Tere Bin-ay fic...updated!! Pt5..pg6 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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really really cute yaar....awesomeee...... 👏
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hey guys thanx a lot for all the lovely comments...

Part5:

"MAATE!!!!" screamed ahi

"kya hua ashi, mein isi kamrein ki doosre kone mein hi toh hoon, toh phir tum chilla kyon rahi ho? asked a bewildered vrinds, ashi's best friend

"arre maate, mere liye ek dree select kardo naa, i can't decide" said a confused looking ashi 😕 😕

ashi tum bhi naa ek dress nahi choose kar sakti" said vrinda while going through ashi's wardrobe

vrinda pulled out a gorgeous black dress

"arre tumhare pass itni sundar dress thi, toh kabhi dali kyon nahi??

" ohh...yeh dress toh mamma neh mujhe di thi, but mein yeh kahaan dalti? said ashi

Acha toh phir aaj tum yehi daalogi aur sonia aunty koh bhi bhaut acha lage ga agar tum yehi dress dalogi" said a content looking vrinda

"Theek hai maate vrindeshwari" said an agitated ashi

Meanwhile in tia's room

Angels

" yeah tia" came the reply

tumhe tia ki dress kaisi lagi" asked tia while showing her angels the beautifull blue designer dress

Wow tis, yeh dress toh bhaut pretty hai, it will look soo good on you" gushed mehar

Tumhe pata hai yeh blye ranveer ka fav colour hai" beamed tia. "Tia specially ranveer ko mind mein rakh ke yeh dress banviye hai"


"Oh how cute tia...tum dono toh bus ek doosre ke liye perfect ho" said our moti rolly, Pri

"Thanx angel"

Sometime later the part beagn, tia was extremely excited, she was standing at the front door with her angels and ranveer and was greeting all the guests

the party began soon after, everyone was present there, Yuvi, ranveer, tia and her angels, vrinda, sid, varun, sonia and summet and evryone else who was invited to the party, but sur[risingly ashi was no where to be seen and everyone was getting very impatient

"Yeh mummum kahaan reh gayi" said a worried looking sonia

Don't worry darling aah rahi ho gi" said sumeet assuringly

Then suddenly ashi walked in the party hall, all eyes diverted towards her and a creepy silence covered the room.
She was looking gorgeous, her black dress was complementing her and the red hair were truly making her look mesmerizing

every guy in the room was staring open mouthed towards ashi...but her eyes were just for the one guy whom she truly luved, the one guy who could provoke a sense of love and affection in her, Yuvraj Dev.

She saw him staring at her, he could not take her eyes of her and she could not stop herself from blushing.

"Wow, mummum tum toh bahut sunadr lag rahi ho meine umhe kitini baar kaha hai ki ladkiyon walwe kapde dala karo, tum unmein bahut pretty lagti ho"said an extremely happy looking sonia

"Oh cummon mumma"

"Haan ashi, sub tumhe hi dekh rahein hai" said vrinda

"Hey bhagoo maate tum bhi" said an embarassed ashi

"avha bhai chalo chalke cake katlein sub intezaar kar rahein hai" said sumeet

and they all walked towards the centre table which held the most beautifull looking chocolate cake, while Yuvi was still gaaping at ashi

"Haapy birthday to you" chanted the room as ashi and tia cut the cake together.
Then ashi walked towards sumeet and tia walked towards sonia with a piece of cake in their hands.

After their parents it was their best freinds turn, they all came one by one and stuffed a peice of cake in their mouths.

When everyone was done, ranveer walked towards tia and yuvi walked towards ashi, tia was looking dreamily towards ranveer while ashi was totally unaware that yuvi was coming to her.

"Happy B'day wacko" said Yuvi

And before ashi could register what was happening she found herself in a tight embrace with yuvi. Her brain told her to push him away but she could not bring herself to do it, she realised that today she just wanted to be in his arms for a while, both of them let go of their hesitations and embraced each other.

