ALZIA SS-Mohabbat In The 21st Century Updated.(Part 17 on Pg 26) - Page 9

U r just so amazing with writing stories!!!
Ari n rashi going to AGRA on TOP OF D BUS n sleeping TOGETHER!!! OMG! D nature must b celebrating..!
Rashi ka gaana was so ... Beyond words!
Dono ki ladai was d best part. Loved d chaptr n already waiting 4 d next update!!

aww my ash darling u always brings out the perfect feel of AlZia in your update..... i just love that.❤️
The most beautiful was the scene in bus when rashi accidently fell on arihant... u have a perfect way to describe moments which never looks cliche... it looks so divine and pure that how they were affected with each other... One with emerald eyes and another with smile.. the focal point of each others life were finally at their front but they denied to recognize and accept that... but the feeling of reaching destination, the satisfaction was there... it is the perfect feeling of AlZia and their story which is always so deeply meaningful and yet so simple understandable...
and the scene when they were sitting over the bus...😆... LOLZ... it reminds me of their journy ti gazni..😳... and all those funny moments they shared... By any chance can arihant call rashi mahotarma?😆... i am missing his signature call to her here... anyways... the nature is already enjoying the reunion of two star crossed soulmates but here is also the mystery of nature that they both didn't know that they had already reached to their ultimatum. 😳

Lovely update Ash darling... u are such a tremendous inspiring writer... 👏👏

Originally posted by: ..radiance...

U r just so amazing with writing stories!!!
Ari n rashi going to AGRA on TOP OF D BUS n sleeping TOGETHER!!! OMG! D nature must b celebrating..!
Rashi ka gaana was so ... Beyond words!
Dono ki ladai was d best part. Loved d chaptr n already waiting 4 d next update!!

Thank you,dear🤗

🤣 this reminds me of jab we met rashi is so funny and ari is cool😎 ash plx make rashi say qatal na krden hum aapka and then ari replying ye shahi andaz kahan se agaya😆

Originally posted by: ifians

aww my ash darling u always brings out the perfect feel of AlZia in your update..... i just love that.❤️
The most beautiful was the scene in bus when rashi accidently fell on arihant... u have a perfect way to describe moments which never looks cliche... it looks so divine and pure that how they were affected with each other... One with emerald eyes and another with smile.. the focal point of each others life were finally at their front but they denied to recognize and accept that... but the feeling of reaching destination, the satisfaction was there... it is the perfect feeling of AlZia and their story which is always so deeply meaningful and yet so simple understandable...
and the scene when they were sitting over the bus...😆... LOLZ... it reminds me of their journy ti gazni..😳... and all those funny moments they shared... By any chance can arihant call rashi mahotarma?😆... i am missing his signature call to her here... anyways... the nature is already enjoying the reunion of two star crossed soulmates but here is also the mystery of nature that they both didn't know that they had already reached to their ultimatum. 😳

Lovely update Ash darling... u are such a tremendous inspiring writer... 👏👏

Awww,Riyu meri jaan,I love you🤗And don't worry,Ari ki zubaan se Mohatarma bohot jald sunne ko milega😳

Originally posted by: overactor

🤣 this reminds me of jab we met rashi is so funny and ari is cool😎 ash plx make rashi say qatal na krden hum aapka and then ari replying ye shahi andaz kahan se agaya😆

They r so cute and this update is Afsaw👏

Sonu,darling,I love you🤗🤗 And thanks for the suggestion.Its really cute😳

Chapter-7

When the sun scattered its light on their faces,it was he who opened his eyes first.He felt the presence of her head on his shoulder and glanced at her.

She looks so cute while sleeping.Just like an innocent child.',he thought to himself with a smile.

He saw a strand of hair on her face.He gently removed it.He was again mesmerized.He found that strange.He had never paid any attention to someone's looks before.He judged everyone through their nature which he could easily see.But she was different.This girl.She was bold yet gentle.Sweet yet fiery.Vulnerable yet strong.Firm yet childlike.Given a chance she could conquer the world.And he had never seen this in any other woman before.Her ethereal beauty was a mere reflection of her inner spirit which was one in a million.

