...jaisi chocolate pudding khane se hoti hai....
Meher:Oh ho pri plz!!Hes way above the petty comparisions!!!

The guyz meanwhile r feeling pretty left out in all this.....
Sid:Yaar agar humnein kuch kiya nahin na.....toh yeh ladkiyan kabhi rukengi nahin!!!
Ranveer:Arrey...jaane do na banaa....
Varun:Haan haan...tum toh aise hi bologe...tia kuch keh nahin rahi na isliye...
Ranveer smiles a little....n tries to change the topic..
Arrey Uv...aap itne chup chaap kyun baithe hain???
Uv doesnt say anything...hes lost in his own world...
Sid goes upto him n shakes him by the shoulder.....
Sid:Uv!!Dude..kya hua??Tum worried lag rahe ho...wats up bro??
Uv breaks out of his trance...
Uv:Haan.?Kya??..
Sid:dude!!Humein kuch karna hoga!!!
Uv:Kis baare mein sid??
Sid:Oh ho....let it be..Ranveer tum hi kuch karo...
Ranveer nods his head n goes upto the girls table.....
Ranny:aa...ashi...tia....hum soch rahe the..ki shayad humein remix ki ek meeting bulani chahiye...
Tia:Thats a gr88 idea ranveer...
Ashi:Haan!!Its bout time hum sabne milke practice kiya.....
Sid..happy that the attention is diverted says....Ok so its fixed.....kal shaam ko lets all meet in the shed...OK??
All: Done!!
Ranny:Uv..banaa...aap sun rahe hain na??Aap aayenge na??
B4 uv can reply ashi says...Is cyco se kya pooch rahe ho thakur....yeh toh humesha apne lala land mein khoya rehta hai....
Uv flares up at once..Oh cum on you red head...main lost nahin..tum lost ho...is crazy sam ke peeche...Wasting ur time n energy..arrey usmein aisa kya hai jo tum sab uske peeche aise paagal bane phir rahe ho??
Ashi also gets infuriated!!!.....U cyco..how dare u!!!??Tumne Sam ke against kuch bolne ka csocha bhi kaise!!??(Dhin tadak dhin dhin....)
Arrey woh jaise bhi hon tumse toh acche hi hain...atleast woh apne daddy dearest se darke chupte toh nahin hain!!
Mocks at uv...no daddy dearest...main aisa kuch bhi nahin karoonga jo aapko pasand nahin hai...plz mujhe apni ridiculous rallies mein mat le jaaiye..plz..plzz....
Uv moves forward burning with rage!!!Ashi also cums on..ready to fight!!
Ranny comes in the middle....
Ranny:Uv...ashi....rukiye...plz aap log mat ladiye....
Ashi:Thakur isko bolo ki next time mere matters mein interfere karega toh main ...main iske head ko half karke uska Hay nikaal ke cows ko khilaa doongi!!!!!
Uv:n u too dont mess with me...get it???
Sid:Ok ok...relax dude...chalo lets go.....
He takes him away n everyone disperses.....


A few days later Sonia comes to meet jumbo..
Sonia:Hello ashish..kaise ho??
Jumbo:Hi sonia..main theek hoon...tum batao...
Sonia:Main bhi theek hoon....bas apni shooting n films mein mashroof hoon.....Waise....tumhari new music classes kaisi chal rahi hain??
Jumbo:Haan acchi chal rahi hain....humnein ek new instructor hire kiya hai....n he tells her everything....
Sonia:Thats good...very good.....Accha ashish main calti hoon ...mummum se bhi mil loongi n tumhare us new music teacher se bhi...
Jumbo:Sure sonia....thanx for dropping by....


sonias on the way to meet ashi wen she bumps into....none other than....Sam!!
Sam:Oh....im so sorry...
Sonia:Thats ok...waise ...aap??
Sam:Sameer Khanna...Maurya ka new music teacher...
Sonia:Oh!Toh aap hain sameer...Mr.Jaamwaal ne bataya thatmujhe...Im sonia ray..
Sam:Oh..aap toh woh famous movie star hain na??
Sonia:Ji haan....
Sam:Maine aapki kai movies dekh chuka hoon......must say...u r a brilliant actress...
Sonia laughs...Thank u so much....


