Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 5

duh-huh surrrrrrr u r going on updateing and am cluelessss that u added new updates 😆 😆 idiottt wenever u do an update make sure u edit the topic ka title and add the page where u posted the new update else hybernating creatures like me wld misss it alwaysss 😆 😆 😆 anyways for now me dont hav enough time to relish and read this aweshme thingy so giv me some time i wld catch upon it real soon and pohmish me u wnt go on a shatabdi express before i catch upon 😆 😉

Actually im not that gud at writing romantic hings so i thought might as well have tr together...

🤣going by what divya told me about you and your latent talent surrr i exactly know wats the hidden pun behind this statement🤣

grt going i wld hav killed u had u kept ay together😆😳..where else would the magic and masala come from if the star of the story are together😆..thank god we have loads and loads to goooo fights drools pranks and wat not and am sure you won't have problem writing that😳..as they say keep the besht right for the end😉😳

way to goo surrrrr darling meet me up i wld giv u a grand huggy for this oneee😃🤗🤗

Originally posted by: smritisashi

🤣going by what divya told me about you and your latent talent surrr i exactly know wats the hidden pun behind this statement🤣

grt going i wld hav killed u had u kept ay together😆😳..where else would the magic and masala come from if the star of the story are together😆..thank god we have loads and loads to goooo fights drools pranks and wat not and am sure you won't have problem writing that😳..as they say keep the besht right for the end😉😳

way to goo surrrrr darling meet me up i wld giv u a grand huggy for this oneee😃🤗🤗

No i mean seriously...ashi uv type romance toh i can write...but that tia ranny mushy mushy puppy love type romance is not my cup of tea!!😛n ashi uv romance toh ultimate hota hai....sorry im a lil biased towards them.....mere favs jo hain...but 4 all d tr fans ill try my best to write bout tia n rannys romance too...n ill remember to edit d titile next time!!😃 Thanx a lot 4 liking it!!!Huggy to u too!!Ill cont sooon!!

Hey ppl!!Im back wid the next chapter...so sorrry im late but anyway here goes!!Hope u like it!!
Chapter 4.
k so after the Totally dhansu entry of Sammer urf sam in the last chapter....lets continue.......
Its night time n everyones in bed.....suddenly a figure creeps out of the girls room......she slowly goes next door to the boyz room.....opens the door very slowly...Everyones peacefully asleep......Ranveer...she calls softly......Ranveer!!!......for those who still dint get it its tia my dear einsteins......
Ranveer was sleepin by the door n he gets up.....Tia beckons him to cum out......
He creeps out of the door.....n goes near the window where tia is waiting.....
Tia:Ranveer!Tia tumhein kabse bula rahi thi.....n tum ho ki...
Ranny:HUm bhi toh aapse kabse milna cha rahe the...par aap toh kahin aur hi busy the.....
Tia:Kya!!Tia busy thi??Kahaan!!??
Ranny:Us sameer sir ko niharne mein.....
Tia:Oh...woh...woh toh bus aise hi....
Ranny:Haan haan...Aap toh unhein aise nihaar rahi thin jaise ki aur koi xist hi nahin karta.....
Ranny folds his hands n turns away 4m tia....
Tia goes into dream land again...Haan...hes so cute na........suddenly snaps out of it...aaa...umm...ranveer!!!woh...tia toh...bas...aa....unhein apreciate kar rahi thi.....aaa..uumm.....au..aur kuch nahin........
Rannys still angry.....
Tia:Woh cute toh hain...lekin jab tum gusse mein hote ho na..toh unse bhi zyadaa cute lagte ho....
A small smile forms on rannys face....but he tries to hide it...
Ranny:Ab humein manane ke liye toh aap yahi kahengi.....
Tia:Oh puh-lees ranveer...tia kabhi jhooth bolti hai kya...woh bhi tumse???never!!!
Ranny turns to her smiles n takes her in his arms...
Ranny:Jaante hain tia....tabhi toh hum aappe itna vishwaas karte hain....aur itna pyaar bhi...
n they embrace....lost in each others eyes.....savouring their moment of togetherness...