Mmaria,where is my coffee?',she said in a sleepy voice.

He smiled.He shook her a little bit to wake her up.

Rise and shine,Ma'm.We have reached Agra.You can have your coffee later.',said Arihant.

She woke up with a start.For a moment,she could not understand anything.And then,she realized where she was.On the top of a bus with the biggest moron on earth.

God,subah subah kiski shakal dekhli.Now,I am sure that my entire day will be ruined.',she muttered to herself.

Khud ki shakal dekhli hai aapne.',he said shaking his head.

What did you say?',asked Rashi.

I just said the truth.You saw your own face.Actually,when you woke up,you looked right into my eyes and saw your reflection in them.It is simple.',said Arihant innocently.

You!!!! Mind your tongue!! Kahin hum aapka qatl na karde!!',said Rashi.

What is this,Ma'm? Hum? Aap? You have never spoken like this.Yeh shahi andaaz kahaan se agaya? Okay,I guess that you have a rich dad par yeh toh pata nahin tha ki tevar bhi kisi shehzaadi se kam nahin.',said Arihant with a grin.

Rashi opened her mouth to tell him off but she could not.Yes,it was strange.She had never ever spoken like this before.

Let it be known to Her Royal Highness,Princess Rashi,that we have reached the bus stop.',said Arihant in a mock regal manner.

The bus stopped and they got off.Rashi was relieved that she would not have to tolerate this moron anymore.As she began to walk away,she found him following her.

What?Why are you following me?',asked Rashi getting annoyed.

As if I like to follow you.Listen to me,Ma'm,do you know where you have to go?',asked Arihant.

Of course,I do.Ronnie had mentioned some hotel.I have to go there.',said Rashi.

Fine.Do you know where the hotel is?And if you do,how will you get there?So,let me help you.',said Arihant.

Why should I take your help?',asked Rashi.

Because you are alone.I know that you are not familiar with the city.You don't even have a cell to call anyone.I am not saying that you can't take care of yourself.But there is nothing wrong in being careful.I know that it is not easy to trust a stranger.But please,trust me.Trust me,Ma'm.Trust me.',said Arihant.

She looked into his eyes.His words rang in her head.Trust me.Trust me.Could she trust this man?Every cell in her body,every blood vessel,every heartbeat,every instinct of her told her to trust him.She was feeling as if she could not trust anyone but him.Silently,she nodded.When they reached the hotel that Ronnie had mention to her,they found Ronnie,Tina,Nikhil and Falguni at the reception with all their luggage.It was confusing.

What happened, guys?Why haven't you checked in yet?',asked Rashi.

Rashi!! Ronnie forgot to book the rooms.',cried Tina.

What? Ronnie,how could you do that?It is really careless of you.Anyway,let's go to some other hotel.',said Rashi.

Actually,Rashi,umm,the problem is that all the other good hotels are booked',said Ronnie.

BOOKED???? How is that possible?Are you trying to tell me that there are no hotels in this big city where we can stay?',asked Rashi.Ronnie simply nodded.

Rashi took her brother aside to have a private conversation.

Bro,how is it possible?',asked Rashi.

I don't know!! You can call it our dumb luck.',said Ronnie.

God,where will we stay now?Why don't you try to call someone?',said Rashi.

Wonderful suggestion!! Well,I have already tried out contacting everyone I know and trust me five star toh door ki baat hai,yahan pe toh dharamshala bhi khaali nahin hai.Pata nahin itne saare logon ko achanak ek saath Agra kyun aana pada.',said Ronnie.

Now,what should we do?',asked Rashi.

Ronnie shrugged.He had hoped to impress Falguni in this trip but now they needed a roof for themselves.He made a mental note to tell his father to set up The Opal at Agra as well when they got back.Then,Arihant came to them.

Ma'm,sorry to interrupt your conversation.But if you don't mind,then you guys can stay with me and Vicky.After all,hamari itni toh jaan pehchaan ho chuki hai.',said Arihant.

Ronnie was looking at him as if he were some angel who had descended from the heavens.He wanted to hug him then and there.

No,thanks but we..',began Rashi.

