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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: sparikh
such beautiful drabbles - the way incorporated the beautiful colors with the feelings..
-Sona

Thank you Sona!!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: SherryGS
Blue

"Regarding you a complete fool for even believing in the first place that such serene blue could exist."

And this is the crux of it. He cannot believe that a human like her exists, he must be a fool. This is what his mind is telling him.

Thanks so much Sherry... That line is one of my favorites too!!

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Sofna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Wow...Anky just read both. They are dabbles yet so deep.

One can feel the green monster very clearly in the first one... And the blue sky that is always there (like paro) yet beyond human reach.

Beautiful!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Sofna
Wow...Anky just read both. They are dabbles yet so deep.

One can feel the green monster very clearly in the first one... And the blue sky that is always there (like paro) yet beyond human reach.

Beautiful!

Thank you so much Sofu-sa!!

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Wow these Drabble series are amazing and fantastic.

Green was awesome. Laila was turning green from envy. She envy Parvati because she took her place in few days for which she die hardly struggle for eight day, charmed Rudra so such an extent that he is no more jallad and respects a khoobsurat aurat. Parvati is the reason of his peace and sanity and he is now human which only she thought was deserve to turn him. Love, attention and respect when is snatch from one and bestowed on someone else changed a person within minutes and that's what happen with Laila.

Blue, it was very beautifully and well written. It was simply fabolous.

Update next Drabble soon

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Wow these Drabble series are amazing and fantastic.
Green was awesome. Laila was turning green from envy. She envy Parvati because she took her place in few days for which she die hardly struggle for eight day, charmed Rudra so such an extent that he is no more jallad and respects a khoobsurat aurat. Parvati is the reason of his peace and sanity and he is now human which only she thought was deserve to turn him. Love, attention and respect when is snatch from one and bestowed on someone else changed a person within minutes and that's what happen with Laila.
Blue, it was very beautifully and well written. It was simply fabolous.
Update next Drabble soon

Thank you. I'll be updating soon!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Orange

She sat down near it, warming herself up in the bright orange glow of it all. The pot was bubbling, and she was happy with the aroma that was coming from it.

They had been moving in a caravan to Jaisalmer, and he had thought that the night hold was necessary.

So, all of his men, along with her, had set up tents in the fine sands of the desert she was so familiar with.

He had lit up a bonfire, and she had brought out the earthen utensils to cook a meal that could be edible enough for them.

Her eyes flickered again to the flames, as they burst here and there every few seconds. And strangely, the thoughts in her head went nowhere to her childhood.

Had she healed that much?

Instead, she reminisced about another scene, which was so far way, it almost seemed like another birth.

"Mat dekh aise..." His voice was raspy as he sat down next to her.

She smiled. Of course he knew what she was thinking about. They were connected.

"Aapki galti nai thi. Maine hi bewakoofi ki thi haath jala ke." She replied softly, watching how his amber eyes were filled with her pain even after all these years.

"Nahi..." he breathed, taking her palm into his hand, and rubbing it, soothing an imaginary wound, "Meri galti thi."

Edited by _SenbonZakura_ - 11 years ago

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

wowwwiiieee this is amaazing concept!!!!

seven colors... And each color describing something!!!

awesome!!! M loving it!!!

the way everything is told!!! Perfect!!!

some times words aren't needed to express...

and this suits perfectly!!!

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

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I feel like such an idiot...😆...its with this third update that I realized that the font color you use matches the color of the drabble..so to celebrate that discovery, I am gonna use the same color too..😃

but credit goes to you cos I was so much captivated by the words that I did not pay attention to anything else..👏

Now about this one...orange...wow..u equated it with..the flames...nice one..the fact that the flames did not remind her of the painful incident from her childhood shows how she has been totally won over by Rudra's love...

and even if its a painful memory that comes up, all her thoughts are now connected to him.the moments in THEIR life..the better ones or the worse ones..and Rudra repents..well..he better...😉

enjoyed reading it..even with a few words, the setting of their camp was perfectly described..😊

Edited by Aish002 - 11 years ago