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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Ohh ash, I adored this chapter so much.😛I just love despite of being in modern time u kept their personality intact. I love how arihant and rashi keeps thinking on each other all the time... Rashi couldn't get over the moron and arihant just missed his very famous signature line of prev birth...😆

Fqalguni is getting a bit strange while running away always😕... however I liked ronie and her meeting. LOL! Ronie is already smitten by her I guess.😆

And my most fav part when rashi get furious when tina badmouthed about altunia. She just can't take that... tina was right.. it felt like as if she is insulting rashi's boyfriend.😉

Will be waiting for the next chapter, I am loving this story so much.❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Ash this is a fantastic update. I agree it is the best one yet. 👏

The slew of adjectives that Rashi has for Arihant.😆 She is going to be a right lil hurricane of fire when she confronts him next.😛

She is already so affected by the 'moron'. On the other hand he is still the mast malang as usual. The carefree commoner. His signature catchphrase revived with him but for Rashi it is her emerald eyed Malik that haunts her dreams.

The mystery surrounding Falguni and her avoiding meeting Nikhil deepens but Ronnie has entered to make it a love triangle. So I am intrigued to see how that pans out.😉

Throughly enjoyed the conversations in this chapter. Rashi felt like Nikhil was praising her and I loved her impassioned speech about Altunia.

Continue soon Ash, the more the story unfolds, the better it gets!😃🤗

Edited: major grammar error...affect v effect😆
Edited by bhabhijaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
'Don't speak a word against Altunia!!!'
Rashi is soo protective of Mirza..!!
I wish usse jald hi unn emerald eyes k picche ki sachai pta chal jaye or rather yaad aa jaye but Ari ko pehle yaad aana chahiye Yarr so that baad mein wo Rashi ko wapas previous life ki memories yaad dilaye or may b chup chup k apni mohtarma ko dekhe n smile kare remnising their moments in earlier life...

'The sooner this matter ended,the better it was for everyone.'
I Wonder whats wrong with Fatima/falguni
????
Is it like iss life mein uski nikhil k saath kuch gadbad hui ya phir like she already got back her memory?!?? Confused

Mirza hasn't changed even a bit as Arihant! Pakka hotel mein gusne k liye koi na koi tactic jarur apnaega akhir Mirza ne ek baar Jo kuch karne ki than li toh karke hi manta hai !!!!!

I m missing qutub ... Wish she was there too

N I agree with others its d best part till now .. Like I loved it totally
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Rubeika

Omg its amazing 😊 Arihant ka akad aur rashi ka gussa ufff both r adorable...i am speechless 👏 Ronie he's sooo cute love him rukima 👏 awesome ss 😊

Thanks a lot dear🤗 Alzia are adorable in each and every century
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ifians

Ohh ash, I adored this chapter so much.😛I just love despite of being in modern time u kept their personality intact. I love how arihant and rashi keeps thinking on each other all the time... Rashi couldn't get over the moron and arihant just missed his very famous signature line of prev birth...😆

Fqalguni is getting a bit strange while running away always😕... however I liked ronie and her meeting. LOL! Ronie is already smitten by her I guess.😆

And my most fav part when rashi get furious when tina badmouthed about altunia. She just can't take that... tina was right.. it felt like as if she is insulting rashi's boyfriend.😉

Will be waiting for the next chapter, I am loving this story so much.❤️

Riyu,meri jaan,I love you🤗 Alzia are like a magnet for each other.So,even now,when AlZia are AriRa,their attraction remains.
Falguni ke baare mein abhi kuch nahin kaha jaa sakta hai😉😆

Rashi was bound to get furious.😆 And Tina did insult her boyfriend😉

Thanks once again😃 I will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: bhabhijaan

Ash this is a fantastic update. I agree it is the best one yet. 👏


The slew of adjectives that Rashi has for Arihant.😆 She is going to be a right lil hurricane of fire when she confronts him next.😛

She is already so affected by the 'moron'. On the other hand he is still the mast malang as usual. The carefree commoner. His signature catchphrase revived with him but for Rashi it is her emerald eyed Malik that haunts her dreams.

The mystery surrounding Falguni and her avoiding meeting Nikhil deepens but Ronnie has entered to make it a love triangle. So I am intrigued to see how that pans out.😉

Throughly enjoyed the conversations in this chapter. Rashi felt like Nikhil was praising her and I loved her impassioned speech about Altunia.

