Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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greatttt start reshmi....... 👏

your fic seems to be really interesting yaar...... 😊 😊 😊

go ahead..... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kya start hai yaar.luvd it re.
plzz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
wowww what a start yar... awesome.. 👏 😃

plezzz post ur 2nd fic sooon ....
u have done a gr8 job 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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GRRRR8888888888888888888888888888 START PUHLEASE CONT.IT 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thnx a lot Aditi , Ritz , Rimli , Rhea , Divya , Vanu , Ranv_rules , Eye catcher and RTAY for ur sweet comments. 😛 😛 😛

I will continue today itself
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Please continue I just read the first page and it is awesome
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanx dancediva I'll continue within half an hour
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey reshmi i m very happy thatu came back wid a new fic 😃 😃
ur fic really rox.
just luved this fic.
plz cont fast,

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 2


After 3 years they both were standing outside Maurya College scared and totally clueless



Pri --- Tia aaj mujhe bohot darr lag raha hain . Aaj college mein hamara first day hain aur agar kisine hamare saath ragging ki toh ?? Tumne movies mein dekha hain na ragging kitna dangerous ho sakta hain . 🤢😕


Tia --- (who was equally scared but was not showing that ) Pri ab tum mujhe bhi dara rahi ho . Agar tum itna worry karogi toh tumhe dark circles ho jayengi . Ab chalo (she drags her inside)



Inside the college premises , there were so many confused faces around . Amongst those confused faces Tia noticed a boy with long curly hair who seemed pretty relaxed and he was the only one around without a question mark on his face .



Tia --- Pri ..Tia ko lagta hain ki isse pata hoga ki hamara room kaha hain . Yeh senior lagta hain .

Pri --- Achha ..Toh chalkar usse pooch lete hain . Waise woh kitna cute hain na ??? 😳

Tia --- Pri !!!! 😡

Pri --- Okay ..Okay …(then going near the boy) Excuse me ! Hi …Iam Pri aur yeh meri friend Tia hain ….(and then she kept looking at him ) 😳

Hi ------ he replied Iam Yuvraj Dev , Yashwant Dev ka beta ….unka naam toh tumne suna hi hoga 😛

Tia --- (realizing that Pri is lost interrupts) Kya tum First Year student ho ya senior ho

Yuvi --- (looking at Tia) Wowww…. I like that , I should say you are too fast man . 😆

Tia --- (with a confused look) What ???? 😕

Yuvi --- (with attitude) Tumne class isliye poocha na taki dheere -dheere tum mere kareeb aa sako aur phir mujhe date ke liye pooch sako , sabhi ladkiyan aisa hi karti hain . Lekin tumhe itna hardwork karni ki koi zaroorat nahi , mein ready hoon -------- (and then leaning towards her ) anything for a beautiful girl like you . 😆

Tia is shocked and Pri starts giggling at this

Tia --- (giving Pri a cold look and then turning to Yuvi ) Look …tumne Tia ko misunderstand kiya hain . Tia sirf yeh janna chahti thi ki tum senior ho ya nahi . Kyunki agar tum senior ho toh tum bata sakte ho ki Tia ka room kaha hain ??

Yuvi --- (feeling a bit let down that a girl didn't pay attention to Yuvraj Dev ) 🤢Oh !!!!! Sure ……Why not ???? (then normally) 😛Waise mein bhi First Year mein hoon , lekin mein Maurya school ka student reh chukka hoon , isliye mujhe is college ke barein mein bhi poori information hain . Tumhara room no. kya hain???

Pri --- (with a sweet look) Room no. 107 😛


Yuvi --- Yeh room first floor mein hain , waha se pehle right jaana then left --- jo last room hain wohi tumhara room hain ..Okay

Pri and Tia --- Thank you so much 😛

And they both leave with their luggage . After they enter their room Tia slumps into the bed since she was very tired and Pri goes to the bathroom to freshen up . And Pri screams at what she sees in front of her and Tia gets up with a jolt 🤢🤢

What did Pri see ------- Just wait and watch.

Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2 posted

Guys plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do comment on this part . Otherwise I won't come to know if anyone is reading or not .Negative comments will also do.

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