Single Line Remix story - Page 10

Originally posted by: remix_lover

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waiting for ur continuation

esha

ranveer- ok ab practice ho jaye

aman-yeah lets start

during the pratice...ashi looks at yuvi n smile (unware of the whole bet issue yet)...and yuvi is looking at her with this..."oh god...please forgive me...god please help me sort this" look...at the same time...

the two other love birds Tia and Ranveer r totally oblivious to all of this...they r too busy lost in each others eyes while singing the song....

aman notices the serious tension between ashi n yuvi...n is wondering whats happening...he is thinking..."what couples here....dey r so lost in eachothers eyes that they dont even know if anything else exist one moment and ready to kill each other the next. god only know how i cope up and manage all of them"

meanwhile all this tension and worrying abt whatz gonna happen after the pratice is making yuvi nervous and he misses a chord...ashi who is wondering what is going on with him

A: hey yuvi darling...what r u doing...u r missing the chords

Y: ashi (totally nervous)...its nothing....just forgot the chords thats all

Ranveer n Tia try to find out

R: Ashi - yuvi kya hua? saab thik hai na? hum phir se pratice kar le?...

T: Ya...and yuvi ...i can totally understand y this is happening....is red head ko date karne must be so stressful...ki tum chords bhul gaye...

A: hey timbo...u stay out of this ok....we dont need ur opions

Y: tia ....lets not start this now...ashi ..sweetheart...lets just do this again...

Aman: yeh kya ho raha hai...yuvi n ashi...whats the problem?

rehasals end & they all pack up

Its the end of d Rehearsals and they r all packing up wen aashi and tia start fighting again...

Tia:u know wat...Tia tum jaisi red head freak ke saath kuch argue nahi karna chahti...Tia ka taste itna bhi bura nahi hai...

Aashi:Hey bhaggu!Finally tumne realize to kiya ki tum mere saath argue nahi kar sakti...because argue karne ke liye brains chahiye jo unfortunately tum 10th century ke extinct species mein chod ke aayi ho...

Tia:Oh puhleez...Tia ko tumhari nonsense sunne mein koi interest nahi hai...All this is too delicate 4 tia's ears...

Aashi:ooops...I forgot...Its barbie doll after all...Tum apne Tia world mein hi rehna bimbo girl...Pata nahi Thakur tumhe kaise tolerate karta hai...

Ranveer tries to interrupt while yuvi is still too worried abt wat he's going to say 2 aashi after the pack up...

Ranveer:Tia...hume ab chal--

But Tia retorts angrily 2 aashi and ranveer's efforts go vain...Meanwhile Aman is too irritated and leaves d shed...

Tia:Well...tumhare paas to nahi beauty hai aur nahi brains...Tia thinks ki tum usse jelous ho...coz tia's sooo beautiful..

Aashi:Duh uh!!!!!!!!Jelous my foot...U Bimbatic pathetic timbo!!!!!!!!!!!!

And wid this both of them start fighting.... literally fighting...Finally d 2 boyz separate d 2 girlz...But by dis time Aashi's so angry dat she forgets dat she has to talk to yuvi..Aur vo apne room mein chali jaati hai...

Yuvi wonders...now wat?

now yuvi is really tense

next morning latti(Ms. snitch) has printed all abt bet in Gossip coloumn and ashi read it she is really embarrased n don wann to talk abt it to nebody she goes to d shed n den yuvi enters

yuvi enters and ashi looks at him. yuvi is really nervous , thinks wat wud i speak to ashi.

yuvi - ashi woh........

ashi - i know yuvi, ye gossip column mein toh kuch bhi nonsense print hota hai. i know its not true. (ashi is actually confused . she senses tht it is true but dont want accept it)

yuvi - ashi , tum ispar blive nahi karti

ashi - kyon mujhe karna chahiye (staring at yuvi and scared at the same time)

yuvi looks away. he wants to tell the truth but was juss finding words

on the other end ranveer-tia had read the gossip colum

r: yuvi ne yeh thik nahi kiya. is pain se gujarna ki kisine app ko ek bet ke liye date kiye,bahut dard hota hai

t(tia understands that he was remberming abt the bet which she had told everyone): ranveer tia is really sorry, but vrinda ne hi tia ko kaha tha ki tum tia ko koi reveng ke lia date kar rahe ho aur phir usne tumhe ire ka ghar bhi dekha tha

ranveer feels a bit guilty as he knew that revenge thing is not totally wronge

r: tia app kyu pahli ki baat kar rahi hai. ab hum saath hai aur hum koi alag nahi karsakte.(kisses her hand)

t: tia really loves u & hugs him

hugging her back ranveer: tia hum bhi app se bahut pyar karte hai

arjun was seeing all this & was depressed

arjun (to himself): revenge???