Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 4

Originally posted by: divya_92

awesome part Reshmi 👏

loved dis part 😳 😳 😳

but i wonder wht did Pri really c 😕

continue soon

Divz

PART 3

When Pri was about to enter the bathroom , the door opened and out came a boy wrapped in a towel . Since it was something least expected , Pri couldn't comprehend anything and she stepped back with a scream .On hearing that , Tia got up in fright only to find another boy on the other side of the bed with a startled , comfused and blank expression on his face . 😕

Tia --- (getting up from the bed all of a sudden) Tum kaun ho ?? Tum Tia ke room mein kya kar rahe ho ?? 😕

The boy just kept staring at her drowning himself in her beautiful questioning eyes , as if there was no one else around them . The whole world came to a halt for him that one moment. 😳

Tia --- ( seeing that he is not responding got a bit scared) Tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho ???



This brought him out of his gaze ,but before he could answer anything they were interrupted by a voice which came from the door . 😕


" What 's all this "


Both looked towards the door only to find Mr .Dixit , the vice -principal of Maurya standing there . Mr. Dixit was a very biased man who believed that every rich student is a spoilt brat .. He recognized Tia at once . He had met her when she came with her father for admission . ….( after all who could forget Sumeet Ahuja's daughter )


Mr Dixit --- Miss Tia Ahuja Right 🤢

Tia ---(who was now shivering) Ji Sir 😕

Mr Dixit --- Aaj tumne yeh saabit kar diya ki sabhi ameer baap ke bacche bigde hue hote hain . Fist day mein agar tum boys room mein enter karne ka guts dikha sakti ho toh , aage chalke toh tum mere sarr pe baithke dholak bajavogi. Hmmmm …tumhara kuch karna hi hoga. 😡

Tia --- (totally scared) Sir …woh…woh ..Tia ko bataya gaya tha ki yeh Tia ka room hain 😕

Mr Dixit --- Tumne kya mujhe bevakoof samajh rakha hain ??? 😡

"Sir humein lagta hain ki yeh sahi keh rahi hain" the boy on the bed spoke up getting up simultaneously .

And the other boy came dressed up in the meanwhile

Mr Dixit --- Ranveer …….tum hamare school ke sabse bright student reh chuke ho aur college mein bhi hume tumse bohot expectations hain . Mein tumhe acchhi tarah jaanta hoon Isliye tumhare kamre mein ladki ko dekhkar bhi maine tumhe kuch nahi kaha . Lekin tum inn rich spoilt kids ko nahi jaante . Agar sahi waqt par dose nahi diya gaya , toh haath se nikal jayenge .

Ranveer --- Sir yeh dono freshers hain aur hume lagta hain ki inke saath kisi ne sharaarat ki hain . Dekhiye door par se room no. gayab hain

Pri --- (coming into action since Tia was standing there totally blank without any response) Haan Sir , kissi Yuvraj Dev ne hume room ka direction bataya tha

Mr Dixit --- Yeh Yuvi bhi na…one more rich spoilt kid . Woh kabhi nahi sudhrega . Kam se kam uske politician dad ke rehte toh nahi . Har mamle mein taang adane aa jate hain 😡.(then pausing a bit) Ranveer tum inn girls ko apne room tak pohoncha dena

Ranveer --- Thik hain …Sir 😛

Pri --- Thanks Ranveer …tumne toh hume bacha hi liya 😛

Ranveer --- Please thanks mat kahiye . Hum toh aapke chehre ke expressions dekhkar hi samajh gaye the ki kissi ne aapke saath prank play kiya hain .Waise humara naam toh aap jaan hi gayi , yeh Varun hain hamara roommate .

Varun --- (in an awkard manner since she had seen him half naked ) Hi !!!! 😆

Pri --- (in a fun mood) Hi Varun ……waise tum shirtless zyada cute lagte ho 😆( Varun was put to shame by her statement and seeing the weido type of expression on his face both Pri and Tia burst out laughing and then controlling herself ) BTW mein Priyanka hoon aur yeh

Ranveer --- (interrupting her ) Tia hain …Right

Tia --- Tumne Tia ka naam kaise recognize kiya

Ranveer --- Woh aapne baat karte time apna naam liya tha.

Tia --- Ohhh..

Ranveer --- Chaliye hum aapko apna kamra dikhate hain

Tia --- Kya Varun bhi chal raha hain

Ranveer --- Kyon ??? 😕

Varun --- (speaking in between ) Tia ..Ranveer ki Hindi bohot kharab hain . Who aisa hi baat karta hain …Hum hain na…hum sab sambhal lenge …etc etc…Sirf Hindi ke wajah se school mein yeh 2nd aata tha aur mein 1st . Paper mein jaha "mein" likhna chahiye waha "hum" likhke aata tha .

Ranveer --- Bana !!! ab bas bhi kijiye 😡

Tia giggled at this . And Ranveer was once again drawn to her ---- He thought to himself "how beautiful she is --- like a dream , is she really standing in front of him or is she just an illusion , how could someone be so beautiful " . For the first time in his entire life Ranveer noticed a girl ---------- and that too so minutely . 😳😳


Ranveer was a very focused guy from a middle class family . His only aim in life was to complete his studies , reach a good position in life so that he can give a decent life to his mother and sister -Vasudha .He never paid attention to girls eventhough many girls were attracted towards his good looks and charisma . He was a very popular guy desired by many girls , always ready to help his friends and also a favourite amongst teachers .


But will he be able to stay away from Tia and maintain his focus on studies after what he felt for Tia during that moment ----was it just attraction or something more than that .

Well for that u need to wait for the next part.

i would have been the first one to post my cxomments if t wasnt for my stupid erratic internet....😭

any ways this pt)👏make it million times)👏

i wish lamina was here to read your fic.... she would have loved it just as much

....when lamina ended her fic i felt so bad but honestly honey you have filled the void ....

i love ilove d this part esp ranvir meeting tia for the first time.....awesome words fail me... my heart is filled with joy.... i wish i could express i my feelings in a better way...👏