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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: SherryGS
Orange

I did not understand the Hindi words but I think I get the meaning. Its was such a meaningful small moment shared between them. Remembering when they met in that desert. He knows her so well now and your small amount of words were able to portray such a strong connection between them. Amazing work you do.

The hindi words were just Paro remembering how she burnt her hands to avoid Mehndi, and Rudra finally accepting that it was his mistake that he let her burn her hands.

Personally, I think he never really wanted to drive her into a corner.. But the whole criminal angle when came in, he just had to. And he isn't really proud of the fact that he did. That's why I wrote this one... Where someday, he actually sits down and tells her that it was his fault, but the circumstances wouldn't have it any other way.

And Thank you Sherry!

Rudra has always KNOWN Paro... And Vice-versa... That is the beauty of them.. 😳

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: dreamwinner
Im getting used to Drabble style of writing
only because someone writes them beautifully

Me?? Me??? Mee??? 😳

Aaayeee! Thankooo so much!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: rangprab
u have me hooked with Orange... "Nahi..." he breathed, taking her palm into his hand, and rubbing it, soothing an imaginary wound, "Meri galti thi."

kya line... uff...

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Thanks sooo much!

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Sonata24

@Sonata24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Holy mother of god! What all have I missed in one week!!

Ankita-Bhaisa!! This is amazing!! Seven Hues! Brilliant idea!!

You know... There has been only one other instant other than Green where my heart went out for Laila, and that was in the OS written by Napstermonster.

She wanted her Rudra back. She wanted her devil back to play with the monsters in her head.

Oh that last line!! *Feels*

You've chosen the perfect people for both Green & Orange. Is it wrong that I'm awaiting Red with over-enthusiasm? 😛

Very well written, and to do such a good job in mere 100/200 odd words... Bravo! 👏

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Sonata24
Holy mother of god! What all have I missed in one week!!
Ankita-Bhaisa!! This is amazing!! Seven Hues! Brilliant idea!!

You know... There has been only one other instant other than Green where my heart went out for Laila, and that was in the OS written by Napstermonster.

She wanted her Rudra back. She wanted her devil back to play with the monsters in her head.

Oh that last line!! *Feels*

You've chosen the perfect people for both Green & Orange. Is it wrong that I'm awaiting Red with over-enthusiasm? 😛

Very well written, and to do such a good job in mere 100/200 odd words... Bravo! 👏

Sonata, First of all, I loved the second part of your OS!

Secondly, arre I am a Bai-sa... Don't make me a Bhai-sa! 😆

Did you read blue as well?? You didn't mention that's why I am asking.. And if you did, did you not like it enough?

Red is the last one on this series! :P

And I update daily, So please stick around my fellow Bleach fan!

What more animes are you into?

Have you read Skip Beat? That's the only one I am following right now.

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Maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Apologies..for the late response..and for leaving with a res...coming back tmrw morning,...

Unres..

"Meri galti thi" ... A world of guilt hidden in those three words...guilt for having doubted her, guilt for having forced her to marry him, guilt for playing with her mind by pretending to write his name on her palms, guilt for filling her mind with such hatred for him, that she preferred to burn her palms, than inscribing his name there...

Even after so many years, the guilt consumes him and he consoles himself by gently soothing the wounds, which he still seems to be able to see...wounds which have caused him so much more pain, than they did to Paro...

That several years later, his love has healed her...to the extent that the sight of fire does not bring back the memories of a nightmare...such a lovely thought Ankz...it shows us the strength of their love for each other..

To write about the aag ka circle nightmare might have been a tad cliche...

But you chose to write about the mehndi instead...brilliant...i loved it!!!

Cheers

Maya

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago

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vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

See I would come out and say..

Apart from green... i didn't get anything about blue and orange... ^_^

Hear me out..

I mean I didn't get the scene... like you know.. scenario..

