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palo rani thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

PART 20

yuvi: tia….tum relax karo…mere aur anvesha k beech mein na kuch
hai….aur…(gets sad for a moment…) neways….tumne mujhse yeh nahi
poocha k main….mera matlab hum yahan kyun aaye hai….

ashi was quiet…nd still like a rock….

ranveer went to her…..nd moved her….ashi: huh…..(as if cuming out of a
dream..)

ranveer: ashi aap thik toh hai….

ashi (whispers): sab thik hai na….?

Ranveer: haan…..yuvi ne sab sambhal liya…….aapki poetry ko as a joke
treat kiya…unhone tia ki baat ko mazaak mein uda diya…

ashi: bhagggggggu….i luv u bhaggu…aapne mujhe bacha hi liya…..thanku…!!

yuvi: ah…tia woh hum soch rahe the….k…..yeh shaadi ka ghar hai….toh
yahan kuch shor sharaba bhi hona chahiye….

tia: haan….par…itni raat ko….i hope ur nt talking bout goin to the disc at this
time…puhleese….tia ko ready hona padega….aur itne time mein….agar tia
puri tarah ready nahi hui…toh….oh tia's god…..itna stress….no ….puhleese
yuvi…..tum tia k saath aisa nahi kar sakte…akhir tia ahuja hona koi aisi waisi
baat nahi hai..!!

ashi: hey bhaggu…timbo..!!! yuvi, tum kya kehne ki koshish kar rahe ho…??

yuvi: tia, ashi….main toh bass yeh kehne ki koshish kar raha tha…..ki iss
shaadi wale ghar mein thodi hulchul honi chahiye…so main…main aur ranveer
yeh soch rahe the ki…ki …kyun na hum sab hall mein chal kar kuch khele…..

tia: oh..... yeh……. toh pehle batana tha naa ….waise iske liye hall mein jaane ki zarurat nahi hai…..we'll play sumthing here itself na…

ranveer had a worried expression over his face…but yuvi din give up….

yuvi: nahi tia, ah…woh…ah…

ashi: tum itna murmer kyun kar rahe ho pshyco?? Saaf saaf bolo na…

yuvi: ah..woh….actually….tia …ah…haan…woh uncle aunty ka room yahan
se bahut close hai…so unhe awaazein jayengi….. so..i think humein hall mein hi chalna chahiye….

tia thinks for a while nd finally says: mmm tia thinks…tum thik keh rahe ho…
mumma aur papa disturb ho sakte hai aur hum sabko neend bhi nahi aa rahi…

ashi: yaa ek tarah se time paas hi ho jayega hamara…

ranveer finally takes a breath of relief…all were bout to leave ven ranveer called out tia….

Tia turned nd gave a smile…: bolo ranveer

ranveer: ah..woh…tia ..woh aapki diary…

tia: oh haan….thanku ranveer….

ranveer smiles..nd waits there…

tia: ranveer tum chalo….tia apna face wash karke aati hai….

ranveer: acha… ah..thik hai, aap jaiye hum bhi….

tia: hmmm
nd tia goes in the washroom….

commentss..!

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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely part....tiara toh always knew they loved each other but uv aashi k dil me bhi ek doorse k liye pyaar hai 😳 😳 😳 ....cant wait 4 d next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part honey...so waiting for next parts..nd their games...
warning..... 😡 .....continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
Mind blowing part Payal 👏

continue soonnnnnn 😳

Divya 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
ooh....i hav a verryyy bigg cmplaintt agains a certain gal namd payal...u bttr meet me at yahu....
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Posted: 18 years ago
thank u alll for the ovely response....
i jst hope ur enjoyin thiss..
here's the next part cumin up...
read on...
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Posted: 18 years ago

PART 21


ranveer: acha… ah..thik hai, aap jaiye hum bhi….

tia: hmmm
nd tia goes in the washroom….

ranveer gears up all his strength nd starts searching for a place jahan who tia
ka gift chupa sake….aur jahan who bhi asaani se usse dekh sake…

he tried many places…dressing table…bed-side table….drawers….harr
jagah…but cud'nt satisfy himself…..fir kuch samajh nahi aaya toh, he kept the
gift in her almirah…nd rushed out of the room…..bahar jaake he was like
**phew**

Tia came out ….nd was searching for her towel….she moved towards her
almirah….nd opened it…..there right in front of her was a wraped gift….she
was excited nd curious at the same time to know who kept it there nd wat did
the wraped thing contain….

she quickly unwrapped the gift ….nd found the pendant …..she was

overwhelmed….sumwhere in her heart she knew….tht ranveer had kept it
there….but she just smiled….nd her love for ranveer glowed on her face….

she wore the pendant…..nd went down….

downstairs yuvi, ashi nd ranveer were waiting for tia….as they still had to
decide….what shud they do….
tia came down…..nd sat down beside ranveer…..ranveer saw the pendant in
tia's neck….nd he too was overjoyed….yuvi too noticed the pendant….nd
winked towards ranveer….ranveer blushed a bit…nd tia….tia was unable to
look up…she was blushing sooo much….

admist all this ashi went confused…nd said, yahan kya ho raha
hai…..timbo….thakur.. yuvi..tum sab thik toh ho naa….yahan koi unknown
competition chal raha hai kya…. Tum sab itna strangely kyun behave kar rahe
ho…???

even after this ranveer was constantly lookin at tia….nd ashi shouted (though
a bit slowly): thakurr…..!!

ranveer nd tia both came out frm their daze nd tia says: ah…..haan …lets
start…!!

ashi: yaa lets start…timbo…wat start..?? abhi tak humne kuch decide hi nahi
kiya hai….
nd mimicks tia "lets start"

tia gets annoyed...: toh abb decide karo na…

yuvi: hmm…suggest karo…

ashi: mmmm dark room..!!

tia: ashi tumhe kisi ka murder karna hai….
nd she also mimicks ashi "dark room"

ranveer: aap dono ladhiye mat…yuvi bana aapka koi suggestion?

yuvi: mmm mujhe abhi kuch nahi soojh raha…

ashi: kuch funky aur adventurous socho…

tia: trekking kaisa rahega ashi…??

ashi (angrily): timbo..!!

ranveer: iss tarah toh puri raat decide karne mein hi beet jayegi…!!

ashi: hmmm….wat bout truth or dare??

yuvi: gr8.. I agree

ranveer: hmmm thik hai…

tia: mm okay then…..lets start..!

commentsss..!!
Edited by palo rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

finally payal😳.. itsworhthewai👏t.. esp enjoyed reading tias reaction to ranveers gift.. beautifully expressed😳

iam glad you continued th your story...

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Posted: 18 years ago
waooo..darling....finally time mil gaya app ko....nd luved this part....ab its very difficult to praise u miss genious...truth nd dare hannnn 😉 kwelllll....
expecting loads of fun masti nd romance offcourse..after all tiara month...so luv is alaround 😳
nd honey..waiting for next part.... 😉 ....
continue soon sooon sooooooooooonnnnnnnn....nd yes study bhi karlena 😉 😆 😆 woh hota hai na kuch aise hi...word yaad nahin aa raha....kuch 'E' se..sumthng useless sa.....sayid EXAMS.... 😡 ...
😆
luv u,,,,,nd studyyyyyy..gud luck.. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
mindblowing as always 😳

continue soon 😳 😳 😳


Divya

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