Meanwhile ashis walkin by n spots sonia..
Ashi:Mamma??Yahaan kya kar rhai hain??...Moves a lil side ways...SAM ke saath!!!!!
Oh no...this doesnt look good....Ab mamma kya kar rahi hain??
She rushes towards her mom...
Ashi:Mamma!!Medicine time!!!!
Sonia:Mummum!!!
Ashi...mom..ashi....
Sonia:Oh sorry...Ashi!!
Sam yeh meri beti hai..anvesha...
Sam:Oh...anvesha aapki beti hai??
Ashi:Yup...main inki hi beti hoon....waise lagti toh nahin hoon...but hoon.....
Sonia:Oh cum on ashi...I hope yeh aapko classes mein zyadaa tang nahin karti..
Ashi:Oh cum on mom!!Main koi 3rd grader nahin hoon...im big enough now...
Sam:Ha ha...no no sonia ji...Ashi toh class mein kaafi acchi hai..uska music sense bahut accha hai...shes a very talented girl!!
Sonia:Oh thanx a lot!!
Ashi:Mom woh mera dialouge tha!!
Sam:anyway main chalta hoon...nice to meet u..cu in class ashi...
n he leaves...
Ashi immediately pounces on sonia.....
Mamma!!!!Aap yahaan kya kar rhai hain!!!??
Sonia:Shona..Hum tumse ek mulakaat Ka lutf uthane aaye hain....
Ashi:Lu...wat??!!!Lagta hai aapne apne medcines nahin liye mom....aaj toh aap kuch xtra abnormal state mein hain!!!
Sonia:Oh ho!!Nahin ashi...Ab humari zindagi ki raah isi mod par aakar tham gayi hai...
Ashi:HELP HELP AMBULANCE!!!!
Sonia:Ok ok...stop it ashi...Mian ractice kar rhai hoon.....u know kamlesh pippy???
Ashi:who??
Sonia:Arrey kamlesh pippy...the legendary film maker!!!Unhone mujhe apni next film ke liye sign kar liya hai!!
Woh umrao jaan ko remake kar rahe hain!!!n mujhe lead role ke liye sign kiya hai!!!
Ashi:Oh no!!Umrao jaan!!!
Sonia:Ji haan mohtarma...Ab humein woh adaayein woh husn-e-bahaara ki aadatein apne aap mein sametni hoongi.....taki hum woh kirdaar poori khubsoorti se nibha sakein......
Ashi:Mom...isse pehle ki main chakkar kha ke gir jaaoon main jaa rahi hoon!!!!!
Sonia:Oh ho mummu...rukiye toh...humari ilteja suniye.....
Ashis gone already!!!!!Sonia smiles to herself n leaves.....


k ppl...this chapters done...will post the next one sooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn n trust me its gonna b full of masti n Dhamaal!!So all AY fans gear up 4 it!!Hope u liked this one...do give me ur feed back!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey bhaggu!!! u r too gud yaar! n ashi's dialogue! hay nikaal ke cows ko khila doongi! 😆 bechara yuvi!!! 😆 😆 😆 n sonia in the remake of umrao-jaan!!!! 🤪 really a funny part!!! n next part full of masti n dhamaal????? m w8ing m w8inggg!!! plzzzzzzz jaldi as usuallll!! 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilz_here

hey bhaggu!!! u r too gud yaar! n ashi's dialogue! hay nikaal ke cows ko khila doongi! 😆 bechara yuvi!!! 😆 😆 😆 n sonia in the remake of umrao-jaan!!!! 🤪 really a funny part!!! n next part full of masti n dhamaal????? m w8ing m w8inggg!!! plzzzzzzz jaldi as usuallll!! 😛 😛

