if remix wouldn’t have ended.pg37

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picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: iloveashi
rocking,mindblowing,ultra sufi i am short of words it is brillant natsa please please continue soon. You are too good in romantic parts too (see it was out of this world)👏

thanx but still me not talkin 2 u😡😭😭

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vanu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#202

greatttttttt yaar ...awesome .......i read this whole fic for the first time n i must say that it is simply rocking yaar..... 👏 👏 👏

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picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: vanu
greatttttttt yaar ...awesome .......i read this whole fic for the first time n i must say that it is simply rocking yaar..... 👏 👏 👏

thanku!

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Sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: picadally
thanku sweety but answer wat pm?😕

Dhu-uh tune abhi tak mere msg ka reply nahi diya hai so reply kar & cont ur fic soon

Edited by sweetyvidya - 18 years ago

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picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: sweetyvidya
Dhu-uh tune abhi tak mere msg ka reply nahi diya hai so reply kar & cont ur fic soon

arre ive not got ny of ur messages!

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shilpa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: picadally
thanx but still me not talkin 2 u😡😭😭

aare meri pyaari natsa ji please check your msn na? please talk to me now 😳 and please continue fast

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picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: iloveashi

aare meri pyaari natsa ji please check your msn na? please talk to me now 😳 and please continue fast

kk talkin 2 ya now n ill cont soon dear.😃

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picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#208

(on di other side)

meher: sid tum kya kar rahe ho tumhe ek kite fly karni nahi aati.

sid: aati hai babes lekin lagta hai yeh kite muche like nahi karti isiliye fly nahi ho rahi hai.

meher:sid tum apne stupid excuses mat do.

anaina: arre dunt fight sid kite muche do ill fly it 4 ull n dan ull can cont.(she does dat 4 dem)

meher: thanx anaina!

anaina: nytime now catch hold of da thread nahi toh tumhari patang toh gayi.

(anaina joins vrinda n pri n dey njoy flyin da kite dan pri asks 4 flyin da kite anaina hands it over 2 pri)

vrinda: kitna mazaa Aaa raha hia na

anaina: ya main abhi aati hu

vrinda ok

(she she goes 2see wat uv n ashi r doin 2 ask dem if dey need nythin but she sees dem huggin each other rather dan flyin da kite she pretend s 2 clear her throat)

anaina: muche laga ki tum log makar sakranti celebrate kar rahe hoo lekin yahaa toh kuch aur hi celebrate ho raha hai.

(ashi runs bhind her n uv njoys lookin at dem)

anaina: enough tum muche kya marathon ki practise dey rahi ho kya?

ashi: no! serously hey bhaguu!

uv: lets go join di others agar tum log ki marathon chasin khatam ho gayi ho toh.

ashi: ya khatam lets go.(dey join di others)

anaina: hey y not hv a competitiuon lets all fly da kite jiski patang kat jaati hai is out aur jo end tak rahega is da winner wat say ppl.

ranveer: aapne toh hameh bachpan ki yaad dila di hum bhi vahi karte the.

sid: dats fun lets do it.

(sid n meher with 1 kite pri n vrinda wit 1 uv n ashi n ranveere n tiavarun n mp n anaina alone.)

ranveer: lekin anaina aap akeli?

anaina: humeh kisi ki zarurat nahi hai ranveer bana!

(dey all start flyin da kites ranveer very easily cuts meher n sids kite 2 which meher is very upset dan uv n ashi cut vrinda n pris kite. ashi gives pri a wicked smile which irritates her. aniana cuts varun n mps kite. now ashi n uv tia n ranveer n anaina r left. ranveer cuts uv n ashis kite ashi is upset angry n at da same time happy so many feelings at da same time has 2 b dats ashi. now its ranveer tia n anaina its very excitin cauz bot r gud at flyin kites)

tia: ranveer tia sde par ho jaati hai tum akele concentrate karo.

ranveer: nahi tia its ok!

tia: tum concentrate karo ranveer!

ranveer: anaina sambhalke kahii patang kat na jaaye.

anaina: nahi kategi

ranveer: kyun

anaina: bas dekhte jaoo(she cuts his kite) nahi kategi kyunki tumhari kat gayi n she screams kai po che.

ranveer: maan gaye aap toh hum se bhi acha patang udaate hai.

anaina: kabhi lessons lene Aaa jaana.(every1 laughs n congratulates anaina.)

sid: sufi man kaunsi classes main sikha.

meher: sid yeh koi subject hai jo woh koi classes main sikhne jaayegi.

uv: no meher not his fault yeh toh bhaguu ki fault hai jo sid main brains daalna bhool gaye.(ashi blushes lookin at uv wen he says bhaguu in a typical ashi tone.)

vrinda: i thin humeh maurya jana chahiyeh pata nahi woh shyla aur latika hamaare against kay plans bana rahi hogi.

mp: ya vrinda but pehli baar u said somethin rite.(bot mp n ashi share a laugh)

Edited by picadally - 18 years ago