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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Thank you So much for my Treat ...muaahhh ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Amazing Update Sweets, ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ super duper cute return gift ๐Ÿ˜ƒ kya baat hain Chandana ke birthday ke din we got first installment of Aayush's birthday ๐Ÿ˜Š truly loved it sweets. You have written it very beautifully with all the emotions & little naughtiness too ๐Ÿ˜›

Just read the whole update it was cute & heart touching truly. i am sorry for being late as usual but was really stuck in work ๐Ÿ˜ณ WOW aayush is having awesome birthday everyone is having lods of gifts for him. so cute. I love the bonding shared by father son here ๐Ÿ˜Š he enroll aayush for basketball awesome. & cycle matlab ab papa beta milke dhamaal karenge ghar mein ๐Ÿ˜› Khanak's gift ..what can i say it was priceless & the best birthday gift aayush will ever receive in his life๐Ÿ˜ƒ really photo frame & that video containing his best childhood memories ๐Ÿ˜Š hats off to your thinking, it was really over whelming ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Shaan & his romance he is getting cuter day by day. khanak searching his shirt & that beautiful romantic moment shared by both ...Awesome ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Raj is getting impatient to meet Would be wifey & Shanak pulling his leg was awesome. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† WOW ita great to see Misha after a long time. Nisha immediately recognize her & me too specially raj & misha's first meet ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Goshh Raj is too naughty bechaari ko tease kar raha hain with EX & poor girl is burning with jealousy ๐Ÿ˜Š i want nisha to give him tough time manofying her for making her sad. Mazaa aayegaa ๐Ÿ˜ƒ *excited*

Waiting for next part & thank you so much for update ...huggsss ๐Ÿค—

Once again very happy birthday. Hope you had blast.

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chandu loved 102 and 103 updates
Ayush birthday and Khanak gift
waiting for Raj and Nisha marriage and pre wedding functions
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Beautifully penned Chand ๐Ÿ˜Š
i have read missing parts after so many days yaar
and the birthday part made me cry thank God my hubby n MIL were not home when i read this heheheheh!!!
it was very emotional yaar khanak talking about his bro n bhabhi ๐Ÿ˜ญ n then that video was so sweet yaar all moment of khanak with her family and Aayush moments the way he grown up from his birth of 3 days n months
shanak sweet moments are always beautifully penned Chand i loved it โค๏ธ
i loved the concept n narration of the video its mind blowing sweetie ๐Ÿ‘
misha is der n Raj said Ex marna hai kya useh heheh!! Nisha is Jealous n thinking of something else Poor Raj aabh toh pitega heheh!!
i know m not regular like before in reading n commenting but plz yaar don't end it soon i love the way u r taking this story including many things birthday of Aayush, wedding of Nisha n Raj n our shanak moments i want to read more on shanak more khanak mood swings lolzz!!! n Jealousy shaan ๐Ÿ˜†
wll wait to read next part ๐Ÿ˜Š
loads of love ๐Ÿ˜Š ur kheer ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely updates chandu ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oye Sweets kitthee ya?? apne birthday baad jo gayab huyi hain woh tu wapis dikhi hi nahi ๐Ÿ˜’

Update soonnn waiting for Aayush party
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello๐Ÿ˜Š

Aasma- apologies..hope this one makes up..๐Ÿ˜Š Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š

poo- will try to include the other 2 also๐Ÿ˜‰ Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š

Maneesha- Thank you so much dear๐Ÿ˜Š i take a bow to you..your posts all look wonderful, hope one day i'll be a part of it..exam time!!!๐Ÿ˜Š

Jaisy- Thanks a lot dear๐Ÿ˜Š

Pranju- Huugggsss!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ im still waiting for my gift..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›

sudha- Thanks a lot dear๐Ÿ˜Š

Kheer- you're the best!!! miss you a lot!! Thanks so much!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Mounika- long time..hope your doing fine..Thanks a lot๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks a lot for everyone who has pressed like๐Ÿ˜ƒ i don't think so i deserve so much..