Finalllyyyyy!Kisi ne toh rply kiya!!!Warna i was thinking ki kisi ko dikha hi nahin!!!😉

Anyway thanx a lot yaar!!Im glad u liked it!!!n trust me..mere brain mein aise wahcko ideas aa rahe hain ki cant decide which ones to include in the fic!!But not to worry...ill cont soooooooonnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey ppl im back wid my next chapter!!!!!
k...next day everyones in class.....ashi is chattin wid vrinda...wen uv enters....
ashi:Hey BHaggu...look whos here...the King of all Bewakoofs...[In a mock filmy voice]..idiots ka dost...insanes ka messiha.....yuvraj dev!!!!
Uv:Hears this n gets really pissed...He says:Whacko..just mind ur own business ok???Tum toh Madness ki mallika ho...tumhare saamne main kuch bhi nahin hoon....
Ashi:Oh ya??Khudko very Oh-im-so-smart samajhte ho????Na akal hai na shakal hai.....n to top it all...na kuch dum hai...How do u manage to survive uv???
Uv:Meri halat tumse toh bahut acchi hai whacko....atleast main kisi half baked loser music teacher ke peeche toh latoo nahin hoon...

Bas...ab ashis really n i mean really angry...uska fuse is totally gone...
😛 [Dhin tadak dhin dhin tadak dhin.......ta ta ta!!]
She reaches out n grabs uvs shirt at the neck....How dare u!!!!She shouts in his face!!!U Flee bitten...Rat smelling lousy dufustic cyco!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How dare u!!!!!???Tumhein maine ulta latkake tumhare eyes mein chilli powder n tumhare face pe cow dung lagake tumhe pani mein na drown kiya toh mera naam bhi ANVESHA NAHIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

Shes shaking uv vigorously n hes trying to free himself from her iron grip n at the same time trying to tear her infuriating red hair from her head......everyones trying to pry them apart....
Uv:Choco whacko!!Lagta hai uve finally lost it!!!!!
Ashi:U cycotic fake he man!!Main tumhe nahin chodoongi!!!
Vrinda:Ashi...chodo use!!
Ranveer:Ashi...uv...banaa...bas kijiye...
Sid:Dude!!Forget it man!!Jaane de..stop fighting!!

Total mayhem in the class!!!!!ppl have forgotten ki they r in class!!!!As usual humare ashi uv ki fight ne sab ko apne vash mein kar liya hai!!!

JUst then sam enters...hes surprised to see ki everyones huddled in a group...n sumthings happening in the center.....he calls out....Class...silence please....
eveyone rushes to their seats and ashi n uv were left all alone straightening their hair n clothes....
Sam:Ashi...Yuvi..Kya ho raha hai????
Ashi:aaa...kuch..kuch nahin sam...ba....bas aise hi...hum log................aa...!!!!!Panja lada rahe the.....ya ya...hai na uv???
Uv:Haan haan sam..bas....bas yun hi...
Sam:hmmm.....Interesting...ok..please be seated everyone.....mere paas bahut important announcement hai.....
Jaisa ki aap jaante hain ki main in music classes ko interactve banaa na chahta hoon...isliye main decide kiya hai ki its time for your first assignment in music..
Since aapke itne saare classes bhi nain hue hain music mein ill keep it a little simple...Aap logon ko do do ke groups mein divide kiya jaayega...aap logon ko ek presentation prepare karna hoga on what music stands for you..jaisa ki maine aapke introductory class mein poocha tha....only ul have to elaborate a little more on it...but sabse important baat yeh hai ki u will have to find a connection between u n the person you are working with...music se related koi cheez jo aap dono ko pasand ho ya aap dono ko saath mein jodti ho...Got it??
Class:Yes!!
Sam:Gud!OK..depending on wat u told me in your intro class..maine pairs banaye hain...here they are....
Siddharth and meher
Sid winks at meher and she smiles at him...

