OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Forgiveness (completed) - Page 16

Looking forward to the repentance - not IPK style I hope. This has to be looong drawn out and felt by him as I'm sure Paro will forgive him immediately.

That was INTENSE. Napster, I've run out of compliments for you. Just grab a dictionary and look up all sorts of wonderful words for yourself.

But I'll say this again. Baffling psychological complexity. Plot points are brilliant, of course- but these emotions function on a cosmic level in your case.

Perspective is one of your most loyal tools. Each mind, each thought is crystal clear. I should probably be hating Rudra because he ordered the interrogation in the first place. But he was suffering with her. Where does that leave him? Or rather, my opinion of him? Your works need analysis, you know.

I'm eagerly looking forward to the next update. But take your time, because you probably enter these characters, possess them, tap into their thoughts. That must require breathing the characters, not just imagination.

I have enough to ponder upon till the next update.

Dear Napster,

Oh my! So brilliant. Yet again. I need to reread it though :)

i read it!!...i'll reserve my judgement on rudra for the moment..i'll rather wait and see how he turns out to be in REPENTANCE...ram mohan and the other soldiers deserve a standing ovation...they along with aman, well and truly portrayed the humane side of the story...but i must say, after going through this chapter thakur's devious plans sent a shiver down my spine..if rudra of the previous chapter left me disturbed, thakur was far far more menacing...i know it would be difficult for you to present rudra in a new light but i'm quite keen to know how his dynamics with paro are established...

My day had started off at a gloomy note as always. carrying the burden of exam time stress and my family's constant reminder regarding the impending exam, i had sulked silently as usual! and then there was this another tension, an equally serious one i assure you, what will jasheem khan do to our innocent little parvati?

So I had been forced to choose the ugly, sinful, corrupt path of the biggest evil in the land of india forums. Stalking.

Yes I accept in front of every one here. I HAD STALKED THIS OS. *sobs bitterly* for hours I had wished to see that green circle glow representing online status and lighten this world of darkness. I had complained and pouted even .

this is the sole reason why I had jumped up in excitement earning myself quite a few ugly stare when I saw your post. Trust me, I had been on cloud nine.

I have already told you how much I like your writings. Yes I may not have gone through the same anxieties while reading perfection, mainly because I had read that in one go, but I know what effect your cliffhangers have on readers like me.

I cannot praise your works without exhausting my already over exploited vocabulary. I can just say that I hated almost all paragraphs except the last three one and I guess it's the biggest compliment for you. Your work had the needed effect on the me and it had been too hard to stop those tears that threatened to break loose any moment.

Throughout the update I had been coaxing myself to read the next line and the next one and the next one yet again and this is how I completed reading it. It was really really hard to read about the torture which was supposed to happen and if you had been here I would have given you one real big bear hug for not showing it.

I know I am quite irrational here, because I know people like jasheem khan do exist. But the evil laughter that escaped my mouth while reading the last paragraphs was quite expected!!

OK. I know I must have bored you but just like always couldn't help myself. You have left us at a cliffhanger yet again. I wont complain but do not forget that I am desperately waiting for the next part.

But alas, I know you wont disappoint so no complains not even pouting this time.

P.S did I say I loved your series? You must be knowing by now though!!😆

Well what can I say? This just keeps getting better and better. The last chapter had me in tears for the brutal wounds being inflicted on her and this chapter for the fate Paro has resigned herself to. Her goodbye call to Aman was heartbreaking. I'll admit for 1 fleeting moment when Aman came in to the cell I did wonder if he was speaking to Paro in that tone to try and distance himself from her and the sibling relation that have both come to recognise it to be. Luckily it didn't last long because no matter what's been said and done I think Aman has always had it in him to know she's innocent.

Oh! Wow!!! Did I juz watch a movie??? Fantabulous!!!
Nothing else to say...
I'd been staring at my tab as if my life depended on it and realized the same only after I finished it...
Awesomely brilliant yaar...

Give us mooore!!!!

absolutely loved it. u render me speechless with ur fabulous writing.. I can see all this happening in my mind's eye.. immensely realistic.. keep it up! 👏

OMG! OMG! OMG!
What an update.
At the beginning I thought Aman was talking about paro bit when it turned out to be kesari ram that was a good twist.
Aman really played his cards right when he managed to get kesari to talk but by then I had a funny feeling it was khan.
Finally Rudra showing his soft side a little after everything when he held paro in his arms almost cradling her.
Loved how Rudra's instinct finally kicked in when he thought something was wrong.
On one side Rudra on the other Aman and in the end ram mohan was the one who took a shot.
Absolutely fantastic update.