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Navin

@napstermonster

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

res--mother's day dinner peeps..will comment on blue and on orange fire later!

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Aaw. I love how Rudra still feels her pain after all these years

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niyoti

@niyoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Unresd on green!

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Res For ORANGE😃

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Just the description of the night scene brings to mind a vivid image of the color orange. The fire in the makeshift stove, the earthen vessels and the fire glinting off the sand, all of it reminds me of different shades of orange. I think you picked the perfect setting to bring out the brilliance of this color Anky.

When i think orange I also think of warmth, both physical and the one from within and it's so beautifully conveyed through the warmth of Rudra's love and concern

"Nahi..." he breathed, taking her palm into his hand, and rubbing it, soothing an imaginary wound, "Meri galti thi."

Soothing an imaginary wound...

The queen of last liners has struck again! I LOVED it!

Edited by niyoti - 11 years ago

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
You Are WANTED ASAP

Aa gaya mere bacche.. Do minute..

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

I loved green and orange! Orange was superlative!

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prettypri

@prettypri

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Loved orange...the memory it evoked and the reaction of Rudra to that memory!

Superbly written👏

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CyberOstrich

@CyberOstrich

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Ankita- would love it if they ever show Rudra and Paro reminisce about old times- especially the captive-captor time someday!! Maybe after all the khulaasas, the dushmans coming out in the open- we have a lull period where these two can talk about this incident you've based ORANGE on? *sigh* wouldnt that be something?!

You have non existant cheeks?! Awww- can I pinch your nose then- affectionately of course?! And I am Shalini 😊

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Orange to match fire eh? 👍🏼 And from the help of google baba, i found it also "assists in recovery from grief" 🤓 So yeah - Fire had been trying to help her from her griefs, since her childhood. Now that Rudra ahs hastened her recovery, they can sit back and reminisce about their past...

Edited by aruni50218 - 11 years ago

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HappilyLost

@HappilyLost

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

This was great! It must be extremely difficult for you to come up with such relations! And i am glad that I am reading this!

This whole concept of orange and flames was perfectly matched.

And of course how could I miss the amber eyes of Rudra? Totally Loved it!😛😛

That part where he understands the direction of her thoughts was so sweet! And how she says that they are connected is damn beautiful.

orange was equally well written Ankita baisa and the dialogues added to the over all effect of warmth love and understanding.

I am desperately waiting for the next colours and yep I won't leave you soon😆😆

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Orange

I did not understand the Hindi words but I think I get the meaning. Its was such a meaningful small moment shared between them. Remembering when they met in that desert. He knows her so well now and your small amount of words were able to portray such a strong connection between them. Amazing work you do.

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