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siara

@divajill08

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Posted: 18 years ago

#191

hey.owesome part.
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Sweety

@sweetyvidya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: picadally
thanku sweety!

U are most welcome dear😳

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picadally

@picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#193

(da next day it was makar sakranti every1 was very excited 2 celebrate it)

mp: ashi i think hum yeh pehli baar celebrate kar rahe hai .hai.na?

ashi: ya mp! n aaj sabke saath we r gonna have fun!

ranveer: hum jab chote the toh maa ko pareshaan kiya karte the ek patang ke liye aur phir dosto ke saath patang udaate the.

tia:n 2day tum tia ke saath patang fly karoge.

meher: tia yeh hum angels ki pehli makar sakranti hai.

ashi: hey bhaguu! tia aur uski angels ki makar sakranti hai toh plz un teeno ki kites jodh dena kyunki alag alag toh yeh kites fly nahi kar paayegi lack of brains u see toh plz is baar meri baat maaan lena.

pri: shut up ashi u dun have brains.

varun: hey chill yeh anaina kahaa gayi.

anaina: yahaa! (wit a box of kites in her hand) tum log sirf fight karna jaante ho kites par fight toh kar li lekin yeh socha ke kites ke bina makar sakranti kaise hogi.ab koi muche yeh box ke saath help karega.

(dey all start flyin kites ranveer asks tia 2 just let go off da kite n he will fly da kite as soon as she lets go of da kite he just keeps lookin at her n smiles. sid is tryin 2 fly a kite which he cant n meher is really very angry.pri n vrinda fly a kite n mp n varun. uv is about 2 fly a kite wen ashi pulls da kite from his hand.)

uv: ashi babes kya kar rahi ho.

ashi: i am gonna fly da kite.

tumhe aata bhi hai kya.

ashi: shut up! i can do it ok!(she tries hard but cant fly da kite uv goes 2wards her n pulls da kite from her hand.)

anaina: hey guuys yahaa par zyaada space nahi hai y dun u both go bkside of da farmhouse n fly ur kite if u dun mind.

uv:ya sure.(uv n ashi go there) noe watch dis.(he flies da kite very well)

ashi:ok! ok! u win bas but even i wanna learn 2 fly a kite.

uv:tum woh extra kites yahaa peeche jo table hai wahaa rakh do n come here.(he gives da thread in ashis hand n catches hold of da thread from bhind as dey r flyin da kite dey keep movin bhind till finallly dey collide wit da table bhind dem n fall down)

(both of dem start laughin)

ashi: u n me flyin a kite 2gether yeh toh hona hi tha.(she is about 2 get up but uv doesnt allow her).uv muche kite fly karni hai.

uv:ya but just noe mere liye meri kite sirf tum ho.

ashi:kite uv tum kya pagal ho gaye ho.

uv:ya jabse ive started lovin u my red haired kite.

ashi: uv! acha tumne kabhi socha tha ki hum ek din aise saath main kite fly karenge.

uv:no never humeh fight karne se zyaada kuch aata bhi tha?

ashi: ya rite!but common ya wanna fly da kite.

uv:allrite(agian dey start flyin da kite da kite goes up very high but uv is not bothered he just looks at ashi n kisses her on da neck ashi pretends as if she didnt feel nythin he lives da thread n turns her round kisses her on da cheek n hugs her.)

ashi:uv wat happened?

uv:kuch nahi just. jab tumhe hug karta hu toh aisa lagta hai jaise im huggin da whole world n my life i luv u!

ashi:me 2 but im huggin da universe!(both of dem laugh)

Edited by picadally - 18 years ago

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sonam1509

@sonam1509

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Posted: 18 years ago

#194

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great!!!!!!
awesome part naatu..............
mujhe bhi kite fly nahi karni aati........ 😭 😭
i wish yuvi mujhe bhi kite fly karna sikha de 😳

naatu plz post the next part soon...............
luv ya loads
sonam 😳 😳 😳

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shilpa

@iloveashi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#195

rocking,mindblowing,ultra sufi i am short of words it is brillant natsa please please continue soon. You are too good in romantic parts too (see it was out of this world)👏

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Sweety

@sweetyvidya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#196

Yaar this part was toooo good & romantic 😳 😳 😳 I like it 22222 much 👏 Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooooon 😊 And answer my pm😉

Edited by sweetyvidya - 18 years ago

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Rimli

@-Rimli-

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Posted: 18 years ago

#197

awesome part and soooooooooo romantic natasha.
plz cont soon.

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picadally

@picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: sweetyvidya
Yaar this part was toooo good & romantic 😳 😳 😳 I like it 22222 much 👏 Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooooon 😊 And answer my pm😉

thanku sweety but answer wat pm?😕

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picadally

@picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: rimli_remix rox
awesome part and soooooooooo romantic natasha.
plz cont soon.

thanku soooooooo much😉😆

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picadally

@picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: sonam1509
👏
great!!!!!!
awesome part naatu..............
mujhe bhi kite fly nahi karni aati........ 😭 😭
i wish yuvi mujhe bhi kite fly karna sikha de 😳

naatu plz post the next part soon...............
luv ya loads
sonam 😳 😳 😳

tu kahe toh ashi ka naam hatake tera naam likh do😆 may b u will fell better atleast u can dream😛 ki raj ne tumhe kite fly karna sikhaya.😉😆