Luv me 4 a ...b luv - part 21 on pg 25 - Page 16

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey payal...u r rite..waise bhi mera digestive system to aaj kal 😉 😆 😆 ....nd tia ashi's romantic poetry in one part...diabetis karvani hai kya.. 😉 😆 😛 ...
jokes apart...
madam kya hua..poetry suddenly.. 😳 😍...
i must say miss..chuppi rustam...or power house of talent.. 👏 ...
ur poetry is ultra suffi... 👏 ....
waiting for next part..infcat ur portey..
nd reply soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago

awesome poem .😳.. its justy like you payal 😳very nice it expresses tias feelings in a beauti ful and simply way😳 i can imagine tia writing thatpoem😍😍its exactly like tia

but ashi i cant imagine her writing poetry😕😕

ps.. ii do agree with simran ... you are really multi faceted...a lot of hidden talent..

Edited by aparna_1988 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
good part..... 👏 but toooooo short to satisfy us...... 😛 😛 ...so jaldi se write a bigger part ...... 😊 waiting eagerly.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
read ol 3 prtz.ossum as ever..cmon..continue naaaaaaa..
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey payal wat is this....continue ur fic....we are waiting...waise bhi tere net ke saath chance nahin le sakte 😉 😆 ..so plzz continue soon.. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
thankk u alllll for ue comments....
thanxx a lott...
here's the next part...
read on...
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Posted: 18 years ago

PART 17

And jst after she finished writing….tia suddenly came up nd snatched the diary…..

Tia read the poem aloud….

At times I hate you, then I hate myself for doing it

At times I love you, and have no control over it

There are times when I just want to run away,

From you, from me, from everybody,

And then suddenly

Feel like running back to you and loving you

The same old way….

At times I just throw you out of my mind,

Thinking that things will get better for me

But then I realize, you were never gone,

You were always there

In my mind, in my thoughts, in me……

I know, you know that I love you so much

Then how do you think you can take yourself away from me

I am so helpless, whose help shall I seek,

God I hate myself,

For I was never this week….!!

Ashi: hey bhaggu, timbo….

Tia: ashi….nt baad nt baad at all ….

Ashi blushes….

Tia: well isse padh k I need nt make a guess k yeh tumne
kis ko sochte hue likha hai….aur yeh tumhare dimag ne
nahi balki tumhare dil ne likhi hai…..

Ashi: timbo….tum bhi naa……forget it…woh toh
tumhari diary padhte padhte I jst went by the flow…nd
….chodo naa….

Tia: mmm nahi…..tia thinks k jab tumne itni beautiful
poetry likhi hai …..YUVI k liye….toh he shud also know bout it….hmm??

Nd jst then yuvi reached tia's room…..nd was bout to knock…when ashi shouted…

Ashi: tia!!!!!!! Shut up….nd mujhe woh diary wapas karo…. Nd jst then yuvi knocks….

commentss..!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey payal u completly rock han..even ashi's poetry....
i luved it...u expressed her feelings so well... 👏
and i luved the way tia is taesing ashi...weell aisa rarely hota hai..remix mein 13 juuly ko hua..and now in ur fic...wow..cool...
hmmmm so guest of honour is here..i mean yuvi..ahem ahem 😉 😆 😆 ..
waiting for next part...
and mind u next part jaldi anna cahiye... 😉 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
aarh...payal..kya yaar...ur really testin my patience....aise chote chote prts post mat kar naa....i ws really hopin ki antakshari jaldi shuru ho jaayee....ms writer...jaldi jaldi kalam chalao..ps.dis prt ws vry nyc....
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwww....soooo cute.......ashi is really very cute ......
very well written part....loved it ..... 👏

but plzzzzz plzzzz plzzzz write big parts n plzzzzzzz humlog ko itne dino tak suspense mei mat rakho.....soooooo plllllllllzzzzzzzzz continue soon.... 😛 😛 😛

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