Continue soon Ash, the more the story unfolds, the better it gets!😃🤗

Edited: major grammar error...affect v effect😆

Thanks a lot bhabhijaan🤗
Just wait and watch.This is only the beginning😉

Nothing can be said about the Nikhil-Falguni equation now.And,yes,Ronnie has entered the scenario now😳

I will try my best to update it soon😃 Thanks once again
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: ..radiance...

'Don't speak a word against Altunia!!!'
Rashi is soo protective of Mirza..!!
I wish usse jald hi unn emerald eyes k picche ki sachai pta chal jaye or rather yaad aa jaye but Ari ko pehle yaad aana chahiye Yarr so that baad mein wo Rashi ko wapas previous life ki memories yaad dilaye or may b chup chup k apni mohtarma ko dekhe n smile kare remnising their moments in earlier life...

'The sooner this matter ended,the better it was for everyone.'
I Wonder whats wrong with Fatima/falguni
????
Is it like iss life mein uski nikhil k saath kuch gadbad hui ya phir like she already got back her memory?!?? Confused

Mirza hasn't changed even a bit as Arihant! Pakka hotel mein gusne k liye koi na koi tactic jarur apnaega akhir Mirza ne ek baar Jo kuch karne ki than li toh karke hi manta hai !!!!!

I m missing qutub ... Wish she was there too

N I agree with others its d best part till now .. Like I loved it totally

Firstly,thank you very much for liking it🤗
Emerald eyes ka raaz khulne mein abhi thoda time baaki hai 😉

Yes,Mirza hasn't changed😎 Change hona Mirza Altunia ki fitrat nahin hai😆

Thanks once again😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Astoria

Thanks a lot dear🤗Alzia are adorable in each and every century

its my pleasure dear
...i m eagerly waiting for ur next part n plz update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Chapter-4

Altunia.The bad guy.The one who destroyed everything.The villain.'Tina's each and every word echoed in her mind continuously.She did not understand why those words made her so angry and restless.She did not know what to do.She was feeling extremely bad for shouting at Tina for a petty reason.Petty?No! It certainly wasn't a petty.Tina had spoken badly about Altunia.It was wrong.But,why was she thinking about Altunia all of a sudden.He,he was nothing more than a character.

Oh God!!! What is happening to me?Why?Why??',she thought to herself.

She went to the poolside and sat down there.She loved staring at the water.It always calmed her down.It was soothing.There was no one else there.She was alone.She missed her mom like hell.Her mom,even though was herself a puzzle,had a solution for each and every problem.She thought of calling her mother but then dropped the idea.It was a small thing.She could not possibly make an issue out of that.But,then,what should she do?

Really,Rashi Agarwal!!! You are brooding so much over a mere character??Get a life,girl.You are here on a vacation !! Focus on that!!',she said to herself.Then,she took a deep breath and closed her eyes.Then she saw them again.Those eyes.Those emerald eyes.It was only for a moment when they stared at her.But the moment she looked into those eyes,her anxiety,her restlessness vanished.When she opened her eyes,she felt relieved.She was grateful to those emerald eyes for relieving her of her burden.Emerald green.It was her favourite colour.It always emitted a positive aura and managed to purge all the neagativity out.

Green.Green symbolizes nature.Green carries the spirit of nature within itself.Nature is something which is completely genuine.There is nothing fake about nature.Nature does not know how to pretend.It often changes its forms.And it just unpredictable.Whenever she looked at those emerald eyes,she felt a sense of unpredictability in them.And she was someone who loved predictable things.Maybe her fondness for those emerald eyes with unpredictability was an exception.

Ari,I am telling you.Don't do this!! Yeh bohot mehenga padega',said Vicky nervously.

Really?Five star hotels mehenge hi hote hain.Just tell me one five star hotel in this world which is not expensive.',said Arihant.

I am not talking about the expenses.Of course ,it is going to be expensive!! But what will happen when we will be asked to pay?? I don't want to go to jail!!',said Vicky.

Great!! Its always good to try out something new.Five star hotel ka khana taste karne ke baad jail ka khana taste karenge.Sach mein,ek arsa hogaya jail ka khaana taste kiye huye.',said Arihant wistfully.

Are you out of your mind??Do whatever you want to do!! I am not going to eat a single morsel.',said Vicky.

Okay!! As you wish ,my dear friend.',said Arihant.

They sat down for lunch and Arihant ordered a delicious meal.Vicky was watching him with looking sad.

Come on,Vicky!! Order something for yourself.',said Arihant.

No!! I am not going to get into this mess.You handle this all by yourself',said Vicky.

Arihant simply grinned.He finished his lunch and decided to roam around the hotel.He was strolling merrily when he came to the poolside.

