Single Line Remix story - Page 13

Originally posted by: krismittal

well u r right samiya.if there is only one line per post many more of us can get a chance to show our imagination.

well very few people were cont &so all of us started increasing the size of part

well if u dont like we ( atleast i ) will stop it

sorry for posting long parts

esha

Originally posted by: esha oberoi

hey no esha it's not that .u can write long post .i just wrote what remix lover wrote . i am sorry .u can write long posts. esha can u please cont. the uv-aashi part PLEASE.if u are online could u write something right now

Thanks in advance because i know u will neversay no (to me atleast)

well very few people were cont &so all of us started increasing the size of part

well if u dont like we ( atleast i ) will stop it

sorry for posting long parts

esha

TIA -RANVEER

T: papa..tia cant celebrate her bday in new york...tia wants to be here for her bday (she looks at ranveer with a sad expression on her face)...papa tia wants to celebrate her bday here...with ranveer..please papa..please

Sumeet realises that tia will be really unhappy if he takes her to new york and she is not able to celebrate here bday with ranveer...he is trying to be extra attentive to her feeling as it is after hearing her cry on the phone

R: sir....kya hum tia ka bday yahin nahi celebrate kar sakte...please

after listening to ranveer as well sumeets mind is made up

S: ok ranveer...tia hum tumhara bday yahi mana yenge....abhi toh meri princess happy hai na

Tia hugs sumeet as says yes

and then smiles at ranveer...ranveer is totally happy after hearing this...but pallavi isnt...her plans flopped...

P: sumeet ..kyu na ranveer bhi hume new york main join karle..phir toh thik hai na

S: ...ha......

Tia looks at ranveer...sadly..she doesnt know how to solve this one...luckily ranveer too knows abt soniya aunty helping with the bday

R: sir...woh hum nahi aa sakte new york...hum aapse yeh nahi le saakte...please sir

Sumeet knows how self respecting ranveer is...so he knows that ranveer wont accept the invitation

S: ranveer ..mujhe paat hai..dont worry..pallavi..its ok...hum meri princess ka bday yahi manayenge

tia is exhuberant after hearing this...

yuvi -aashi

after talking with yuvi soniya lefts the room.

sid to uv : cool down man, ab to soniya aunti bhi tumhari help kar rahi hai

uv:nahi sid, maine aashi ko hurt kiya hai, she will never forget me for this.

in the meantime soniya goes to aashi room.aashi was alone and was weeping.

s: mummum, stop crying shona sab theek ho jayenga

a:kuch theek nahi hoga mum aur aap yaha kyo aayi hai

a:jaroor taunt karne aayi hai ki maine mana kiya tha phir bhi tum nahi maani

s:nahi shona balki tumne sahi faisla liya tha.yuvi is a nice guy.

a:NO he is not.vo to only bet jeetne ke liye mujhe use kar raha tha.i was crazy abt him.but i will teach him a lesson.

s:nahi shona vo tumse sachmuch pyar karta hai.

aashi is surprised by listening this

first of all guys this is the first time I am attempting to write a story !!! plzzzz bear it and dont throw any tomatoes or rotten eggs on me !!! sorry coz its quite long !!!!

ASHI _YUVI

sonia tries to speak to aashi but ashi is reluctant to speak about the matter .But Sonia doesn't give up !! She asks MP and vrinda to leave them alone for a while
Sonia : mumum listen to me sweetheart !!
ashi : kyaa listen mama ?? us yuvi ne mere saath aisa kyun kiya ? aur main uske jaal main phass gayi ! u see mama maine kaha tha naa koi mere se love nahin karega !!
sonia : mumum.......shona ......
ashi : mama aapne kaha ki mere life main bhi koi special someone aayega ....par kab ?why do I make such blunders always ?? main kyaa itne badi duh-uh hoon ?? (and starts sobbing )
Sonia :beta aise nahin kehte !!!tumne koi galti nahin ki bas ek choti si misunderstanding hain !!
ashi : misunderstanding ????? mama upke brains ud gaye hain kyaa ?? us yuvi ne mere saath game khela aur aap.....
Sonia:ashi ,yuvi ne tumse sach bhi toh kahaa na ?? agar woh chahata to tumhe phir se jhooth bol sakta tha ,par usne tumhe sach to kaha .....
Ashi :bas ab yahi hona baaki tha !!! mama aap us wacko ka saath kyun de rahi hain ? aap hamesha un log ka saath deti ho jinhe main bilkul stand nahi kar sakti !!pehle vo pari ,phir woh loser aditya aur ab yuvi !!
Sonia :par tum to keh rahi thi ki tum us se pyaar karti ho !!!
Ashi doen't know what to say !
Ashi : par mama ....
Sonia :listen mumum !promise me one thing !
AShi : ????
Sonia : jab tak meri baat puri nahi ho jaati tum beech main nahi bologi !
Ashi : par mama............OK !!
Sonia :listen beta ,tum uske liye strongly feel karti ho ,us se pyaar karti ho aur mujhe yeh lagta hain ki woh bhi tumhare liye same feel karta hain !! (ashi: whaaaaa???) woh chaahata to us waqt bhi tumse jhootbol sakta tha ,par usne aisa nahi kiya ,he preferred telling u the truth ,aur pyaar main hamesha sach bola jaata hain .
Ashi : par mama !!!
Sonia : aashi maine kyaa kaha tha .....tum beech main nahi bologi !! btw agar woh chahata to tumhe usi waqt dicth kar sakta tha jab woh bet jeet gaya tha ,par usne aisa nahi kiya ,he really llike u !
ashi : ho gaya ??? ab main bolu ??
sonia nods her head
ashi : mama usne mujhe sach bola coz he didn't have any choice !aur rahi baat dump karne ki ,the fact is usne muje dump kiya hain !usne mujhse jhoot bola !!mama can't u see he made me a joke !! u know what ab sab kyaa kahenge ? Anvesha the dumbo !mama mujhe lagne laga hain ki mere paas us timbo se bhi kam akal hain ! I feel so left out !!
sonia : meri baat manogi ?
Ashi: kyaa ?
Sonia : give him another chance .mujhe lagta hain tum donon ko yeh issue sort out kar leni chaahiye !
Ashi : talk to him !!! so that woh phir se mujhe hurt kar sake ??
Sonia : nahi !uske liye nahin tumhare liye ,so that u can sort out your feelings ! listen beta remember tia aur ranveer ke beech kyaa hua tha ? woh dono ek dusre see pyaar karte the par ek stupid si misunderstanding ki wajah se they both had to suffer so much pain ,but unhe ek mauka mila apne misunderstanding sort out karne ke liye ,par yeh zaroori nahi ki woh tum log ke saath bhi ho !!
Ashi : par mama main usse kyun baat karu ...
Sonia : for your sake shona ,for the wonderful time u ppl spent with each other uske liye ..
Ashi : alright mama !! par main usse khud baat nahi karungi ,but if he insists then ...
Sonia:(very happy hugs ashi ) that's my mamam !!!!
Ashi : mama kyaa kar rahi ho !!!! mere internal organs external ho jaayenge !!
Sonia : mamam !!!!!
AShi : AASSHHHHIIIII mom !!!!

hope u guys like it 😊