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arjun decides to investigate on all this.he goes to spak to ranveer.

a-hey you flunky tum tia ke saath kya kar raje ho

r-humhe nahi lagta ki aap ko jannae ki zaroorat hai

arjun and ranveer are abt to fight when tia stops this

t-arjun tia ne kaha na ki woh ranveer se pyaar karti hai toh kya problem hai

a-tia tum ise nahi jaanti yeh tumhe zaroor hurt karega

tia gets upset and says-arjun tia ranveer ke khilaf ek wotd bhi nahi sunna chahti hai.then she and ranveer leave

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TIA - RANVEER

Tia is still mad...coz of ashi and then arjun..Ranveer tries to calm her down

R: tia...aap please upset mat ho jayiye....aap arjun ki baton ko itna importance mat dijiye

T: Ranveer...Tia cant hear any one saying any thing bad about you...Tia loves u a lot...

R: Tia hum jante hain...aur hum bhi aap se bohot pyaar karte hai..(and they both smile looking at each other)...Tia chaliye hamare saath...aapka surprise aap ka wait kar raha hai

Tia remembers the surprise...and her mood changes...she is happy and excited now...Ranveer takes her to their special place..outside the door he asks her to close her eyes...and she does..(after all its a special surprise for her)

they go in...she opens her eyes

There a couple of rose bouquets in there and rose petals everywhere...

Tia is overwhelmed by all this

T: Ranveer...Ranveer this is so beautiful...Tia ne kabhi bhi dream main nahi soocha tha ki yeah surprise itna wonderful hoga...Tia is so happy Ranveer...(and runs into his arms and hugs him tightly)

Ranveer holds her close to him and then goes to the music system in the room (there is one..dont ask me how...😉) ...and puts the music on...its the soft music they were dancing to when they were rehearsing for that competition....

R: Tia can i have this dance (and extends his hand asking her for hers)

Tia smiles...and extends her hand...Ranveer pulls her closer...as they slow dance...

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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while dancing they just look in each other eyes & keep smiling
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yuvi - ashi

ashi - bolo yuvi! ( yuvi still finding words )

yuvi - ashi woh (not looking at her)

ashi comes near yuvi and tells him " meri taraf dekhkar baat karo yuvi or plzz dont lie"

yuvi thinks" abhi nahi kaha toh shayad main kabhi nahi kah paunga"

yuvi - (strongly and this looking straight into her eyes) - yeh sch hai ashi. maine sid se bet lagayi thi.

ashi is shocked .............

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ashi=wat tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakte ho

yuvi-aashi but then i dont know i really atarted likin you

ashi=oh ab yeh kaunsa bet hai ki mein kaise fool banti hun.you know i realised ki mere pas timbo se bhi kum brains hai aur maine tumhu trust kiya

ashi-mom was rite you are spoilt and a big liar

and then she walks

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tia-ranveer

while dancing raneer was just staring at tia while tia sometimes looking in his eyes & sometimes just lowered her eyes

r: tia , agar hum app se kuch pooch to app mind nahi karegi?

t: ofcourse not ranveer , tia will ans ur every question

r: tia app mr ahuja ke saath itni rudely kyu baat karti hai?

t: tia ko papa se koi problem nahi hai , par papa sirf wahi karte hai jo pallvi kaheti hai. ab tia ke papa tia se pyaar nahi karte

r: nahi tia. app ke papa app se bahut pyaar karte hai

t: nahi ranveer. tumhe kuch pate nahi, papa ne tia ki 18th birthday party bhi cancel kardi

r: kya???

t: haa. but u dont worry, sonia aunty hai na, woh tia ki party orgnise karagi. u know sonia aunty is the best. woh tia ki kitni care karti hai. humasha tia ko right path dikati hai. jab tia arjun ko date kar rahi thi tab bhi sonia aunty hamesha tia se kahati thi ki tumhi tia ke lia tum hi proper ho.

r: thanks tia. jab bhi app humari saath hoti hai tab hum laagte hai ki hum is world ki happiest person hai. app ko nahi pate ki jab hum app ko arjun ke saath dekhte tha to hume kitne pain hote tha

t: ranveer , tia is really sorry for that. lekin ab tia hai na, ab tumhe kahi koi hurt nahi karege

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Posted: 20 years ago

now yuvi is really feelin guillty n start abusing himself

he straight away go to latty n start shouttin on her dat y hav she done that n all n den go to his room n start cryin

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Meanwhile ashi is in her room....Mp and Vrinda are consoling her...

Mp:Ashi...mereko lagta hai ki tumhe us loser se revenge lena chahiye...Vo aisa kaise kar sakta hai...

Ashi(crying real real hard):No MP...tum samajh kyon nahi rahi ho...I love him...I LOVE YUVI...Aur usne mere saath aisa kiya...Life mein pehli baar i'd really loved someone...aur usne mere saath...😭No Mp...I'm too hurt...

Vrinda:Ashi...Its ok...Relax...sab thik ho jayega...

MP:Hey mate vrindeshwari...tumhe kya saari duniya tumhari tarah hi good hearted lagti hai...?Come on use false hopes kyon de rahi ho?

Vrinda:Coz mujhe pata hai ki yuvi shayad sach keh raha hai...He really loves ashi...

Mp:yeah...right..isiliye usne ashi ke saath aisa kiya...Open ur eyes..vrinde...tum kaunsi duniya mein ho?

Vrinda:Well...maybe main entirely true nahi hoon...lekin revenge lene se kya hoga...?Tumhe dikh nahi raha kya...ashi yuvi se kitna pyaar karti hai?Agar use kuch ho gaya toh hurt toh ashi hi hogi na...?

MP:(sarcastically)ok...mate toh hume ab kya karna chahiye...?

Vrinda:Well mujhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki ashi ko yuvi se baat karni chahiye...After all uski eyes mein i saw true love 4 ashi...

Mp:oh plzzzzz mate tu--

"SHUT UP!!!!!!!!"ashi screams loudly tears still running down her face...

Ashi:plz guys...tum kya thodi der ke liye mujhe akela chod sakte ho....Plz....

Wid this Mp and Vrinda finally relax and leave ashi alone...

Ashi is really hurt...She is still crying...

But she isn't d only one......somewhere in d boy's quarters...der is another guy crying hard...Yuvi....😭

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vrinda then calls sonia aunty and tells her everything
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TIA - RANVEER

R: tia aap pallavi ko like nahi karti na..kuch kua hai kya?

T: ranveer, tia ko paata hai ki pallavi achi nahi hai..woh tia ke papa se pyaar nahi karti aur hamesha unko tia ke khilaf bhadkati hai..woh tia ke mom ki place kabhi nahi le sakti..woh tia ko kabhi love nahi kar sakti ranveer...woh tia ke papa ki life barbad kar degi aur tia yeh hone nahi de sakti

R: tia hum hain na aapke saath..hum kissi ko bhi aapko hurt karne nahi denge...aur hum hamesha aapke saath rahenge..aapke sare problem aab hamare bhi problems hai..hum dono milke isse bhi solve kar lenge

Ranveer hold tia in his arms reassuring her that every thing will be okay

R: tia chale aab hame aapke papa ke saath lunch pe jana hai na?...aap phikar maat kigiye..saab thik ho jayega...

and kisses her hand gently..

T: ranveer, tia tumhe khud se jayada trust karti hai...thanks for always being there for tia and loving tia so much

Just then kailash kaka comes to pick them up

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago

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