Hmmm,what can it be? Man ki marziyan,marziyon ka man kuch aisa hi hai ...Kuch aisa hi hai...,God,what can it possibly be??',he said to himself.

Ever since he learnt how to form words,he was trying to complete this sentence.But this seemed like an impossible task.Still,nothing is impossible for Arihant Saxena.He understood everything.Apart from one thing.Whenever he closed his eyes,he could feel that someone was looking right into them.He gazed back intently.He could not fathom the expression in that particular individual s face.Sometimes it was an expression of relief,sometimes anxiety,sometimes affection.Whenever sleep eluded him,he could hear someone laughing.That laughter was like a soothing lullaby.It was musical.Enchanting.Whenever he felt disheartened or demoralized,he visualized a warm and beautiful smile which radiated positivity.It was that smile which boosted his optimism and inspired him to solve not only his problems but the problems of others as well.His motivating force was an individual.He did not know how she looked like.He only saw her as an entity who was with him in his darkest nights as well as his brightest days.She was an embodiment of hope,light and love.If he could only find out who she was...

Then his gaze fell on someone sitting by the poolside.It was a girl.She seemed upset.He knew that he was no one to interfere in someone's personal matters but still he could sense it when someone needed help.And now,it looked like this girl needed his expert advice.He approached her from behind and spoke to her.

Ummm,excuse me,Ma'm.I think that we need to talk.'

The girl turned back and faced him.Then,the expression on both their faces was of shock.

YOU!!!!',screamed Rashi.

YOU!!!!',Arihant screamed back .

What.The.Hell.Are.You.Doing.Here????',said Rashi.

I am here to have lunch.Just like you,Ma'm!!',said Arihant with a mischievious grin.

Great!!! So,what would it be this time??Tea?Coffee?Juice?Wine??Champagne?Whisky??'

Thanks for offering all these things,Ma'm.But I would love to have my glass of coke.Its my favourite drink after all.',said Arihant.

Idiot!!! I meant that what would you like to spill on me this time.',said Rashi.

Really,Ma'm,you are the first person on this earth who loves to get things spilled on herself.',said Arihant.

Please!!! Not now!! I am not in a mood to argue with you.I was already upset and then you arrived as the cherry on the top of the cake.Please,abhi toh baksh do mujhe!!',said Rashi.

Fine.Ma'm,if that is what you want,then I will leave you alone.But before leaving,I want to say something.You are upset.99% of it is because you have hurt someone very close.And the remaining 1% of your frustration is because you are perplexed about something.You want to know the answer but it continues to avoid you.My advice to you is that just go and apologize sincerely to the person whom you have hurt.Angrezon ne jo paanch aksharon waala shabd banaya hai na,Sorry,woh bohot effective hai.I am sure that the person would forgive you.',said Arihant.

And what about the remaining 1%?',asked Rashi forgetting that she was mad at him.

That problem can only be solved by Time herself.You will find all your answers someday.You just have to be patient.This 1% is a problem that every human being has.We cannot find the solution ourselves.We have to wait.Sooner or later,everyone finds their desired answers.Even I am looking for some answers.One fine day,either I will find them or they will find me.And,mark my words,the same applicable to you too.',said Arihant.

Actually you are right.Thank you very much.',said Rashi and she smiled.

That very moment,Arihant felt a familiar feeling of warmth and comfort.He could not understand what it was.But her smile.It was magical and infectious.He felt as if he could cherish it forever.He quicky brushed these thoughts away.

You are welcome,Ma'm!! ,said Arihant and he walked away.

Rashi was feeling extremely light and happy.She was relieved.Maybe,this guy was not a moron,after all.

When Arihant re-entered the restaurant,a waiter came upto him.

Sir,here is your bill.',said the waiter.

Bill?Don't you know,I was invited by my friend.It is her treat.Look,there she is.The one at the poolside.',said Arihant

He looked over at Rashi and waved at her.Rashi saw him waving at her from a distance and she waved back at him with a smile on her face.

Okay,so he is Miss Agarwal's guest.The one Mr Patel had informed the staff about.',thought the waiter.

So,can I leave now?',asked Arihant.

Of course,sir.I hope that you had a good time here.',said the waiter.

Arihant and a confused Vicky were escorted outside.Vicky could not understand what was going on.They both entered the car and drove off.It was then that Vicky opened his mouth.

What?How?Why?',he kept on asking.

I told you my friend,you would not understand.What?Are you hungry now?',said Arihant.

How on earth did you manage to pay the bill????',asked Vicky.

With the fees that I got for counseling someone',replied Arihant with his usual grin.

But how...',Vicky began when Arihant interrupted him.

