Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 5

awesomeeeeee part reshmi 👏
plz cont asap.

mind blowing fic reshmi.today i read all thr 3 parts.i always luved ur fic as they ar really diff.
this part was awesome esp varun talking abt ran 'hum'.that was very funny. 👏 cont soon.

Thanx a lot Karol 😛 😛 😛

And welcome back after so many days.

tis was sweet & cute just as TIA & RANVEER I JUST LOVE IT 👏
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hey reshmi sorry 4 late reply.
this part is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute.loved it. 👏

hey reshmi plz cont soon.

titli

PART 4

Tia and Pri enter their room

Tia --- Ewwwwwwwww….how tacky . Yeh room hain ya fish market . Yahan sab kuch kitna disorganized hain . Tia yaha kaise rahegi ??? 🤢

"Toh mat raho na . Tumhe kisine gunpoint pe rakhke yeh toh nahi kaha hain ki tumhe yaha rehna hi hain " --- said a girl with red hair ( U guessed it right it's Aashi ) 😆

Tia --- Excuse me ….Tia ne tumse koi opinion nahi mangi hain , aur waise tum ho kaun aur Tia ke room mein kya kar rahi ho ??? 😕

Aashi --- Tumhara room ….Kya tum apna brains apne ghar bhoolkar aayi ho ….yeh tumhara room nahi hain yeh mera room hain …..Anvesha Ray Banerjee ka …got it ….BTW yeh Tia kaun hain . 😆

Tia --- (getting furious) How rude , Tia tumhare saamne khadi hain aur tum pooch rahi ho ki Tia kaun hain 😡

Aashi --- Hey Bhaggu …so much confusion …ab toh mein sure hoon ki tum apna brains bhoolkar nahi aayi , tumhara toh brains hain hi nahi 😡

Tia --- You…you…red punk ….tumhari himmat kaise hui Tia se iss tarah baat karni ki …………. Yeh Tia ka rom hain aur Tia isse humans ke rehne layak jaroor banayegi ….understood 😡

Aashi --- (getting agitated) Timblett , tumhe ek baar mein samajh mein nahi aata ki yeh mera room hain . 😡

Tia -- Tia ne bhi kaha na ki yeh Tia ka room hain …you ...you.....alien…….. 😡

They both start fighting but Vrinda and Pri controls them or rather manages to control them by separating them .

Vrinda --- Tum dono bekaar mein fight kar rahe ho ….yeh tum dono ka room hain . Hum charo roommates hain …aur ab toh humein mil-julkar saath -saath rehna hain poore saal ke liye . 😆

Aashi and Tia --- Kya ??? 🤢😕

Vrinda --- Haan guys ….isliye ab tum dono dosti kar lo ………….. 😆

Aashi and Tia --- (together) What ???? No ways …. 😡

Tia --- Oh Tia's God …………yeh Tia ke saath kya ho raha hain ….itna stress …Tia yeh sab kaise handle karegi (fainting kinda expression) Pri …oxygen ..oxygen 😆

Meanwhile when Ranveer came back to his room after helping Tia and Pri , he bumped into Sid

Ranveer --- (in a bugged tone) Bana …kabhi toh ladkiyo ke alawa kuch aur bhi socha kijiye . Hamesha ladkiyo ke khayal mein kahi na kahi takrate rehte hain . 😕

Sid --- Dude …iss college mein chicks ke siwa kuch aur interesting hain kya ??? Wahi boring lectures , boring professors , boring food in canteen and maha - boring rules 😆

.Ranveer --- Bana please ab phir se shuru mat kijiye …. 😡

Varun --- Waise Ranveer …..aaj tum bhi kissi ladki ke barein mein soch rahe the … right 😃

Ranveer --- (stammering) Bana ..yeh aap kya keh rahe hain…...aisa kuch bhi nahi tha.. 😕

Sid --- (who was listening got up in excitement) Ladki …konsi ladki…Kya college mein koi nayi chick aayi hain ??? 😆😉

Ranveer --- (in exasperation) Bana …aap kabhi nahi sudhrenge ………😕

"Kaun nahi sudhrega bhai " questioned Yuvi entering the room .

Ranveer --- (seeing Yuvi) Bana aaj toh aapne hadhh hi kar di . Aapne unn bechari ladkiyo ke saath acchha nahi kiya . 😕

Sid --- (getting anxious) Kyon ???? Yuvi ne aisa kya kiya ??? 😕

Varun tells Sid everything

Yuvi --- And Sid …I swear usme se jo patli ladki thi na ….she was damm hot.. 😳

Sid --- Really (then kneeling down and holding Yuvi's hand) mujhe usse introduce karao na 😳

Varun --- Sorry Sid , she is taken . Hamare Ranveer ki nazar us par pad chuki hain , aaj Ranveer ki eyes uss par se hat hi nahi rahi thi .(and then in a teasing tone) Aur phir Ranveer ne kitne interest se uski help bhi ki thi .

Ranveer --- (getting irritated) Bana ..please ..aap apne false imagination se iss tarah ki stories create mat kijiye. Aur humne sirf Sir ke kehne pe unki help ki thi ….samjhe 😡

Varun --- (realizing that Ranveer is getting upset ) Sorry ..Sorry ..Ranveer ……pata nahi kyun par tum dono ko saath dekhkar mujhe laga ki tum dono ke beech koi connection hain … 😃

Ranveer --- Bana !!!! 😡

Sid --- Ab jab Ranveer usme interested nahi hain …toh mein uske saath apna luck try kar sakta hoon ………Wowwwwwwww………I am so excited to meet her. 😆



Ranveer was not happy at Sid's reactions and he knew that he had lied to Varun . He did feel some thing for Tia -------- something very different , something that he hasn't felt for anyone before . But he didn't know what ??? But there was an urge in him to meet her again , to talk to her again and to see her smile - which made him forget everything .

But will he realize his true feelings for Tia …………… Wait for the next chapter to know that .

another awesome part Reshmi 👏

ur fanfic is jus like the real Remix 👏

wohi Tia-Ashi ke fightz,
Sid crazy behind gals..
n Yuvi wid his pranks 👏

too gud Reshmi

continue soon

Divz

Wow that was so awesome yaar jaldi se cont karo

Thanx Salina (got ur name) 😛 😛 😛