Varun and Priyanka

Vrinda and Karan{Sum almost invisible guy in the class....}

Tia and Ranveer
The tia ranveer flute plays in the background as tia n ranny look at each other and smile.... 😉

and so on and so forth......
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and the last pair
Anvesha and Yuvraj..

Ashi was busy bombarding sid with paper balls..and yuvi was dozing away in his chair...Suddenly they both jumped as if struck by lightning...they sprang out of their seats and stared first at each other and then at sam in disbelief...
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛 😆
Ashi:Hey BHaggu!!!
Uv:Oh no!!!!
Ashi:Sam!!
Uv:Aap aisa nahin kar sakte!!!!!
Ashi:Du-uh sam!!Kya aapko yeh nahin pata ki yeh meri life ka sabse bada problem hai...
Uv:...and hum dono ka saath mein rehna is fatal!!!!
Sam:Woah!!!Relax!!Yeh sirf ek project hai!!!Sirf around...3..ya...4 weeks ka...Bas!!!
Ashi:Bas!!??BAS!!???!!!!Hey Bhaggu!!Sam..main 3 hafte kya..3 minute bhi is yuck raj ke aas paas rahi na..ill get allergic attacks!!! 😃
Uv:Sam..please...meri n baaki sabki life ko danger mein mat daaliye...
Ashi:Exactly sam!!!Agar hum dono saath rahe toh yaa toh main iska khoon kar doongi ya khud ka!!!
Uv:Sam..ashi theek keh rahi hai..hum...hum dono saath mein ho hi nahin sakte..chahe woh project ho ya kuch aur..
Sam:Aur..woh Kyun???
Ashi:Kyunki..kyunki hum kisi bhi baat par agree hi nahin karte hain...rite uv??
Uv:Rite!!Rite sam!!HUm dono ek baat pe bilkul agree nahin karte...agar main kuch kehta hoon..toh yeh whacko ...yeh uska bilkul opposite kehti hai..
Ashi:Hey!!Main nahin sam yeh..yeh humesha mujhse disagree karta hai...
Sam:Lekin ashi...and uv...ab tak toh tum dono sirf ek doosre ke saath agree hi nahin..balki ek doosre ke saath co operate bhi kar rahe ho.

silence. 🤣


Ashi:Oh no no sam...woh toh hum....
Sam:Woh toh kya ashi???
Uv:Woh toh hum aapko samjhane ki koshish kar rahe the na..isliye..otherwise..no ways!!
Ashi:Not even in my dreams!!!
Sam:Yahaan par tum dono ke saath kaam karne ki zaroorat hai...aur tum dono wahi kar rahe ho....usi tarah is assignment ko bhi tum dono ke saath kaam karne ki zaroorat hai..im sure uske liye bhi tum dono thode din adjust kar loge...
He looks up at ashi....Main tumse itna toh expect kar hi sakta hoon...rite ashi???
Looking into his chocolate brown eyes ashi ka dil totally pighal gaya!!!!Man!!She thought...Had hoti hai cuteness ki....but...she looks up at uv...at his piercing black eyes....now filled with anger...and feels a shiver go down her spine.....she abruptly looked away..... 😳
Ashi:aaa....ummm......aaaaa..........o...ok.....if....if you say...say so.....all right
Sam smiles his 540 volt smile at her..and shes glad she said yes!!!
Sam:Gr88!!!Thats very good....yuvraj...i hope ki tum bhi anvesha ke saath co operate karoge...

The bell rings..Sam:Ok..time up!!!He starts gathering his books and belongings...
Uv:Sam...main aako abhi bhi keh raha hoon...ek baar soch lijiye...
Ashi:Aap yeh theek nahin kar rahe hain....
Sam:My decision is final..no changes now!!

