Luv me 4 a ...b luv - part 21 on pg 25 - Page 17

wow payal!!! nice poem... i read it twice. i dont mind reading it once more😳..its . very meaning ful..but i felt it expressing tias feelings......... any ways in your fic i find ashi totaly different😉 (no silly pranks are sarcastic remrks)

it gives me a good feeling to read your fic .. the samm as you experience when you eat your fav chocolate😳

thank u all for ur precious commentss....!
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hope ur njoyinn..!! 😛

PART 18

Tia: whoz it??

Yuvi: ah.. tia, main hoon yuvi…pls open the door

Ashi: ah.. nahi….hum darwaza nahi kholenge….v're asleep….

Yuvi: acha oh…..

Tia: nahi nahi yuvi….plss come in….its okay….hum abhi nahi soye…

Yuvi: ohh gr8 then

ashi: runs towards tia trying to snatch the diary but fails…

Yuvi sees ashi running….nd asks: all well na…whacko…tumne medicine li hai naa apni…

Ashi: tumhe usse kya??

Yuvi: tum agar apni medicine nahi logi…toh aise hi tia aur dusro ko pareshan karti rahogi with ur silly tactics

Ashi: oh really…..well pshyco…medicine ki mujhe nahi tumhe zarurat hai …hee man !! (mimicking in her usual style)

Yuvi: ha…abb tum decide karogi mujhe kiss cheez ki zarurat hai aur kiski nahi huh????

Ashi: abb main tumhara khayal nahi rakhungi toh aur kaun rakhega….tumhare politician dad ko apne politics khelne se fursat nahi hai, aur apne saath saath tumhari mom ko bhi le jaate hai….abb bacha kaun…..aur tumhare jaise practically impossible cases toh mujh jaisi koi genius hi handle kar sakte hai………]

Yuvi grows angry….nd holds ashi's hair….nd ashi too holds yuvi's hair…nd both of them start fighting….ven suddenly tia cums in between nd shouts…

Tia: STOP!! Tum….tum dono yeh kya kar rahe ho…..aur yuvi…maine tumhe iss liye room mein enter hone diya tha…so that u too start fighting like animals..??

Yuvi: par tia…

Tia: lo isse padho…..read it….tia ne tumhe isliye andar aane diya…

Ashi: tia…no…….yeh tumne kya kiya…….hey bhagggggggggggu….

next part also cumin up...as i posted a bit l88 naa....
so...

PART 19

Yuvi: tia …yeh …yeh toh ashi ki handwriting hai…….

Tia: haan….yeh anvesha ki hi handwriting hai……

ranveer enters the room….

Ashi: ah..woh….yuvi..woh..

Tia: yuvi, kya tumhe lagta hai….k yeh sirf ashi k thoughts hai….tia's sure….yeh usne apne dil se likha hai……

ranveer takes the diary frm yuvi…nd reads….

tia: puhleese ashi….confess…..tia knows….u luv yuvi….nd yuvi ….tum bhi toh ashi se pyar karte ho naa…..then…

Yuvi steps closer towards ashi….

Ashi: bhaggu plss…isse roko

Yuvi went closer….

Nd started laughin loudlyyyy….so loudly…as if usse kisi ne koi joke suna diya ho…..

tia confused….looks at ranveer nd ranveer luks at tia….
(btw ranveer was now standing rite beside tia…)

Yuvi: tia, itni raat ko tumhe isse acha koi mazaak nahi mila……laughing aloud….

tia: but yuvi, tia …tia joke nahi kar rahi hai……

ranveer: bana……aap …

yuvi: ranveer…..ek second bro…lemme clear this out….haan toh tia… u say yeh poetry ashi ne likhi hai….giggles…sry m nt able to control my laughter…..hmmm…serious….

again laughs out loud…..

tia gets irritated….: yuvi, tum tia ki baat kyun nahi maan rahe…

yuvi: okay okay….tia…..plss sweety….ashi nd poetry….tht toooo centimental…nt possible at all…..nd yess…I luv ashi…..lekin yeh centimental ashi nahi…(gets serious..) the whacko ashi…..jo mujhse hamesha ladhti rehti hai…….mujhe who ashi pasand hai….jiss anvesha ki baat tum kar rahi ho, usse toh main kabhi mila hi nahi aur shayad kabhi milna bhi nahi chahta…kyunki main isse hi sambhal nahi sakta…usse kaise handle karunga…nd m sure…god is gr8…..woh mere saath itna bhi bura nahi karenge…..

tia gets upset nd keeps her head on ranveer'shoulder….nd ranveer keeps his head on tia's head…..nd they both say….inka kuch nahi hoga…!!

commentssss...!!

awesum part....esp the ay chemistry....even i dunt lyk senty ashi.....awesum part.....nd the tia ranny sayin inka kuch ni ho sakta...duh uh.....theyr ay...inka kuch ni ho sakta....deyll olways b soo cutely fitin......😳😳

awesome........tooooooo good ........excellent...... 👏

Cumon dun say ke unka kuch nai hoga, offcourse hoga 🤣

sowwie for not replying since a long time, but ya, i told you i'd b inactive😔

lovely fic as alwayssssssss 👏 =D>] 👏 =D>] 👏 =D>] 👏 =D>] 👏 =D>] 👏 =D>] 👏 =D>] 👏 =D>] 👏

continue soonnnnnnnnnn 😳

Luv,

Divya 😳 😳

hey payal/....so sorry for replying late...about ur fic...darling ay kuch hoga ya nahin pata nahin..but tum poet ban jaoogi..thats for sure 😉 ....
gud going honey....
nd plzz continue soon...

i really luv ur fic ya..its completely awesum

all thru it im either smiling, laughing or blushing

n i jus luv both d poems...they r jus tooo good ya

u totally rock 😊

thank u all...for ur lovely comments.....
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m really sowwie...for soo much delay...will try to be regular....sowwiee..
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