I get whats happening in it.. and everything.. but not the bg..

so i assume its AU.. ^_^

I toh LOVE GREEN

unless you give me an awesome red... ;)

green is relatable.. green is like so realistic.. and you can imagine it happening.. such is the power of green... its a beauty

Blue.. Blue is wishful thinking.. an imagination.. a piece of art conjured in the mind... and it was beautiful.. its like chand ka chakora... he worships her in his own form... it is like Genie... ^_^

Orange is a beauty.. a simple interaction... a simple talk... a simple connection..

Nothing huge or grand.. nothing complex.. but a simple exchange of two connected hearts.. Beauty epitome

So now I come to write ups.. They ARE beautiful.. to say to the least,...

less words... small incidents.,.. and you get the picture...

I feel awe in your words.. Its so beautiful and scenic.. like a portrait painted in words.. such is the power of it...

and then the mingling of words is a beauty to behold

So beautiful baabu.. and such a unique thought to show in every color..

Awesome.. :D

PS: OS bhej diya.. padh lena... hopefully bechara theek aaya ho..

PPS: you might have to post it too.. contact ASAP...

PPPS: I lubh you dher saara... ^_^

Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Awww that's was good and perfect

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
See I would come out and say..

Apart from green... i didn't get anything about blue and orange... ^_^

Hear me out..

I mean I didn't get the scene... like you know.. scenario..

I get whats happening in it.. and everything.. but not the bg..

so i assume its AU.. ^_^

I toh LOVE GREEN

unless you give me an awesome red... ;)

green is relatable.. green is like so realistic.. and you can imagine it happening.. such is the power of green... its a beauty

Blue.. Blue is wishful thinking.. an imagination.. a piece of art conjured in the mind... and it was beautiful.. its like chand ka chakora... he worships her in his own form... it is like Genie... ^_^

Orange is a beauty.. a simple interaction... a simple talk... a simple connection..

Nothing huge or grand.. nothing complex.. but a simple exchange of two connected hearts.. Beauty epitome

So now I come to write ups.. They ARE beautiful.. to say to the least,...

less words... small incidents.,.. and you get the picture...

I feel awe in your words.. Its so beautiful and scenic.. like a portrait painted in words.. such is the power of it...

and then the mingling of words is a beauty to behold

So beautiful baabu.. and such a unique thought to show in every color..

Awesome.. :D

PS: OS bhej diya.. padh lena... hopefully bechara theek aaya ho..

PPS: you might have to post it too.. contact ASAP...

PPPS: I lubh you dher saara... ^_^

AU nahi tha bacche.. One was future canon. And other was past canon-ish..

Par thik hai.. Samjha sahi tune..

Accha Red se meko abhi bhi darr lag raha hai..

Aur thankooo lambe chaude comment ke liye!

Lubh you tooo!!

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
Awww that's was good and perfect

Thanks Lyssa!!

Edited by _SenbonZakura_ - 11 years ago

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Yellow

She just could never really put in words what he was to her. But as she sometimes had the chance to, she was watching him from a corner, thinking about what he had done for her, consciously, and subconsciously.

People, his own people, had told her once upon a time, that he was the burning yellow desert sun. His heat, his unforgiving fire, burned everything in its wake.

They couldn't have been more wrong. She smiled.

Scorched? Yes, she had been scorched by the immense waves of heat that he radiated.

Burned? Yes, she had been burned by him, consumed by the fire in him.

But none of it destroyed her.

He did not ruin her. Instead, like the ever radiant, yellow sun, he had nurtured her into a completely different Paro.

A Paro, who had blossomed like a beautiful flower under his attention.

A Paro, who had become a finer sculpture, being molded by his hands.

For becoming a better, stronger form of herself, she had leaned into his warmth. She had discovered things about her own self which she never thought possible. She had discovered courage, freedom, even audacity, but most important... She had discovered what true love felt like.

So what if the heat was unbearable a few times?

Some fires were worth burning in.

Edited by _SenbonZakura_ - 11 years ago