He leaves...

Ashi:BHaggu!!!!!!!!!!Yeh kahaan fasa diya!!!ab is looney cyco ka face baar baar dekhna padega!!!
Uv:Hey hey!!Mujhe bhi koi shauk nahin hai tumhare saath rehne ka...Yeh sam bhi na..no brains!!
Ashi:Look.."Dude"...sam ke baare mein dont say anything or ur head will be rolling..get it???
Uv:Tum sirf dhamki dene ke layak ho...big talk n no action..

Ashi makes a face at uv:Asli action toh main tumhein dikhaungi...project ke time pe..... and walks away.....

Uv takes hi books and goes off in the other direction....

Tia:Oh tias god!!Ab kya hoga!!???
Sid:Kyun??Kya hoga??Project hi toh hoga...
Ranny:Project nahin banaa..mahabharat...Ashi aur uv ki..
Tia:Aur is sabmein tia ko us punk ko apne room mein hi handle karna padega!!Ab tia ka kya hoga!!!???? 😆


ok thats it guyz!!Hope u liked it!!Do give me ur feed back!!
Luv
Sur
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyy bhagguuuuuuu surrrrrrrr!!! gr8 chapter!!! ashi and yuvi=project??? lets c iska outcum kya hota hai1!! 😆 Ashi was busy bombarding sid with paper balls..and yuvi was dozing away in his chair...Suddenly they both jumped as if struck by lightning...they sprang out of their seats and stared first at each other and then at sam in disbelief... Sam:Lekin ashi...and uv...ab tak toh tum dono sirf ek doosre ke saath agree hi nahin..balki ek doosre ke saath co operate bhi kar rahe ho.
these 2 parts were really hillarious!!!! perfect scene created of the class!! hjhehehhhe!!! newayssss not having enuff time!! 2morrowz computer paper!!! 😕 but u don't stop 😉 continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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suuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luuuuuvdddd ur fanfic a loooooootttttt i read dem all at a go 4m chap 1 n m shoooooo haaaaaapppyyyyyy plz plzzz plzzzzz cont fasttttt it was fun readin the story it ws jst soooo suuuprbbbbbbb n o wowww uv jealous of sammmm hehehe 😆 😆 really wanna see dem do da same proj fietin all day long.... surrrr.......waitin 4 uuuuuu eagerlyyyyyyyy
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilz_here

heyyyyyyyyy bhagguuuuuuu surrrrrrrr!!! gr8 chapter!!! ashi and yuvi=project??? lets c iska outcum kya hota hai1!! 😆 Ashi was busy bombarding sid with paper balls..and yuvi was dozing away in his chair...Suddenly they both jumped as if struck by lightning...they sprang out of their seats and stared first at each other and then at sam in disbelief... Sam:Lekin ashi...and uv...ab tak toh tum dono sirf ek doosre ke saath agree hi nahin..balki ek doosre ke saath co operate bhi kar rahe ho.
these 2 parts were really hillarious!!!! perfect scene created of the class!! hjhehehhhe!!! newayssss not having enuff time!! 2morrowz computer paper!!! 😕 but u don't stop 😉 continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! 😳 😳

OOoo..hope ur paper went well....thanx a lot!!Ill definetly cont soon!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyachaku_18

suuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luuuuuvdddd ur fanfic a loooooootttttt i read dem all at a go 4m chap 1 n m shoooooo haaaaaapppyyyyyy plz plzzz plzzzzz cont fasttttt it was fun readin the story it ws jst soooo suuuprbbbbbbb n o wowww uv jealous of sammmm hehehe 😆 😆 really wanna see dem do da same proj fietin all day long.... surrrr.......waitin 4 uuuuuu eagerlyyyyyyyy

Hey thanx a lot!!!!The idea of the project was so that there cud b more of the rocking ashi uv fights!!!!Ill definetly cont soon!!Thanx again!!😃

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