Leave this here for now,my friend.By the way,I really wish to go to Agra.I have booked the bus tickets.We are leaving tomorrow.No more discussions.',said Arihant.

Rashi happily walked back and met Tina and Nikhil.She hugged Tina and apologized to her.Tina readily forgave her.They bade goodbye to Nikhil who was leaving when Mr Patel came to them smiling.

Miss Agarwal,I had told you that your guest would be taken care off.I was true to my word.He enjoyed his lunch very much and was pleased with our hospitality.',said Mr Patel.

Which guest are you referring to Mr Patel?Nikhil is my guest and he is here.',said Rashi looking surprised.

Bbut then what about that guest?The one at the poolside?The one at whom you waved?He,he told us that you invited him.',said Mr Patel.

It took a few seconds for everything to sink in.When she finally realized,she was very,very furious.

He.Is.Dead.THAT MORON!!!!',she screamed.

Back at Ira aunty's house,the situation was very strange.

Look,Ronnie,I am really,really sorry.I did not know who you were.Please do not mind.',said Falguni.

Ronnie did not say anything.They were sitting with Ira aunty who could not understand anything.Ronnie continued staring at Falguni.He seemed lost.Suddenly,Ira aunty shook him.

Ronnie,my child,are you alright?',asked Ira aunty.

What?Oh,yes.I am very much alright.You,you do not have to be sorry.You did not do anything wrong.If,if I were in your place,I would have done the same thing.You,you did not make any mistake.',said Ronnie softly.

Thank you very much,Ronnie.I think I will go to my room now.Once again,I apologize.',said Falguni and she left.Ronnie continued to look in her direction.He seemed lost.

So,Ronnie beta,how are Trisha di and Jeejaji?Are they fine?',asked Ira aunty.

Trisha di?Jeejaji?Who?Who are they?',asked Ronnie in a dreamy voice.

Ronnie?Are you sure that you are fine?Wait,I will ask the butler to bring something for you.Lagta hai kuch zyada hi chot lag gayi hai tumhe.',said Ira aunty.

Chot toh lagi hai.Bohot gehri chot lagi hai.Par pata hai aunty,the strange thing is that I wish ki aisi chot baar baar lage mujhe.',said Ronnie and once again he was lost.

Author's Note:Guys,here is the fourth chapter of this SS.I hope that you will like it.Sorry,for any spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
ash u know what?! each and every time i try to put some analysis on ur update but u make me speechless.... ur updates were like reading a chapter of professional writer's novel... and i just get lost mora and more and didn't know when it get finishes all of a sudden leaving its effect permanently on my heart,.. and truly saying this story is my one of the fav in IF now,... as u are my one of the fav writer,...👏... u know how to put perfect word for perfect describing of scenes...
now coming to the update...
i love the moment when rashu calmed down thinking about the emerald eyes.. wonderful touch...👏.. i loved the fact that u are not making it a typical reincarnation story where the characters instantly start to have old time flashbacks... no offense but it looks sometimes so dumb to me... getting flashbacks like randomly is not at all possible... cause human brain and memory is such a difficult thing to understand... there are infinite numbers of memory in a single cell and hitting the perfect chord of the thread which stores the prev birth's life doesn't happen so sudden... it needed situation, environment... but yes i believe that there is some very light and deep affect on u of ur prev life... which keeps intact to u like a very deep unknown feeling... as for rashi it was there in the form of his emerald eyes' vague glance which sooth her every time and for arihant it is there as a feeling of calming effect a glance of smile but no face at all... this can't be more perfect... i feel when two people are deeply connected in prev life... there interconnection is always there like this...

wow man i can't tell how much i loved arihant consoling rashi... this is what i was blabbering about previously... just like altunia was guide at razia's each and every phase like a friend... here arihant was also there to make rashi understand that what should she do and how she will get out of teh problem.. just like altunia did when razia was in problem... right?😉...
both rashi and arihant are searching for something in their life without knowing that their search will end to each other.
Mirza had the tendency to play with dangers ad difficulty... arihant got the same thing in his character from his prev life... how much confidently he entered inside a five star hotel like its his own place and he is the owner😆.. and also he inherited altunia's smartness off course... how smartly he throw the bill for rashi.,. and finally when rashi started to think that he is not moron.. then BOOM!!... again she came to know that the guy made her fool again.. 😆

and lastly ruknu and fatima aka ronnie and falguni...😆... well i am waiting to see how there story progress... nothing now for them... it will be interesting to see i know... abhi kee liye bass itna hii ash darling... jhel loo meri rants...🤣

and yes... update asap..😳
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