Next day..
Meher:Tia!!!Help!!!!
Tia:Kya hua babes??
Meher:Dekho na tia....main decide hi nahin kar paa rahi hoon....yeh lip gloss ka shade accha hai..ya yeh???
Pri:Tia...tum ise choda...mujhe batao...main moti toh nahin lag rahi hoon????
Tia:Angels!!Relax!!!!Yeh sab kya hia??
Meher:Tia!!Aaj 1st music class hai!!!!Tium kaise bhool sakti ho!!!
Pri:Haan tia!!!AAj toh mujhe sabse best dikhna hai...sam ka attention sirf mujh par hona chahiye....
Tia:Oh cum on girls..seriously!!Tum log bacchon ki tarah behave kar rahi ho.....i know hes cute...n all...but..
Meher:Oh ho tia!!Tum yeh sab baatein chodo n meri help karo..
Pri:Nahin tia meri.
Tia:One by one angels.....one by one..Tia sab ki help karegi...By the way...Yeh punk kahaan gayi??

Ashis meanwhile in the class already!!!Shes looking her best...the usual flaming red streaks blending just right with her jet black hair.....A smart tee n jeans....accesorised just right with bracelets....Shes checking out the instruments....wen uv enters....
Uv:Woah!!!!Whacko!!Yeh tum ho???wow!!I mean tumhe ho kya gaya hai!!!!!
Ashi:Look uv...main tumhare saath fighting fighting khel ke apna mood kharaab nahin karna chahti...so just avoid ok??
Uv:Look whacko....mujhe bhi koi shauk nahin hai tumhare mooh lagne ka.....main toh bas aise hi pooch raha tha...
Till then everyones in the class.....
The girls are all looking fabulous!!They r dressed in their best clothes.best make up best everything!!!The Guyz r surprised at this!!
Varun:In girls ko kya hua hai??
Sid:Maine kahaa tha na...ghanti baj gayi...yeh hai symptom no.1

Just then Sameer enters.....
Hes lookin really smart....now since hes such an amazing character im gonna describe every detail of his....so read on!!
Hes wearing his blue jeans.....n a yellow t shirt which is hanging loosely over his broad shoulders n well built
physique......umm...reference.....shahid 4m jwm......
He walks n everyone stands up.....
Sam:Gud morning everyone.....PLease have a seat.....
Everyone sits down.....
Sam:First things first.Mera naam Sameer Khanna hai....but u can call me sam......main baisically ek musician
hoon...but logon mein music ki knowledge baatna mujhe accha lagta hai.......
Music ek aisi cheez hai jo andar se aati hai.......music koi sikha nahin sakta....bas aapki madat kar sakta hai...aur wahi karne main aaya hoon....agar aap mein music ke liye woh junoon woh jazbaa hai.....toh aapke talent ko koi nahin rok sakta...koi nahin...
MUsic ko kabhi apne andar force mat karna....let it take its own time as it forms in ur heart...ur soul!

Everyones listening closely.......theres pin drop silence in the room....
Sam goes on....Main nahin chahta ki yeh ek regular class room ki tarah ho...main aapka teacher nahin hoon...main aapka frnd n guide hoon...is liye aap mujhe sir nahin ,sirf sam kahenge.....All right??
Then lets get started..........

Humari first exercise hai.....Main aapsab ke naam janna chahta hoon.....n saath mein aap mujhe ek word mein
bataaiye....music aapke liye kya hai.......Ok??
So lets start....
Im only telling u the answers of our fabulous four..baaki sab ka is not very imp....

Tia Ahuja........Peace of mind
Ranveer Sisodia........Strength
Anvesha Ray........Passion
Yuvraj Dev......Life.