Thanks,bro!! We will accompany you.You are really a savior.',said Ronnie.

Okay,so follow me guys!!',said Arihant with a grin as Rashi made a face.So,the others accompanied Arihant to a house which was situated in a peaceful area.Strawberry pink in colour,it was a surrounded by a lovely little garden.All the plants looked as if they had been handled with a lot of love and care.The nameplate read "D'Costa House".An old lady awaited them at the doorstep with a smile on her face.Her face glowed when she saw Arihant.Arihant immediately ran and hugged her.

AUNTY SANDRA!!!!',he shouted like a little child.

Ari,my child,I missed you so much.How are you?Your friend Vicky told me that you would be a bit late.And what is this?You have brought some other friends.',said Aunty Sandra looking at the others.Arihant introduced everyone to Aunty Sandra.She was delighted to meet them and vice versa.She took them inside.Her house was simple but neat and organized.

Aunty,where is our little champ?Where is Elton?',asked Arihant eagerly.

Rashi and the others were surprised as a little boy came running towards Arihant .

Ari bro!!! You are here.',said the boy.

Yup!!! I am here little one.',said Arihant.

But who are they?',he asked looking at the others curiously.

Oh!! Let me introduce you to them.This is Ronnie bhaiya,that's Nikhil bhaiya,Falguni di,Tina di and last but not the least,Rashi di.',said Arihant pointing out everyone.

Hi,I am Elton D'Costa.I live here with my granny.Ari bro is my best friend.',he said adorably.Everyone was pleased to meet him.This child was a delight.Shortly afterwards,Aunty Sandra guided them to their rooms.Rashi would be sharing a room with Tina and Falguni.Ronnie with Nikhil and Arihant with Vicky.

That night,after everyone had gone to bed,Arihant was talking with Aunty Sandra.He had put his head on her lap and she was caressing it affectionately.He loved her the most.He could do anything for her.She had taken care off him like a mother.He could not repay her even if he gave up his life.

I miss you so much,Aunty.I have asked you many times.Why don't you and Elton come to stay with me?I will take care of both of you.',said Arihant.

You know that it is not possible,Ari.This is my John's house.I feel his presence here.Don't worry about me and Elton.Your Aunty Sandra is strong and fit enough to take care of herself and Elton.And I know that you will always be with us.',said Aunty Sandra.

But...',he began.

Listen to me,Ari.Don't worry about us.Look after yourself.I don't like to see you alone.You need someone in your life.You need someone's love.',said Aunty Sandra.

Arihant got up and smiled at her.

Love?Do I really need it?',he asked.

Yes,you do.Everyone does.And you are different Ari.Therefore,I think that He has planned something special for you.',said Aunty Sandra.

Dekha jayega.Good night,Aunty.I will sit in the garden for a while before going to sleep.',said Arihant and he walked away.He went to the garden and to his surprise,he was not alone.There was someone else there.It was Rashi.She was talking to someone on the phone.She had just ended the call when she saw him.

Kya baat hai,Ma'm!! Abhi tak soyi nahin.',asked Arihant.

Tumse matlab',said Rashi looking annoyed.

Well,you know what,Ma'm.I think that you should apply for an anger management course.Jab bhi aap mujhe dekhti hai tab aapka chehra laal pad jata.But that is not a problem kyunki usually mujhe dekh kar har ladki ka chehra laal hojata hai.The only difference is that unke case mein it happens due to blushing.And it your case,it is due to your anger.',said Arihant.

You are the last person on this earth who would make me blush!!!',said Rashi and she began to walk away.

Wait!! Don't get angry!! Ma'm,just listen to me.Rashi.Please stop Ma'm.Listen to me.Please listen to me,Mohatarma!!',said Arihant.

Rashi stopped.She was getting a strange feeling.She turned back and looked at him.It was something different.Something had definitely happened.It felt like dj vu when she heard that word from his mouth.

What did you say just now?',she asked him softly.

I said listen to me.',said Arihant.

No.After that.What did you address me as?You did not call me Ma'm as usual.',said Rashi.

Mohatarma.',said Arihant.

Rashi simply stared at him.That word sounded like soft music to her ears.It seemed as if her ears were dying to listen to that particular word from his mouth.

