Seven Hues- A Drabble Series Complete Page 39 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asmi279

I m getting addicted to these drabbles re..falling in luv wid them one day at a time..beautiful!



Thank you Asmi-Sa!


And I am getting addicted to your comments!! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MissAsian

Aaw. I love how Rudra still feels her pain after all these years


He always feels her pain. Always.

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

I loved green and orange! Orange was superlative!


Thanks so much!!

Originally posted by: prettypri

Loved orange...the memory it evoked and the reaction of Rudra to that memory!

Superbly written👏


Thank you Pri-sa!












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Posted: 11 years ago
superb
beautifully written
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niyoti

Anky!

I Love that you thought of the color of the saree Rudra draped around Paro. I really wish the CV's could come down here and see what a perceptive audience they have. That even though it may not be their intention every gesture and scene on this fabulous show is interpreted in so many different ways and held so close to our hearts.

I couldn't have said it better than Navin.

The green of Laila's jealousy also wrapping like a schroud around Paro-- that green is an ugly color, indeed!


And that made the ugly green monster roar, destroying everything else in its wake.


Laila just wanted to kill her. Destroy that Paro for making him a human.


I LOVE these last lines. The hurt at being denied and the desire to be wanted by the one she loves, is morphing into all consuming hatred for the woman who she thinks has stolen what is rightfully hers.

Heaven has no rage like love to hatred turned, nor Hell a fury like a woman scorned.
~ William Congreve

I think this drabble truly embodies the above quote, and to do it in so few words? Bravo!


Exactly. The audience of this show is a crazy bunch. Every scene, no matter how small, is analyzed, interpreted, and held closely. Its amazing and I hope the CVs realize what a gem of a show they are producing!

And I love your comment! Wuv wala love!

If her definition of love wasn't this warped, I think she never would have been denied. Now all she can do is be green. Bas.

The quote is one of my personal favorites!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CyberOstrich

Ankita- would love it if they ever show Rudra and Paro reminisce about old times- especially the captive-captor time someday!! Maybe after all the khulaasas, the dushmans coming out in the open- we have a lull period where these two can talk about this incident you've based ORANGE on? *sigh* wouldnt that be something?!

You have non existant cheeks?! Awww- can I pinch your nose then- affectionately of course?! And I am Shalini 😊


Hey Shalini!

Yep.. If maybe something like this is shown, I'd go all giddy with happiness.


Haahaa! Yeah, you can pinch my nose!! 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
Im getting used to Drabble style of writing
only because someone writes them beautifully

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aruni50218

Orange to match fire eh? 👍🏼 And from the help of google baba, i found it also "assists in recovery from grief" 🤓 So yeah - Fire had been trying to help her from her griefs, since her childhood. Now that Rudra ahs hastened her recovery, they can sit back and reminisce about their past...


Google baba ki jai ho.. Cuz I didn't know that.

Orange just seemed to be fire... Nothing else struck for a weird reason..

And although Rudra's eyes are Amber (a shade of orange technically), I used them too.

Thanks for the comment Aruni-sa! ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HappilyLost

This was great! It must be extremely difficult for you to come up with such relations! And i am glad that I am reading this!

This whole concept of orange and flames was perfectly matched.

And of course how could I miss the amber eyes of Rudra? Totally Loved it!😛😛

That part where he understands the direction of her thoughts was so sweet! And how she says that they are connected is damn beautiful.

orange was equally well written Ankita baisa and the dialogues added to the over all effect of warmth love and understanding.

I am desperately waiting for the next colours and yep I won't leave you soon😆😆



Not that difficult actually. Crazed obsession I have for this show... And my friends too. So, discussing all this crazy stuff makes all this easy. :D

I love his Amber eyes. There was no way I was not gonna mention them!

I am glad that the dialogues didn't seem disjointed or forced!

Thanks Nidhi! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: k.sweet

superb

beautifully written
loved it
thanks for the pm



Thank you.


Thanks. :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
u have me hooked with Orange... "Nahi..." he breathed, taking her palm into his hand, and rubbing it, soothing an imaginary wound, "Meri galti thi."

kya line... uff...

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