Tere Bin-ay fic...updated!! Pt5..pg6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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TERE BIN

Hey guys..well my holidays are on right now... and i hav been reading all the wonderfull fic's around here...and i thot y not write one of my own...but b4 i start i hav 2 warn u ppl tat i hav 0 writing talent 😕 😕 and if u find my fic boring or smthin lyk tat den lemme knw.... 😳

so here goes:


Please god let me see her once at least… If she leaves and I am not able to confess my feelings for her then I truly will die... I can't loose her again

Thoughts flooded into his head as he remembered the past few events… he drifted back into his old days as he was waiting for the traffic to clear up…

I small grin crept onto his face as he remembered the most joyful and the most eventful days of his life… the time when he was the "Dude" of the school and she was the "Punk"…an unlikely pair 😳 … considering the fact that both of them were famous around Maurya High for attempting to murder each other.. 😆


well tat was it...n'd i just read it again..its sooo boring 😕
anyway plzzz do comment n lemme knw if i shud cont or not

Dolly 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its gr888888888888888888888888 dear 👏 👏 👏
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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but dolly,lemme tell u d part is 22222222222222 short 😕 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do write longer parts na 😳 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww thnx guys u ppl r soo encouraging.. 😳
i'll pst da nxt prt soon...
and i try to mke it longer..

Dolly 😊

thnx for the comments smriti and sayanti.. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Dolly,

awesome start 👏

n yesh, plz do write a bit long parts 😛 😉 😉

continue soon

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice fic dolly continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_gal8390

awww thnx guys u ppl r soo encouraging.. 😳
i'll pst da nxt prt soon...
and i try to mke it longer..

Dolly 😊

thnx for the comments smriti and sayanti.. 😳-u r welcome dolly😳😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start!!

please continue soon!!

try to make longer parts
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome start yaar......way to go...... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dolly dear, it's amazing. Lekin, your part is wayyyy too short!!! Don't stop writing though. Continue soon!

luv,
Komal

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