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Posted: 18 years ago
thanxx a lott for all ur responses....
nd m sowwie for posting soo l8...
to cover up this gap...
i'll post 2 parts together..
hope it won't be a torture.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Yuvi: hmm…yeh thoda dimag ka kaam hai…par koi
baat nahi, hum usse bhi figure out kar lenge…tab tak
tum tia k baarein mein socho main ashi k baarein mein
sochta hoon…


Ranveer: kya?? Aap ashi k baarein mein
sochenge….finally aapne apne aur unke beech k relation
ko accept kar hi liya…hum bahut khush hai aapke liye…


PART 14


Yuvi: no..no…no….tum bilkul galat soch rahe ho
dude….ur wrong….main ashi k baarein mein isliye
sochunga kyunki wahi ek devil brain hai hamare group
mein…aur aise tricky solutions ussi k brain mein mil
sakte hai….u know…..she is a genius in all this…isliye
main uske baarein mein sochunga taki mujhe kuch ideas
mile….u know devilish ideas….!!

ranveer: ohhk…acha …chaliye chahe issi bahane hi sahi
aap unke baarein mein sochenge toh sahi…nd gives him
a biggg smile…..


Yuvi throws a pillow at him….


After 20 mins…


Ranveer: banna jaldi sochiye naa….abb tak toh tia so bhi
gayi hongi…


Yuvi suddenly shouts: mil gaya mil gaya, mujhe rasta
mil gaya………yess……..thakur ………ashi…thanx a
lott….


Ranveer: mil gaya toh humein bhi toh batayiye…aur
ashi ko baad mein thanx kijiyega….


Yuvi: ah….m soo koool…..okay dude…here it goes…
yeh shaadi wala ghar hai….rite..


Ranveer: itni der mein aapko yeh samajh aaya hai…..


Yuvi: nahi dude….meri baat toh suno…..since yeh
shaadi wala ghar hai…toh yahan shor gul toh hona
chahiye…aur yeh shor-sharaba humein karna chahiye,
aur hum yahan aaraam se sone ki koshish kar rahe hai…
nt fair ….


Ranveer: toh


Yuvi: toh yeh, k hum ashi aur tia ko jaga k hall mein
bulayenge, nd koi game khelenge….jaise antakshiri…ya
koi aur…nething…kuch bhi


Ranveer: aur jab aap decide kar rahe honge k kya khelna
hai…tab tak hum tia k room mein unka gift chod
aayenge…!!! Rite..??


Yuvi: absolutely…..tumhara kaam bhi ho jayega…aur
hamari masti bhi…


Ranveer: sufi…banna!!

Yuvi: chalo abb unhe uthane chalte hai…btw hey, tumne
abhi tak bataya nahi tum tia k liye laye kya ho???

Ranveer: woh….woh hum unke liye yeh laye hai…..I hope unhe yeh pasand aayenge….


Yuvi: hmmmmmmmmmmmm…nice choice bro…..chalo chalo lets hurry up…!!

next part also cumin up.....
do comment....

Edited by palo rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

PART 15

Ranveer: haan chaliye, dekhte hai aapke iss plan se kuch hota bhi hai ya nahi??

In tia's room
tia: ashi kya tumhe neend aa rahi hai?

Ashi: nahi…….timbo tumhe bhi neend nahi aa rahi naa…

Tia: nahi…..

Ashi (getting up suddenly) : timbo…ah…tia tum sone se pehle apni diary mein kuch scribble kar rahi thi…kya likh rahi thi tum?

Tia: ah.. woh.. tia tumhe kyun bataye..??

Ashi: oh c'mon tia… batao naa….kya likha tha tumne?

Tia: woh tia ki personal diary hai…..

Ashi: hmmmmm….thakur k baarein mein bhi kuch likha hoga…..mujhe batao naa…. m getting curious to know….k jab tum love birds saath nahi hote…..toh kaisa feel karte ho….m sure tumne yeh sab apni diary mein likha hoga….haina..

