Seven Hues- A Drabble Series Complete Page 39 - Page 11

Oh my! What a gorgeous idea and an absolutely beautiful series. Can't decide which one I like the best among them. They are all wonderful. But if I had to, I would choose orange, it has the hopefulness of a future, which one always wants. Can't wait to read the rest. You write so well, but you already know that 😊

Hello Ankita!
Wow wonderful idea and series - in my brain I thought I had commented already but I just checked and unfortunately all my comments for you remained in my head! I really hope I am not the only one this happens to!

So here we go with a comment for each
green - Laila meri Laila - even with a few words I could sense her burning and had forgotten that the cloth he placed over Paro was indeed green. Poor Laila she had indeed lost her monster to the chit of a girl and now her own monsters have no one to play with
Awesome last line

blue - 'too good to be true' feelings infuse Rudra's soul he can't believe his luck - guys like him never get the breaks and the girl do they? Beautiful description on Rudta's inner turmoil

And orange - - aha the vast desert, the warm fire, the loving couple and ghosts of their past , but the love shines through both of them even after 'all these years'

And yes your last lines are a treasure in every Drabble - they linger on and attach themselves to your thoughts!

Love your Drabbles! You write beautifully!

Originally posted by: arsha_simran

wowwwiiieee this is amaazing concept!!!!

seven colors... And each color describing something!!!

awesome!!! M loving it!!!

the way everything is told!!! Perfect!!!

some times words aren't needed to express...

and this suits perfectly!!!

Originally posted by: Aish002

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edit:

I feel like such an idiot...😆...its with this third update that I realized that the font color you use matches the color of the drabble..so to celebrate that discovery, I am gonna use the same color too..😃

but credit goes to you cos I was so much captivated by the words that I did not pay attention to anything else..👏

Now about this one...orange...wow..u equated it with..the flames...nice one..the fact that the flames did not remind her of the painful incident from her childhood shows how she has been totally won over by Rudra's love...

and even if its a painful memory that comes up, all her thoughts are now connected to him.the moments in THEIR life..the better ones or the worse ones..and Rudra repents..well..he better...😉

enjoyed reading it..even with a few words, the setting of their camp was perfectly described..😊

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update

You link orange color with the fire, wow

it was very well written and i love the setting, the bonfire.

update next drabble soon.

You are an amazing writer (sorry, had never read any of your work before).
Absolutely loved this one also 👏

Originally posted by: neet2407

Hello Ankita!
Wow wonderful idea and series - in my brain I thought I had commented already but I just checked and unfortunately all my comments for you remained in my head! I really hope I am not the only one this happens to!

So here we go with a comment for each
green - Laila meri Laila - even with a few words I could sense her burning and had forgotten that the cloth he placed over Paro was indeed green. Poor Laila she had indeed lost her monster to the chit of a girl and now her own monsters have no one to play with
Awesome last line

blue - 'too good to be true' feelings infuse Rudra's soul he can't believe his luck - guys like him never get the breaks and the girl do they? Beautiful description on Rudta's inner turmoil

And orange - - aha the vast desert, the warm fire, the loving couple and ghosts of their past , but the love shines through both of them even after 'all these years'

And yes your last lines are a treasure in every Drabble - they linger on and attach themselves to your thoughts!

Originally posted by: Suni

Love your Drabbles! You write beautifully!

I m getting addicted to these drabbles re..falling in luv wid them one day at a time..beautiful!