Tere Bin-ay fic...updated!! Pt5..pg6 - Page 2

Thnx a lot for the comments evry1...so encouraging 😳 😳
ok here's part2:

Remember that the story is in a flashback rite now...

so dude aaj raat hum jaa rahein hain naa? said sid, a goofy but still a very cute friend of Yuvraj dev or as wel all knew him Yuvi

Huh?? kahaan sid??where are we going tonight?? asked Yuvi while strumming his precious gutar
'Hey bhagoo!!!' imitated sid
"Please dude, kya vo wackho hi kafi nahin hai jo ab mujhe tumhari bhi HEY BHAGOO'Z tolerate karni padenge" blasted yuvi
"Ok, Ok, sorry dude" said a scared looking sid
Haan toh main keh raha tha...ki don't you
remember humein tia ki party mein jana hai aaj raat
ko",said sid
Oh ya rite....but vaise party hai kyon??
"Mujhse bade doofus toh tum ho yuvi, aaj tia ahuja ka B'day hai"
Oh crap, I haven't bought her anythin..tumne kuch khareeda??" asked yuvi
"Huh?? ab gift bhi lene honge"...shot back Sid
Come one you doofus lets go buy a gift for her..said Yuvi as he dragged sid out of their room

Meanwhile....

Y?? y mumma?? how could you do this to
me??..screamed the red head
"Kya hua mummum" said sonia ahuja (hint hint )
"Apne meri B'day party us timbet ke saath kyon rakhi hai, mein uske saath ek kamre mein zyaada der tak nahi ruk sakti and you want me to share my B'day party wid her"
Oh cumon shona...woh tumhari bhen hai (Sonia nd Sumeet r married) you have to try and get along with her"
"PUHLEESE...." imitated ashi

Sonia shot ashi a pleading look and out of options ashi finally agreed
Mujhe pata tha, jabse apne Makheeeja mera matlab hai Mr ahuja se shaadi ki hai, aap tabse bahut cheap ho gayi hain, do do party nahi rakhna chahte na" yelled ashi and stormed out of the room saying HEY BHAGOO!!
Leaving a grinning Sonia ' Yeh ashi bhi na" 😳

K guys i hav written a ridiculous part 😕 😕 😕 ...bt dis is all my pee brain could think of...sowee if i bored u guys... 😛
plzz do comment though

Dolly 😊

great part!!

continue soon!
please try to make the parts longer

only 2 comments... 😭

if u guys dnt realli lyk it den plzz tellme, i'll either discntue it or hurry up n finsih it off in nxt part..
😕
Dolly 😭

nice part dolly continue soon👏

hey again ppl... i hav gt part 3 ready i hpe its lng enuf..and evn if its nt tats Ok because it boring neway..

PART 3:

'Hey punk" boomed a voice across the corridors of Maurya High

And back came the reply"what do you want timbet? I have better things to do than waste my time with a pee brain like you"

'Oh shut up you loser, Tia to tumhe warn karne aayi hai" said an irritated Tia

'Bolo timbo mere paas faltoo time toh hai nahin isliye kripa karke jaldi bolo" said ashi

"Look ashi…." Began tia when suddenly her eyes fell on the other prey she was prying for and at the top of her voice she screamed out "YUVIIIIIIIIIIIIII"

A startled Yuvi turned around and found himself in front of tia and the reD head who he so intently loved but always hid his true feelings from.

'Ya, babes, tell me "said an unusually chirpy Yuvi

'Look Yuvraj Dev and anvesha Banarjee, Tia ke liye yeh party bhaut special hai, aur tia nahin chahti ki tum dono apne silly immature pranks and fights ke sath yeh party mere liye ruin kardo'…said tia

The anger and strength in her voice took both ashi and yuvi by surprise and without interrupting the quietly listened.

' Isliye tum dono ek doosre se door rahoge ge, aaj raat tum dono ek doosre ko avoid karoge and you know what don't even look at each other, GOT IT??...asked a fierce Tia

' Haan haan tImbo, but tum bhool rahi ho ki voh party meri bhi hai, aur mein yeh din is psycho loser ke saath baat karke yeh ladke nahin bitoongi' retorted Ashi.

'Shut up you wacko as if tumse koi waise bhi baat karma chahta hai" said Yuvi

"wateva loser"

Don't wateva me, varna

Varna?? Varna kya??Kya karloge tum Psycho??

And again started the usual fights, a frustrated tia said "Oh tia's God, help. Tia has given up on these two, bas tia ki party sambhal lena"

k guys tat waz it...i'm goin 2 be dne wid prt 4 shortly so tat wud be up soon..plzzz do commnt...evn if its criticism... 😉

Dolly 😊

hey dolly nice part
i like this timbo's dialogues
continue soon
luv
sonam

yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

me the first one to reply!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

nice part dolly looking forward to the party. continue soon👏

nice part dolly looking forward to the party. continue soon👏

😛 👏