After everyones done.....
Sam:Thats very good....aap sab ne bahut accha kiya.....
Ashi:Sam...aapke liye music kya hai???
Sam:Mere liye??Mere liye music God hai....It is the sole purpouse of my being....meri sabse keemti cheez....
Meher:Wow...thats really nice.....
Sam smiles...Thanx a lot.....Accha...ab bataiye aap mein se kitne log musical instruments play karte hain???
Our band members n a few others lift their hands.....
Sam:Gud...thats very gud.....
Pri:Aap kaunse instruments bajate hain sam?
Sam;Main??Main toh Drums n piano ke alaawa guitar bhi baja leta hoon...
Ashi:Guitar!!!Thats my Favourite instrument!!!I just love the guitar!!!
Vrinda:Sam aap humein bajake sunayenge??????PLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz?????????
Sam:well....filhaal toh mera guitar mere paas nahin hai...
Ashi:So wat??Uv ke pas guitar hai...woh baja lijiye.....
Uvs xpression is like..Wat the !@)(*&%!!!!!!
Tia:Haan haan sam!!Uv...get ur guitar plzz......
Sam:Oh no no...thats ok...main...
Meher:No sam...uv le aayega na guitar....jaao uv..
Uv refuses to budge....n has a stubborn look on his face...he looks like he wont b going.......
So ashi reaches over n tilts his chair...(Dhin tadak dhin dhin tadak.......)
uv topples over n stands to regain his balance......
Sam:Oh thanx a lot yuvraj...
Uv:No problem...no problem at all SAM....
he leaves...his face black like thunder.....
He returns with the guitar n hands it over to sam.....resumes his seat...fretting n fuming....he looks menacingly at ashi....but shes busy niharooing sam!!!
Sam starts playing.....
hes an amazing musician....... the music flows like a melody from his fingers....the class is enthralled by his
playing....Mesmerized by the sheer perfection of his notes....the music emanates crystal clear......Pouring into their souls....filtering their minds.....

He stops playing n looks up..........everyone stands up.....theres a huge round of applause.......everyones clapping away....specially the girls........everyones cheering for him........xcept for one person....uv...hes still upset bout sam using his guitar.......n sumthing else too.......sumthing is irking him...nagging him...but wat????
He looks towards ashi.....
Shes on her feet n clapping hard for sam......Admiration n appreciation in her eyes..................For sam......Sam.....
As he looks at her he feels sumthing inside of him.....a feeling of unxplained envy.........which he cannot describe......n looks away before his eyes can betray him......He wonders.......wat is bothering me??Sam using my guitar...or..........?????


well hope u liked this chapter...the rests in the next!!Do give me ur feed back!!!!!

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo................ perfecttttttttt endingggggggggggggggggggg of this chapter!!!! justtttttttttt lovedddddddddddddddddd ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! n ashi's prank!!!!!! lolzzzzzzzzzzz 😆 plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue jaldi se ok????

hey awesome part

loved the start of it tia going to ranveer room and them ranveer getting angry
and all girls doing all sorts of make up and trting to impress sam he is really a hot character 😉

WHOA! WHOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAA!!!!!! Surbhi!!! Why don't you write the second season of Remix!!!Hey Bhaggu!!!! Ky likha hai yaar!!!! Mazaa aagaya! Eik dam REMIXED tha!!!! Kamaal kardita yaar! Oye Hoye. Dil karda hai bhangda paavan!!! Oye chak de phatte! Continue soon yaar! A-Y all over again! I think my heart just did a flip-flop! Like it used to when I watched Remix! Love you yaar!!!


Komal

Originally posted by: devilz_here

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo................ perfecttttttttt endingggggggggggggggggggg of this chapter!!!! justtttttttttt lovedddddddddddddddddd ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! n ashi's prank!!!!!! lolzzzzzzzzzzz 😆 plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue jaldi se ok????

Hey thanx a lot!!Will cont soon!!!

Originally posted by: angel3142

hey awesome part

loved the start of it tia going to ranveer room and them ranveer getting angry
and all girls doing all sorts of make up and trting to impress sam he is really a hot character 😉

Hey thanx a lot!!n ya sam sure is one hot guy!!😉 😛

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

WHOA! WHOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAA!!!!!! Surbhi!!! Why don't you write the second season of Remix!!!Hey Bhaggu!!!! Ky likha hai yaar!!!! Mazaa aagaya! Eik dam REMIXED tha!!!! Kamaal kardita yaar! Oye Hoye. Dil karda hai bhangda paavan!!! Oye chak de phatte! Continue soon yaar! A-Y all over again! I think my heart just did a flip-flop! Like it used to when I watched Remix! Love you yaar!!!


Komal

Oye!!!Tere mooh mein choco donut te pastry te mithai!!I wish remix ka secnd season hota..n main likh pati uske liye!!!😛😛😛

Thanx a lot ki u liked it!!😃

Will cont sooooonnnnnnn with lots more xcitement!!!