Tere Bin-ay fic...updated!! Pt5..pg6 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nd plz dun ever think ki d parts r boring,k?? 🤢 every part is rocking 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
the parts are totally rocking Dolly 👏

continue sooonnn 😉

luking forward 4 da party

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx a lot guys 😳 😳 i'm just nearly dne wid prt4...will post soon

Dolly 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
wow! awesome Im so sorry that I couldnt reply soon.
and who said that your writing skills are 0 there awesome.keep writting .waiting for the next parts .
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
great part!!
it was not boring at all!!
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys...thnx a lot for all da comments...

part 4:

After that little fight with Ashi, Yuvi walked aimlessly through the corridors of Maurya.

Everyone who was anyone was invited to the grand party, he heard girls jealously talk about tia and he heard guys envy ranveer some even said that what did a hot chick like tia ahuja see in a guy like ranveer sisodia.

They all could whine and hope that tia and ranveer separated, but yuvi knew for sure that there was nothing that could separate timbo from his camel not after what all they had been through. The love that they had for each other was clearly evident in their eyes and nothing and no one could separate them.

'Man she's Hot'

'Oh no not another one of tia's admirers'
thought yuvi as he heard a group of guys talking.


'What?, came the reply from another guy…'You think ki who red heard Hot hai, you have seriously lost your mind Rohit'

Yuvi stopped in his path, he felt as if he had been suddenly struk by lightning,

'Red head??' Yuvi thought…'there is only one read head in this whole school and that's ashi' so he stopped to hear more

'Yea man anvesha banarjee is so Hot, tumne uske laal baal nahi dekhe kya they are so mesmerising, uska attitude is so captivating' retorted rohit.

Yuvi felt his fist for he could sense he was getting angry, but he could not tell why though. If guys were talking about her then so be it why should I care

'Because you love her you idiot" came a voice

Yuvi looked startled, he realised that a mirror image of him was standing in front of him.

Aise kya dekh rahe ho…sach hi toh keh raha hoon. You love her and tumhe jealousy ho rahi hai ki abh koi aur use lyk karta hai.

Wateva dude..main us wascko to layk nahi karta' said Yuvi

Watever you say…but as ashi would have said to you, follow your heart yuvraj dev..apne dil ki suno..apne true feelings ko apne andhar kyon dabba rahe ho. Why are you doing thing to yourself?

"Kyonki…." Began yuvi

"Banaa …aap thik toh hain" asked a concerned ranveer

"Main bilkul theek hoon bro" said Yuvi

"agar aap thik hain toh is deewar se kyon baat kar rahein the" asked ranveer with true worry in his voice

"Who main…umm…kuch nahi" said Yuvi. SO you all set for tia's B'day?? Tumne uske liye gift kya khareeda?

Ranveer: (blushingly) who humne tia ke saath a romantic dinner plan kia hai, party khatam hone ke naad hum dono beach par jayenge..wahan miane saare arrangements kar rakhe hian, food, music, candelights…said ranveer dreamily

"ooooooooo, very good ranveer"

'acha yeh bataiye…aapne ashi ke liye kuch liya?

No!! Y?? asked Yuvi

"Kyonki aaj aski ka bhi B'day hai aur party ek saath hai toh apne uske liye kuch nahi liya" asked a startled ranveer

"No bro…mein tia ki B'day party mein jaa rahaa hoon naki us loser ki" said Yuvi half heartedly

"Lekin banaa…." Started ranveer

"Ranveer sisodia" and again tia's voice boomed through the corridors and without wasting much time ranveer said bye to Yuvi and dawdled towards his sweetheart 😳 😳

"ab mein tumhe kaise baton ranveer, ashi ka gift toh maine kitne haftoon pehle hi khareed liya tha' slowly Yuvi pulled out a small velvet box which had a cute ribbon tied around it

"Bas pata nahin ki kabhi de bhi paoonga ki nahin" said yuvi as he stared down at the gift.


well thats it...plzzz.do comment

Dolly 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part dolly continue soon👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 part re 👏
plz cont asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
awesum part tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just luvd the way u wrote this part
👏

continue soon
luv
sonam 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome it was so nice especially the last part
where yuvi says 👏 👏 👏
"ab mein tumhe kaise baton ranveer, ashi ka gift toh maine kitne haftoon pehle hi khareed liya tha' slowly Yuvi pulled out a small velvet box which had a cute ribbon tied around it
how sweet of him 😉

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