OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Repentance-Completed. - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago
This is an amazing concept and you bring out the nuances so well. I've just caught up with this show and wish the show picks up some ideas from your series :)Rudra is such a tortured soul with Paro being his only hope for redemption. For a change Paro is shown as a strong woman and not the doormat one usually sees in soap operas on television and your series makes her stronger - two thumbs up there! Its almost as if you've got into their minds (of the characters) and brought out the conflicting emotions at every point which is so realistic. Laila is shown with shades of grey too and that was refreshing - I am interested to explore what Rudra felt after that scene between Paro and Laila in the cell - whether he was ready to nominate Paro for sainthood and regret his behaviour with Laila and did the meetings stop (which makes sense as this would be stretching it too far, no wife can be that tolerant 😊
will be watching this space for future updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ek_haseena_thi

who are u the writter of perfection m i rite? from ipkknd with arnav kushi? why u dont finish your story perfection? i was addict to that story. u shld writte on perfection only and then rr, not do rr only like now. i say u shld listen to ur fans.


pls i request to u pls dont write here but go write for perfection only u will get ur fans very happy I post this msg on ur other wittings too. stop writting on rr only, ps msg me. rr has less fans but pkknd has many fans from world over. i am again requestin you to consider pls.



Umm...who are you?
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update Navin dear, i have started falling for this story all over again.. you know what, i am a hardcore Arshi fan. only because of You, i have started reading about rudra and paro( I only read this story).. your writing just gives me goosebumps, thanks for writing dear
regards

anuradha
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Posted: 11 years ago
an awesome piece of writting, nap mon. waiting for next one
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Posted: 11 years ago
Napstermonster u r sum genius with words. i cry when u writte sumthin becoz u get so deep. i am ur fan for 3 yrs. i sent u friendship pm pls accept. i will post ltr.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow just read all parts of this story

loved how you mixed the past and the present

Rudra can't forgive himself for Paro's torture by Khan

can't wait to read how Paro forgives him

awaiting the next part

please PM me when you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
His fall was very well written. Her final question to him 👏.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was reading up Perfection & was so disappointed you had discontinued it when IPK ended. It was so interesting.
Was so enamoured with the way you writethat I couldn't resist reading up on this story inspite of being a die hard fan of Arshi stories. I am also following Rang Rasiya currently & was curious how you were going to treat these in yiur story.

not disappointed...extremely unique way of presenting a story, initially a little disorienting with the contrasting timelines, but later was able to flow with the concept. You have interpreted the Jallad term to the core, more than the serial. So the contrast to the tomorrow part is drastic in the manner in which Paro becomes the obsession, the sole focus if his lfe. Redemption next...looking forward to how it can presented in both the timelines.

Am glad to be now in your time, up to date with what you are writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow is all I can say! Came upon this by accident
Congratulations on you fine writing. I hope you update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Excellent update. I'm glad that Paro has kindness still in her heart to try and heal the Jallad. I'm also happy that the traitor officer is dead as he would have killed Paro otherwise.

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