if remix wouldn’t have ended.pg37

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Posted: 19 years ago
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people im writin a story on remix if it wouldn't have ended. pls tell me how it is. agar acha nahi ho to bacha samaj ke maaf kar dena cause its my 1st time.

SCENE 1

Ashi was sittin in da canteen all alone when uv comes inside da canteen n thinks of playin some prank on ashi. He comes n sits next 2 ashi but realises that she is tensed.

uv: Whats the matter ashi y r u so tensed?

Ashi:nothin psycho just go away.

uv:hey wacho i no kuch problem zarod hai out with it.

Ashi : Kuch nahi uv nothin

uv: Ashi remember humne promise kiya tha ki hum apne problems saath milkar solve karenge.

Ashi :ya but ye sirf meri problem hai.ok

uv :so what tumhari problem meri problem hai. ha agar tum mudjse share nahi karna chati then its ok.

Ashi : uv i didnt mean 2 say tha. koi hai jo mujhe roj koi na koi gift bhej raha hai.

uv: matlab mere alawa aur bhi koi pagal hai.

Ashi : uv its serious.

uv: sorry babes. but i dont beleive this

( just then a peon comes in brings some gifts for ashi sent buy some1

ashi opens the gifts. even uv is surprised there is a big card among da gifts which says for someone special.)

(now this makes uv a bit uncomfortable n jeolous as ashi is really happy lookin at the gifts.)

uv: just dont pay attention 2 this.

ashi lekin tum yahaa kis liye aye the.

uv: ya i just forgot2 tell u aaj raat ko maurya ke compound main milna ranveer aur tiya bhi Aaa rahe hai. i just thought hame remix ke liye celebrate karna chaiye.

Ashi i dont feel like celebratin .

uv come on ashi i no whats da problem but dont worry well solve it that a promise.

Ashi: hey bhaggu ab pravarchan mat do waise bhi election min tum har gaye the ill bhi there.

uv : woh to main tumhare liye hara tha.

ashi : ya right.

next scene come 2 no about who sends ashi the card n gifts thats only if ull like it.

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sayanti_ashiuv thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏
its really kool.plz cont asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nd [lz,dont say its bad or sumthing like dat,its really awesomeeeeeee 👏 👏 hard 2 believe dis is ur first 😳 😳 plz cont asap. 😃 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ya i agred with saya..its really wonderful..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon..and i think it is an ashi-uv fanfic..isn't it..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awsome start! 👏

dosnt seem to b ur first 1

continue soon 😛

Divz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
awesum starting 👏
so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont asap.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part 👏 ...cont soon...u said my most said line baccha samaj kar maaf kar dena 😆 ....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey...very..kewl! 👏 plz..cont.!!!!

i..hope..this..is..a..ashi-yuvi..fic,rite 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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UV ASHI KI KAHAANI MEIN TWIST, 😊 GR8 ITS FUN PLZ GO AHEAD & CONT. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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noe dat ull like it ill cont soon

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