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Amazingly dark and despairing right from the begining.The atmosphere is claustrophobic and clawing .Your use of descriptive language manages not only to set the scene but also to convey the brooding menacing aura that surrounds that room.The piece starts off erotic but then turns into something so nightmarish that we are repulsed by it and our own initial titilation.Just as Rudra is repulsed by his own actions towards Paro so we too feel the revulsion of the whole situation.It takes a strong heart to read this and Iam sure a stronger heart to write this excellent powerful piece of imagery.There are parts which are so lyrical to make it almost poetic and Iassume that was the intention since it is a dream and so the reaction required from the audience is that of being lulled into the web and then wham hit you with the hideous truth.I cant praise you enough.It is a pleasure to read your writing and come away with an emotional experience.
