Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55

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HI !!!

Guys Iam back and as promised with a new T-R fic .

UNTOUCHED

PART 1

Today she turned fifteen . All all friends had gathered for her birthday party except her best friend . She tried searching for her but in vain . After the party when she was walking in the corridor she heard a compresed cry . On turning around she saw her best friend crying as well as munching a piece of chocolate at the same time . On seeing her , her friend hugged her and burst in tears . All she could mumble from her mouth was "TIA"

Tia --- (hugging her back) Haan Pri ..Tia ko batavo …Kya hua tumhe ??? Tum ro kyon rahi ho ???

Pri --- Tia woh..woh….Aaj mere mom-dad ka divource ho gaya . Aur mom ko meri custody mili hain . Mein dad se sirf vacations aur weekends pe mil sakti hoon . Apne Dad se milne ke time ab mujhe rules follow karne honge .(pausing) Tia pata nahi sab kuch kaise hua . Mein yeh sab tolerate nahi kar sakti.

Tia --- Pri control yourself . Tia samajhti hain tumhare pain ko . Pri …tum atleast bari bari mein hi sahi apne Mom – Dad se mil to sakti ho . Par Tia ko toh apne Mom ke barein mein kuch bhi pata nahi.

Pri kept hugging her and cried until all her tears dried . Seeing Pri Tia remembered all the times when she was a witness to her parents' fight . She never saw them happy together , they just couldn't see each other eye to eye . But both loved her and she was the only reason that they were living together ,otherwise they would have splitted way back .

And one day when she came back from school eager to break the news that she came first ,she was shocked at what she saw ------ her Mamma had slapped her father . She kept wondeing how could her Mamma do that to her Pappa who is so sweet , loving and caring. And the next day , her whole world came crashing down when she learnt that her Mamma had left her . That moment she hated her ..she hated her more than anything.

It was only later that she came to know that the reason for her Mamma leaving her was her father's unfaithfulness. He was having an affair with an actress – she didn't know who ??

She devepoed a bitter feeling for her Pappa which faded off with time since he loved her more than anything . He took care of her like a princess , never left her side and was very concerned and possessive about her . He even didn't marry that actress for her happiness . At least he was far better than her Mamma who left her when she needed her the most , without even turning back later .

She didn't know whether her Pappa still dated that actress ------- she was not bothered as long as she was not in their lives .

She had seen lot of broken marriages after that which made her loss trust in relationships , love and also in the institution of marriage.

And today with what happened with Pri she made a resolve ------ a resolve never to enter into relationships and never to get married . She decided she would remain UNTOUCHED all her life ----- untouched by feelings , untouched by affection , untouched by attraction , untouched by love , untouched by any man .

But will a prince charming enter her life , draw her towards him and make her forget about her resolve ---------- Let's wait and watch .

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honey_13 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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1st part posted .

I know it's a bit boring but plz do comment
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Posted: 19 years ago
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7 views not a single reply 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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The staring was gr888...the story seems to be differrent
so honey pls cont soon...i'll be waiting to read the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks Aditi 😛 😛
U r the only one who replied.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yiekkkkkkkexxxxxxxxxxx tune sach mooch likh dala
maine toh kabhi soocha hi nahin tha that u would rite it tune meri dosti ki laj rakhi im proud of u 😳 and han luv ya
and kis ediot ne kaha that the part was boring
it rocked
👏

plzzzzzzz jaldi likhna pokey
luv ya ]
ritz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanx Ritz , fianlly u replied
chooo sweet of you 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey reshmi just read ur new fic.it's mindblowing.loved it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: honey_13

Thanx Ritz , fianlly u replied
chooo sweet of you 😛 😛 😛

hey no thnakx ahhaann but yah main tujhpe bohot greatful hoon e tune likhha hain thanjkx a lot swety 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome start Reshmi 👏

continue soon

cant wait to knw wht happens next 😳

Divz

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