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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey tashu cont soon 😊
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(next mornin all leave 4 maurya after maurya all move 2 dere respective rooms while all girls move 2wards da girls hostel dey meet shyla n latika.)

latika: so tum logki trip kaisi thi

shyla: u no wat anaina u gonna pay 4 dis aur waise humeh jamwal sir ko batana padega ki tum log bina permission njoy karne gaye the.

anaina: ofcau batana chaiye (all da girls were surprised)but dan tumne yeh baat bata di toh phir muche bhi jamwal sir ko batana padega na ki tum ashi ke liye kya plan kar rahi thi.

shyla: karenge ofcauz bleive karenge kyunki phir anaina ko bechari anaina banane main waqt nahi lagega jo tumhari ragging ko bardash nahi kar paayi aur phir is baat ke toh gawah bhi hai hai na girlz?

all of dem :ya!

(shyla n latika r very frustrated n move away from dere)

ashi: duh-uh dat was amazin u r a big deveil barin tum hi woh looneys ko handle kar sakti ho pehle kyun nahi aayi.

tia: oh tias god . pata hai tia kitna dar gayi thi agar jumbo humeh kisi kamre main bandh kar deta toh tia bina make-up kaise survive karti?

meher: ya tia aur phir bina beauty sleep toh tumhare chehre par wrincles Aaa jaate.

pri: and....

ashi: tia da make-up queen agar tum make up ke bina hoti na toh acha hota.mother earth tumhe thank u kehti kyunki tum kuch days ke liye hi sahi lekin light weighted rehti witout ur 2o kilos of make up.(she picks her bags n moves 2wards her room)

(all da girlz r in dere rooms discussin about da trip n in no time dey r in da class jumbo comes dere 4 n announcement.)

jumbo: kal maurya main ek teacher anewaali hia jo apke problems apki thinking is sab se deal karegi apke bhaviour ko study karegi aur apse kuch exercise kar wayegi.n i hope aap sab usse seriously karoge.


mp: waise bhi itna homework rehta hai upar se yeh!

ashi:absolutely rite!

vrinda: humeh isse peace of mind milega woh hamari help karegi.

ashi: shut up! maate.


Edited by picadally - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Tashu the part was very nice as usual 👏 Hope ki ye nayi teacher positive character ho negative hui to bhi no problem 😉 😆 But cont sooooooooon we all r waiting for next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee maine first reply kiya 😃
Edited by sweetyvidya - 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetyvidya

Hi Tashu the part was very nice as usual 👏 Hope ki ye nayi teacher positive character ho negative hui to bhi no problem 😉 😆 But cont sooooooooon we all r waiting for next part 😊

thanku sweety! waise toh all teachers r negative😉 but u decide whether dis teacher is negative or positive😆
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Originally posted by: picadally

thanku sweety! waise toh all teachers r negative😉 but u decide whether dis teacher is negative or positive😆

U are most welcome dear😳 Aur sab teacher negative nahi hote remember RD sir wo to positive the😊 Waise agar tumne negative character ko bhi enter karaya to no problem tumhari fic to meri favorite hi rahegi kyun ki sirf tumhari hi fic main ashi aur MP ki friendship jaisi remix mein thi waisi hi hai😳 I just love their friendship!!!😊
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Originally posted by: sweetyvidya

U are most welcome dear😳 Aur sab teacher negative nahi hote remember RD sir wo to positive the😊 Waise agar tumne negative character ko bhi enter karaya to no problem tumhari fic to meri favorite hi rahegi kyun ki sirf tumhari hi fic main ashi aur MP ki friendship jaisi remix mein thi waisi hi hai😳 I just love their friendship!!!😊

hey rd sir tv main the real life main aisa koi nahi hota ha some of dem r gud but dan dey r not skoool or college teachers. nyways thanx 4 ur comment really loved it!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: picadally

hey rd sir tv main the real life main aisa koi nahi hota ha some of dem r gud but dan dey r not skoool or college teachers. nyways thanx 4 ur comment really loved it!

Ya u r right! I wish koi real life mein rd sir jaise sir hote.
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Posted: 18 years ago
(all of dem meet in da canteen after class)

ashi: ab yeh nayi problem pata nahi wat exercise


pri: agar usne muche khaane se mana kar diya toh!

tia:oh tias poor angel

ashi:u brainless creature woh hamare brains ko handle karnewali hai hamare diet ko nahi.

ranveer: hameh lagta hia Aap log aise hi tension le rahe hai aisa kuch nahi hoga.
dekhe toh so woh kya karnewaali hai.

uv: ya babes chill aur waise bhi main hu na tumhara home work karne ke liye.

ashi: tum apna homework toh karte nahi ho u gonna do mine!(n she just leaves da canteen)

uv:isse kya ho gaya guys abhi ata hu.(uv searches 4 her everywhere n finally finds her sittin in da compound)ashi tum yahaa bathi ho what happened sweetheart tum yahaa achanak wats wrong?

ashi: wats wrong everythings wrong pata nahi yeh nayi teacher kya karegi.

uv: hey chill chalo tumhare mood ko thik karne ke liye we will go somewhere out.

ashi: no uv i dunt feel like lets sit here.

uv:thik hai as u wish.

(meanwhile in da canteen)

tia:yeh ashi bhi na uske brains hamesha boilin point par kyun rehte hai?

meher:tia wat r u sayin tum ashi ki tarah bolna bandh karo!

tia: oh sorry meher!

mp:acha hua atleast tias bimbos main se ek bimbo to sensible ho jaati but hum sabki kismat itni achi nahi hai.

varun: hey chill lets relax waise bhi kal se hum sabko extra kaam karna hai.

(all of dem go 2 dere rooms n think how da new teacher will b accept 4 tia n ranveer who were still sittin in da canteen)

ranveer:tia aap kya soch rahi hai

tia: kuch nahi ranveer

ranveer: kuch toh hai lekin Aap batana nahi chati toh thik hai.

tia: pata nahi kyun ranveer aaj tia apni mumma ko bahut miss kar rahi hai.

ranveer: hum samaj sakte hai tia. lekin hum aapko ek baat kahe toh aap bura toh nahi maanegi na?

tia: no ranveer!

ranveer: tia ab jab sumeet uncle n sonia aunty shaadi karnewaale hai toh sonia aunty apki maa ban jaayegi aur jab unhe pata chalega ki aap apni mumma ko miss kar rahi hai toh unhe bura lagega. hum samaj sakte hai hum yeh nahi kehte ki aap apni mumma ko bhool jaayiye lekin humne jo kahaa uspar bhi dhyaan dijiyeh.

tia: ranveer tum thik keh rahe ho par sonia aunty tia ki mumma nahi hai sonia aunty ne tia ki bahut help ki hai lekin pata nahi kyun tia apni mumma ko miss kar rahi hai.

(while talkin about dis wat both of dem were unaware of was dat ashi had heard dere conversation she had come bk 2 take her cell but tia n ranveer did not notice dat ranveer was shocked 2 see ashi standin rite bhind tia after dere conversation was over ranveer cud make out from ashis face dat she was upset she was about 2 pick her cell n go but ranveer caught her hand)
Edited by picadally - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi finally tune cont to kiya thank you soooooooooooooooooo much 😃 The part was very nice bechara ranvir ab use donoko samjhana padega 😉 But I know he can do that very well he is perfect in that! Here are ur claps 👏Plzzzzz cont sooooooon 😊

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