OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Repentance-Completed. - Page 17

amazing update
hope the third part will focus on rudra and paro

wow... truely reat read... waiting for the next installment.

Amazing part, I'm loving this repentance section of your FF. Plz Plz Plz update the next part soon :)

Yesterday - Part II

Oh my God. I don't know if my heart can take this! And I'm only 25!!

You have delivered brilliantly.After the unbearable despair and disgust of the previous pieces you have taken us back to the narrative.I really enjoyed the insight into Amans mind seeing Rudra through his perspective.Aman is obviously the reader he represents the decency of us all his thoughts mirroring ours.Very clever perspective whilst keeping Rudras thought a mystery to us maybe for maximum impact for the next piece.No doubt Rudra is burning in his own fire of guilt and shame but at the moment he can only survive if he puts his duty first and his mind focused on that.I am glad that you also acknowledged the callousness of the BSD brass in their attitude towards Paro.She is secondary,a mere after thought,what matters to them is the unveiling of the traitor Jamsheem.And here you have excelled yourself.What a character.Apsychopath in the true meaning of the word and you have tried to live him.The clinical way you gave described his thoughts and his intentions show that you have an insight into this type of person.We mere mortals would shudder at such a man but you gave dissected him and then displayed his carcass for us to unwillingly peer at.His utter disregard for any emotion but controlled violence is what signals him out.This man can never repent because there is no remorse or guilt.I think he will stay with us for a long time lurking in our depths and when we hear of another terrorist attrocity we will know how certain people can behave in such an inhuman way.

How quick part 3 comes is never in our hand
It's in ur and ur nets hands as we all know. Yes
it's not enough becoz in last update they were
together but not really together, just being
naked didn't really served its purpose

Saying what I said doesn't mean I didnt
like the update, it's just wen it comes to
something u really like, it's never enough

Just read all of them

You're truly amazing, so talented and creative

Love the way you've written these OSs as "Yesterday" & "Tomorrow"

Just reading about their pain and now their life was so heart wrenching yet so beautiful

It was worth waiting for your update. It was completely Aman and Jashmeen khan. It was an insight into how the mind of people like khan's work and how there is nothing greater for them or above themselves.