Single Line Remix story - Page 9

yuvi - ashi

vrinda opens the cupboard. yuvi and ashi comes out

ashi - yuvi juss get lost frm here now . arjun can cum here again.

yuvi - tum arjun se kabse darne lagi

ashi - duh -uh apne liye nahi tumhare liye , agar arjun ko pata chal gaya then u will be dead . now move!!

yuvi - tum pehle batao tum shed mein aa rahi ho ya nahi

ashi - hann aa rahi hoon plz go

ashi throws yuvi out of the room and closes the door. she turns and again there is a knock.

ashi thinks"god uv tum kab sudhroge" and she opens the door and she sees tia instead of yuvi

ashi- timbo tum yaha kya kar rahi ho. mera din itna achcha gaya tha or dreams bhi achche hi aane wale the but looking at u i guess i will have nitemares

tia- tia ko bhi tumse baat karne ka koi shauk nahi hai. tia bas ye inform karne aayi hai ki kal performance hai so we have to meet in next 10 min for the practise.

ashi - hey bhaggu ..........................

there yuvi gets a call and teia tellss him bout the practise. yuvi gets upset and wonders when he cud talk to ashi alone and can tell her bout the bet before latty pokes her nose .yuvi moves towards the shed.

hey guys now ashi-yuivi & ranveer -tias story has to b mixed as in last part of kudi420 which was a ashi-yuvi part included tia & band

so i feel it wud b better to mix it again & then again we can seperate

well it is just a suggestion

someone plz cont

esha

ashi-aman tum hume hamesha last minute pe hi kyun inform kate tumhe jaldi inform na karane ki buri bimari hai kya

tia-hahaha attemt to humour but sorry anvesha tumhara humour ke field nain hi koi skope nahi hai

Ashi: Timbo tum brains ke department mein zero ho na...tumhe itna bhi samaj nahi aata ke jaldi inform karne mein tumhara hi fayaada hai...afterall band mein rehearsal ki sabse jyaada zaroorat to tumhe hi hai na.

Tia: O shut up u red head.

Ashi: Ab practice shuru karein ya phir uske liye bhi Ms. Barbie Doll ki permission leni padegi.

guys just one problem here....tia and ranveer were in ranveer's room how can they go into the shed with ashi all of a sudden....we will have to cover the tia-ranveer story so that the room scene ends...and then ranveer has planned some surpirse for tia in the shed right....well lets have tia come in these first and bumo into ashi...only to find out that the band practice which wasnt happening is now happening...but then she n ashi have a fight as usuall and its a packup for the band practice..then we can continue that surprise for tia which ranveer planned...in their meeting place...which is some classroom...is that okay with everyone?????

for all those who r jusr readers....please particiapate and post some continuations..it will really help make the story more dynamic

thx

TIA-RANVEER

Continuing it from Ranveer's room....

R: Aapko aise haste hue dekh kar hume bohot acha lag raha hai

T: Ranveer, Tia is sorry Tia tabhi bohot upset hogi thi...did tia ruin ur mood...make u upset?

R: nahi Tia...bilkul nahi...hum toh worried the aapke liya...hum kabhi bhi aapko upset nahi dekha chahte hain

T: thanks ranveer for carring so much for tia

and tia hugs ranveer

While tia and ranveer r totally lost being with each other...all the talking wakes up aman....who is by now totally shocked to see them together

A: ranveer..tia...yeh kya ho raha hai...r u guy back together...yaha pe kya ho raha hey..yeh saab kaab hua

R: relax aman bana...haa aab tia aur hum saath hai...aur is baar hum koi misunderstandings or silly mistakes humko alag nahi karne denge

T: haan ranveer...aman ..tia is so happy today...everything is ok now

A: par yeh sab hua kaise

Aman is not one to give up...so tia and ranveer tell him the whole story

A: i am so happy ki tom dono saath main ho...par...pata nahi ab arjun jya karega

R: aman bana ...ap tension mat ligeye...woh kuch nahi karega...aur hum hain na..hum unhe handle karne jante hai...(he looks at tia..holding her hand)...aur phir tia hai na hamare saath (he kisses her hand gently)

A: oh on...is saab mein main batana to bhool he gaya

R: Kya bana

A: woh kaal subhe band practice hai

T: kya...ranveer ab tia ke surprise ka kya hoga

A: surprise

R: kuch nahi bana...(softly tells tia)..tia ek kaam karte hain...hum practice ke baad milte hain...hamari special jagh pe..ye thi hai?...aap aayengi na

Tia nods her head and smiles

T: Tia and u ...we will go there together...tia better go now..sweetdreams

R: hum aapko kaal subha meilenge

Tia goes away

well the suprise was in morning & band practise was at night if i m not mistaken

well some one plz cont

y dont u lamina cont as u r the only one who has cont & is online. atpresent i dont know what to type

as lamina said plz participate. not more possible then a line or two

waiting for it

esha

sorry u had already posted

plz post one more

esha

Trying to fuse the story now....we can separate it again after the band practice...

Its morning..Tia is totally happy ..looking forward to that surprise
Ranveer had planned...she gets ready and goes to the shed ...hoping that Ranveer is the first person she bumps into there....but surprise surprise..she goes in ..and finds ashi there...in a bad mood...being ruder than usual with tia

CONTINUING THE STORY NOW FROM WHERE ANVESHA RULZ LEFT IT

T: kya sirf hum dono hi practice karengi...without the boy?

A: hey bhaggu...woh koi mt everest pe nahi hai ke unhe aane main der ho jaye...they will be here soon...so let get ready

Just then Ranveer walks in...sees Tia and smiles...and they get lost in eachothers eyes as usual...ashi is totally surprised by all this

A: thakkur...yeh tum aur timbo ke bich phir se kya chal raha hai

R: woh ashi...hum donone saab sort kar liya hai...aab hum saath hai..aur bohot kush hai

A: hai bhaggu....well main jump karne ke baad...happy hai...thakkur what am i gonna do with u...have u lost ur brains somewhere with this timbo

T: hey ....anvesha...stop giving us ur opnions ok...band pratice kare..then Tia can go away from here...all this irritation is not good for tia's skin

Even before ashi can retort back..yuvi comes in

y: so can we start band practice

t: of course tia auhuja is always ready

y(to ashi): after this plz wait for me . i need to talk to u

ranveer spots this

r: well ye app dono ke beech mai kya chall rahe hai

y: nothing. we r toghter. seeing towards ashi

t: yuvi ,u have tias symphati as to to b with this red headed is worst experince of life.