OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Repentance-Completed. - Page 19

Originally posted by: StripePurple

This Jasheem Khan...what an amazingly shudder-inducing character you've created here. I've always liked your villains; still think Shyam from Perfection was one of the best ever, but with JK you've scaled new heights, or more correctly, touched new lows. God, country, religion, family- not even one weakness? Dear Lord. I so dearly want to see him "apologising" to Paro right now and being disappointed by her response yet again...yeah I'm morbid that way. Will you be offended if I truthfully say that at this point in the story, I am a lot more interested in him than Rudra, even though that 'repentance' carrot dangling before my eyes is so damn tempting? *ducks brickbats from other readers*

I love a nicely brewing bromance when I see one. & it's high time that Rudra got Aman a Batphone. Really. One day he will thank me for suggesting this, when Aman proves to be his hukum ka ikka in foiling the nefarious plans of JK regarding Paro. I can already see it in my head. Basically what I want to say is...Aman rocks, yeah? More screen space please.😆

Dear Rudra, suffer! Enough said.

And you, lady, must never stop writing. :)

You have done it again napster. What a brilliant update. No I am not upset. Absolutely not. The amazing descriptions of the aman's and jasheem's state of mind had me absolutely dumbstruck. And the contrast was something so beautifully written that the update had me totally involved.

I just love love love Aman! In the show as well I wait for aman to grace the scene with his out of place smiles and sweet concern regarding parvati. But the show did lack something after all. And here you are, completing each and every gap left out by the creatives! I am so glad aman has a voice finally. He doesn't approve of Rudra's lack of concern and his actions mirror his feelings. He even reprimands the man for the very same reason!

There is a contrast between the level of sensitivity of the BSD staff and the senior officials. Though the junior officers seem genuinely concerned, the senior officials are too involved in protecting their precious ranks to care about a young village girl. Is the attitude of General V.K Singh the same? I ask this because he seemed like a very good man in one of the tomorrow part. If that's not the case then I will seriously look forward to his transformation. But aman's dialogue took away the limelight.

The nightmares of both the officials are intricately described. You have taken the concept of repentance to a whole new level napster and I admire you for that.

Rudra doesn't seem to accept parvati's condition and how he is responsible for the same. But he still cares for her doesn't he? I am waiting desperately for him to come back to her and show her that he cares more than anyone else.

And yes, jasheem khan. That man is a sadist!! I thought he did love his family after all. But he has clearly broken all my misconceptions efficiently! And he blames parvati for everything? Surely we'll get some good action scenes in the future as well.

I have no words for your piece of work. This series has me completely hooked, more than the show itself. At times I just don't know what to comment after one of your updates manages to render me speechless. I just try you know, to come up with all kinds of words to describe your writing and yet I know I am not doing you any justice. Just know that I love you ok? I think that would suffice right?

P.S please don't mind but have you stopped sending pms? Its just that I hate to reach late here!