Well,if you don't like it then its fine,Ma'm.',said Arihant.

No.You,you can call me.Mohatarma.It is better.Ma'm sounds a bit formal.',said Rashi.

You know what,I will call you both.Mohatarma Ma'm.',said Arihant with a chuckle.

Rashi laughed.

So,since you have removed the barrier of formality between us,can we be friends,Mohatarma cum Ma'm?',asked Arihant.

Hmmm,friends with you?Let's see.Maybe,we can give it a try.But I am still mad at you for your prank.',said Rashi.

And I apologise again.But I sincerely hope that my new friend will forgive me.',said Arihant.

You never know,maybe,she has already forgiven you.',said Rashi.

All right,Mohatarma!! So,truce?',said Arihant.

Truce.',said Rashi.

So,whom were you talking to now?',asked Arihant.

It was my friend.A guy came to see her today.Her marriage is fixed.She is very excited.',said Rashi.

Really?Just after one meeting?',asked Arihant.

Yes.Actually,their families know each other.They met only today.And,it was love at first sight.Isn't that amazing?',said Rashi.

Of course.Love at first sight.',said Arihant sarcastically.Rashi frowned.

Why?Don't you believe in love?',asked Rashi.

Yes,I do.But I don't understand this logic.Pandit ne keh diya ki kundaliyan mil gayi hai.Ladki ke parents kehte hain ki ladka achcha hai.Padha likha hai.Ladke ke parents kehte hain ki ladki sundar aur susheel hai.Dono kar lete hain shaadi.Itna sab dusron ke kehne par.Din,mahine,saal beet jaate hain.Bachche paida kar lete hain.Bada ghar khareed lete hain.Badi gaadi khareed lete hain.Apna poora sansar bas jata hai.Par phir bhi unhe pata nahin chalta ki pyaar kya hota hai.Apni aadat ko pyaar samajh kar zindagi kaat lete hain.',said Arihant with a sigh.

Haan,jaise ki tumhe pata hai ki pyaar kya hota hai.',said Rashi.

No,I don't know.True love can be defined by only those who have experienced it.For me,as of now,it stands for only one thing.',said Arihant.

What?',asked Rashi.

Pralay.Qayamat.Doomsday.Apocalypse.',said Arihant.

You.You are unbelievable.',said Rashi .

That I am.',said Arihant with a smile.

Okay,good night,Arihant!!',said Rashi.

Good night,Mohatarma!!',said Arihant.

Author's Note:Hi guys!! Here is the seventh chapter.A special word of thanks to my lovely friends Riyu and Sonu for their brilliant suggestions.I hope you all like it.Sorry,for any grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.😊

Okk so Sandra is Samshad i guess?😆... Nice to see their bonding here...😳... lovely aunty and nephew..😃
And elton is obviously yasir na... aww..my fav..❤️
God ronnie... he will always be baby even in this birth... room book karna bhool gaya..😆... and the way he adored Ari... gawdd... there bromance will be awsome to c...😃

"Katal Naa Karde Hum Aaap kaa..."😆

"Mahotarma..."

their signature lines are back...⭐️⭐️

this chapter is so sweet just like a strawberry ice cream... 😛... lovely and wonderful...😃

enjoyed it so much... 👏

Originally posted by: ifians

Okk so Sandra is Samshad i guess?😆... Nice to see their bonding here...😳... lovely aunty and nephew..😃
And elton is obviously yasir na... aww..my fav..❤️
God ronnie... he will always be baby even in this birth... room book karna bhool gaya..😆... and the way he adored Ari... gawdd... there bromance will be awsome to c...😃

"Katal Naa Karde Hum Aaap kaa..."😆

"Mahotarma..."

their signature lines are back...⭐️⭐️

this chapter is so sweet just like a strawberry ice cream... 😛... lovely and wonderful...😃

enjoyed it so much... 👏

Sandra=Shamshaad???😆 Umm,I don't think so dear.Sandra is a completely new character just like Ira aunty.I had decided that I would retain all characters apart from QJ,Shamshaad and buddha.

So shamshad and yasir enter too😆