Luv me 4 a ...b luv - part 21 on pg 25

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hii to all....
m posting sumthing after a long time.....nd tht too on the insisting of divu...(divya_92)
okay guys...i hv written down a fic...nd m bout to post it here....(but seriously... i din wanted to..)
m damn nervous.......!!!😕
but for the fic....i have to thank 2 ppl most importantly...first of alll divz....who read all my parts (jitne abb tak likhe hai...) soo patiently....though i used to think m torturing her 😕😆
nd secondly simi di ...... with whom i was supposed to post the fic jointly...but due to her egjaams....she could nt continue.....but sum ideas for some incidents were suggested by her...😛
thanx a zillion to both of u .... 🤗

now the fic.....being a tr fan...the story revolves around ranveer tia onli😛😛....but my backdrop is the continuation frm where remix ended.....so the ay story won't b soo much in consideration......sry if i hurt ne1....

Love Me For A Reason And Let the reason BE love

PART 1

The day when jumbo told them that he was only testing his students, whether they actually liked music or not, went off playfully. Ashi n Tia told their angels, buddies n boyfriends……… about their parents wedding.😉
The next day everybody was there at the Ahuja's residence. Tia was sitting next to Soniya n Ashi next to Sumeet. All four (Ashi, Yuvi, Ranveer, n Tia) along with their gang were excited as the Pandit was figuring out the date for Soniya n Sumeet's marriage.

Ashi: Hey Bhaggu! Pandit ji sirf ek date nikalne mein itni calculations.😡

Tia: Haan, Tia is also worried. Pandit ji aap itna time kyun le rahe ho?

Ranveer: Ashi, Tia sabr rakhiye. Yeh koi asaan kaam nahi hai. Pandit ji aap apna waqt lijiye, aur sahi mahurat nikaliye.😊


Yuvi was getting so bored that he even started yawning sitting there n Ranveer tried to make him aware of where he was by hitting him with his elbow now n then.😆

Pandit: Beta, is saal toh inki shaadi ke do hi shubh mahurat hai. Ek toh teen mahine baad ka hai aur ek teen din baad ka hai….. Ab aap log jaisa thik samjhe…

Sumeet: Mere khayal se teen mahine k baad jo mahurat hai wahi thik rahega… kyun Soniya??

Soniya: hmmmm.. thik keh rahe ho Manmeet…. I mean Sumeet.. Dusri baar tumne koi sahi decision liya hai.

Sumeet: Dusri baar?????? Kya matlab hai tumhara??😕

Soniya: Oh ho Sumeet, pehla thik decision toh tumne mujhe tia ki mom bana ka kiya tha na…

Sumeet: Yaa rite.. thik keh rahi ho tum….(in a taunting way)

Ashi: Aap dono ki love conversations khatam ho gayi ho toh main kuch bolu?? Pandit ji teen din k baad wala mahurat final kar dijiye.

Soniya-Sumeet (together): KYA???

Tia: oh ho mumma!! Waise hi aap dono ne apni marriage ka decision lene mein waise hi itna time laga diya. Ab marriage mein bhi………….. no… ashi thik keh rahi hai. Teen din k baad wala mahurat thik rahega..

Soniya, Sumeet, Ranveer, Yuvi all were surprised ke tia aur ashi ek hi baat par agree kaise kar rahe hai!!!!!!

Ashi-Tia (together): aap sab k mooh kyun khul gaye??

Soniya: nahi, woh… Manmeet apna mooh band karo.

Sumeet: huh.. haaan..

Soniya: Ashi Tia tum dono chahti ho k shaadi teen din baad ho.. lekin beta shaadi arrange karna koi asaan baat nahi hai..

Sumeet: haan

Soniya: It has to b handled with loads of responsibility.

Sumeet: haan

Soniya: shaadi ki tayariyaan teen din mein kaise hongi??

Sumeet: haan..

Soniya: yeh haan haan ki mala japna band karo aur kuch kaho…

Yuvi whispers in ashi's ears " Uncle toh abhi se joru k ghulam ban gaye.."😆

Ashi n Yuvi were giggling over this ven Ranveer noticed them. He asked them wat was going on but they did nt tell him n left him suspicious…😕

Tia: Papa aap phikar mat kijiye. Hum saari tayariyaan kar lenge.

Ashi: haan, aap dono jao shopping karne. Hum sab sambhal lenge.

Yuvi n Ranveer nodded their heads too assuring them that they'll handle everything.😃😃


hope u guys like it......w8in for ur comments....!!
plsss do comment if u like it nd even if u don't........plsssssss
ur comments mean a lottttt...........
Edited by palo rani - 18 years ago

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-aditi- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sumeet nd jkg 😆 😆 😆 ...wow gr8 part... 👏 do cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yipeee me da very first to reply 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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he he...soo sweet....nicely dun payal.....plz comtinue....i can jus imagine sonia sumeets weddin....uv nd ranveer in sherwaanis lukin totally hottttttt 😳 😳 .....hey bhaggu...pls cntinnue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its very nice plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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payu yaar fantastic.
the begining was superb. 👏
puhlease continue soon.
luv u.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee payal.its very nice 👏
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very good beginning ans interesting one too..👏.. looking forword to your next part👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 btw yourtittle is awesome
Edited by aparna_1988 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesum part and why were u scared to rite it
its simply awesum yaar 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 really nice.... loved the sumeet-sonia chemistry 😆 😆 .... & ashi-uv-tia-ranveer in charge, hey bhaggu.... goodness knows kya hoga 😆 😆 .... anyway, cant wai to read the upcoming parts, even though im an ashi-yuvi fan 😊 ..... do continue asap 😳

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