Tia blushes a bit nd then says..: jo bhi hai, tia tumhe nahi batayegi…

Meanwhile ashi was trying to find k tia ne apni diary kahan rakhi hai…

Ashi: mmm okay….mat batao…
then gets down her bed, nd goes near the dressing table….nd picks up the diary….

Tia shocked…..: ashiiii no…. tum yeh nahi karogi….tia ki diary abhi wapas karo…now…!!

Ashi: well well well timbo….abb toh main isse padh kar hi tumhe wapas dungi…

nd tia also gets down frm her bed…nd runs towards ashi trying to snatch her diary back…

ashi starts running about in her room…..tia follows her but fails…..nd after sumtime…is left panting….with the diary still with ashi…. She's very angry but ashi was having fun…

ashi sits back on her bed….holds up a pen….nd opens the diary..

commentss plsss.....

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Posted: 18 years ago

👏 wow what a pleasant surprise👏thought you forgot about your fic... am glad you continued

will read and post my coments

nice parts payal... simpleandsweet narration... reading your fic is pretty much likewatching remix.. coz your charcters say and behave exactly like the main leads. thats the best part of your fc.... the resemblence is awesom👏e for a first timewriter this is great👏. . i dontn want put too much pressure on you... at present iam enjouing reading your fic immensly.. i hope i conti nue to do so... all the best

Edited by aparna_1988 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey cutie pie😳..after such along..plzz yaar star one ke tarah timings change maat kar bar bar 😉 😆 ..puhleazzz try to post asap..u knw na tumharo fic hi remix ki akhri umeed hai.. 😳 ..i can visualize each nd every scne..
again part is very nice..u knw wat the best part about ur fic is u concentrate on each nd every relation 👏 👏 👏 ..nt only lovers..tia 's nd ashi 's part nd even yuvi's nd ranny's part..very sweet 😳 ..
ndddddd 😳 ranvers present is just waooooooo....
nd mam intna suspence...plzz kahain raat hi na finish ho jaye 😉 😉 ..
i m loving it 😛 ...
nd now continue soon..okayy.....
😊

Edited by simran22$ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwww soooo good ....so ab what is ashi up to ....... 😉 ....jaldi se cont karna plzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwww......sufi...
ranveer -yuvi & ashi-tia ka conversation was superb...
im lovin it...!!
cont soon wit nxt part
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Posted: 18 years ago
cholly 4 da late reply, bt i would b inactive for long now 😭 😭 😭

awesome part as always 👏 continue soon

Divya
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanxx a lott for all ur comments.....
nd divz....i know....tera online aana mushkil hoga...but do me the least tht u can...bas reply zaroor karna after every part...plss...i'd always w8 to see ur reply in ma ficc... 😛 😛

nd guyss...the next part is cumin up..!
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Posted: 18 years ago

PART 16

Ashi reading aloud:

I'm so sad without you,
I just don't know what to do-
Whenever you're gone
My days are so blue..

Whenever you're near
You make every day bright,
You put joy in my heart
And bring light to my life!

I wish you were here now,
Because I miss you, it's true.
I miss the way you make me happy
And all the little things you do.

I really hope I'll see you soon!!

Ashi: wow….timbo, tum toh poetry bhi likhti ho….m impressed….

Tia: ashi, u r very baad..

Ashi: oh c'mon tia….m ur gonna b sis after all….nd aisa toh hai nahi k tumhari thakur k liye feelings mujhse chupi hai……v all know k tum aur thakur ek dusre k liye pagal ho….toh fir yeh mujhse share karne mein kya problem….

Tia: tia ki yeh diary aaj tak uski angels ne bhi nahi padhi…..

Ashi: kyunki who tumhari angels hai naa…nd laughs…

Tia: oh puhleese…unhe tia ki feelings ki parvaah hai…unlike u…

Ashi: oh really… acha neways….lemme read further….

But instead of reading further….going by the flow of wat she was reading…..she herself started to write …

<<write wat…..poetry yaar…>>

commentsss...
sowwie for a small part...lekin ashi aur tia ...dono ki poetry ek hi part mein nai de sakti thi naa...aap log digest kaise karte...😕
for now....i hope u liked this li'l part also....
do comment...😛

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