He planted a small kiss oh her cheek, which made ashi blush like a beetroot, and then they both parted

"Ashi.....woh main" began Yuvi

"Hye kida" interrupted sonia and sumeet. Hum dono ko aaj raat ki flight se london jaan hai, business ke silsiley mein, so hum done ab airport jaa rahein hai, so all you enjoy the party and take care" said sonia

"Ok, mumma, bye and you lso take care"
"Chalo ab tia se bhi mil aayein" said summet as they waved goodbye to yuvi and ashi

as they were left alone again yuvi said"ashi ......mein tumse"

"Hey anvesha" came a familiar voice

Yuvi and asho both turned around and yuvi realised that it was the same guy who was talking about ashi with his friends this morning, Rohit

"Hi...tum?" asked ashi hesitaty

mein rohit, tia ka fiend, ussi ne ujhe party mein invite kiys hai, mein vaise maurya mein tumhara senior hoon

"Oh k, said ashi" while yuvi eyed up rohit angrily for disturbing them

"Well i was wondering if i could have the pleasure of dancing with you" asked rohit

Ashi: Woh mein...umm mein...hesitated ashi while she looked at yuvi

Rohit slightly dragged ashi to the dance floor, while yuvi was left dumbfounded.

Koi fariyaad tere dil mein...
choopi ho jaise...
Tune aankhon se koi baat kahi ho jaise
played while ashi and rohit danced and yuvi and ashi stared at each other

ashi tried to excuse herself from him, but rohit didn't let go instead his grip oh her tightened. Defensively ashi told him to back off but he wasnt listening. she agitately tried to push him away but she couldn't free herself. In an instant she found herslef being pulled away from rohit by none other than Yuvi..

"She said she doesnt wanna dance" said yuvi
"samajh nahi aaya kya" yuvi went on in his angry tone

Without waiting for any replies or explaination, Yuvi dragged ashi away with him

Are yo nuts wacko, tum us loser ke saath kyon dance kar rahi thi" saod Yuvi in an angry voice

Come on Yuvi tumme dekha na...mein uske saath dance nahi karna chahti thi, but he dragged me" replied ashi

"Par tum mere saath toh dance karogi naa" yuvi slowly pulled out his hand"can i have this dance anvesha ray"

ashi gave in to her emotions and the found herslef on the dance floor agian but this time with yuvi. Without uttering even a single word they started into each others eyes...while love station played

When the came back to earth they realsied that half the room was already empty and the other half were just about to leave

Ashi parteed from Yuvi and started to walk towards the door when yuvi suddenly held her hand

"Not today ashi, aaj mein tumhe sab bataa kar rahoonga" said yuvi

Ashi: Lekin Yuvi??

He shushed her by placing his finger on her lips

Yuvi: Chalo mere saath

Yuvi held ashi's hand and took her to the infamous shed

Ashi: Yuvi tum itni raat ko yaah kyon aaye ho??

Yuvi: Kyonki mein tumhe aaj kuch bataan chahta hoon aur dena bhi

Yuvi took a step towards ashi and reflexively ashi took a step back. yuvi kept on walking towards her unti ashi hit a wall.

He got closer and clser until he was just inches away from her. He held her by her waist and said Anvesha banarjee ray, Yuvraj dev is crazy about you, I'm so much in love with you that it hurts. It made me so angry and jealous when you were with rohit tonight" whispered Yuvi

he slowly got even more closer to her and found ashi slighlty tugging hiim towards her and within seconds he was in a passionate kiss with her. Her hands wrapped around his neck, his hands wrapped around her waist. The way she was playing with his curls made him fall for her even more and more

Half-heartedly when both parted, ashi had tears welled up in her eyes

ASHI:Psycho, itni si baat kehne mein itna time laga diya

He grineed at her and pulled out the small velvet box

Yuvi: Happy bday sweetheart

Ashi excitedly opened the box and found the most beautiful looking ring in there

She smile at yuvi and swiftly hugged him and once agin yuvi and ashi were in a tight embarce

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phewwwww that was loooooooooong....but i had to write it all or it woudn't have made sense

SO if you ppl bother reading the loooooong part then plzzz do comment
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
awesome part please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dolly,gr8 part nd tooooooooooooo long 😳 plz cont fast.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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DOLLY GREAT PART IT IS ROCKING PART 👏CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww thnx a lot for all da lovely comments guys... 😳 😊 😊
i'll try n'd post soon...bt myte tke sum time...

Dolly 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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okay,will be waiting 😳 😃

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