Maneesha and pranju- congrats!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ for the IF- Dazzlers!!

OK, here it is..curse me if you don't like it..

Part 104

Khanak is pacing around her room, confused, stressed, cursingโ€ฆwell that's how Shaan finds her in their room..He smiles amused, walks in and closes the room door..She's fa\cing towards the closet, he had carried a bag, he places it on the bed and slowly envelops her from back, his hands on her baby bump, his chin resting on her shoulder..

Shaan: kya hua?? (asks ever so gently)

Khanak: shaan..i've become fat, mera koi bhi dresses fit hi nahi ho raha hain (moved to tears) abb main kya pehnungi, aur maine shopping bhi nahi ki, mujhe time hi nahi mila..Aayush birthday ki plan main bhul hi gayi ki..

Shaan: (turns her around and hugs her to his chest) sshhh! Don't cry Khanak..its good only!

Khanak: (raises her head from his chest and looks accusingly at him) matlab??

Shaan: matlab..(holds her face in his hand) I've got you something..

Khanak: (slowly breaks into smile) really?? Main dekh sakthi hun?? (her eyes glitters)

Shaan: (he leans forward and puts his arms around her neck, his forehead leaning on hers) ek sharth par??

Khanak: sharth?? Kaisi sharth?? (confused)

Shaan: umm..if you promise a date for me, then..(his eyes glitter too)

Khanak: date?? Shaan..we have a marriage going on in our house..(moves out of his hold, but he holds her by her waiste, at first she's startled, she stares into his eyes)

Shaan: promise me Khanak! (demands, but in the most sweetest way, he bends down ever so slowly, her baby bump in between them)

Mom! Mom! Mom! Aayush comes running into their room, Shaan releases her, they look towards the door, Aayush is followed by Nisha..

Aayush: papa aap aagaye?? (he hugs Shaan's legs, now coming upto his waiste, Shaan ruffles his hair)

Shaan: guess what?? I got a new set of spiderman games (winks at Aayush)

Aayush: really?? (happy, Aayush's new profound love for spiderman after watching the movie with his mom and papa!)

Khanak: time out! My turn! Meri wali gift kahan hain? (whines)

Nisha: oh god! You've got two kids! (to shaan) (mocks and giggles)

Shaan: you bet! (grins)

Khanak: Funny! Nisha tumhe apne hi sangeet main late pahunchna hain?? (gives her challenging look)

Nisha: umm..(clears her throat) no! im going to go get ready..(runs from there)

Aayush: main bhi..(runs from there)

Khanak turns to Shaan, gives him a sarcastic smile..Shaan is confused..

Shaan: what did I do know?? (confused)

Khanak: Nothing! (smiles and takes the bag which he had kept on the bed)

He smiles amused at her again..At first, she asked him to give and now she just grabs it, she does know how to get her things her way..His wife! Past month was not easy..well that was in a good way..

She would demand things more boldly now! Craving more for eatables, getting up at an ungodly hour at night..Once it had happened..

He had woken up to find him alone on the bed, startled he gets off the bed..

Shaan: Khanak! (checks for her in the bathroom, but she's no where in their room)

He wonders, he walks out of the room, checks in Aayush's room, but still she's not there..he gets scared, he walks down the hall, moves towards dadi room (she would do that, whenever she felt, she used to just walk into dadi's room and would listen to dadi's calm words) but sees the light in the kitchen arena..

Shaan: oh ya! I should have guesses this! (mocks)

Walks slowly to the kitchen only to be careened by his one and only brother..

Shaan: bhai! Aap kya kar rahe ho yah ape??

Akshay: tum kiss liye aaye ho, ussi ke liye main bhi yaha par hun!

Shaan: matlab?? (confused)

Akshay eyes Shaan to see inside the kitchen, Shaan is not surprised, neither Akshay was, they exchanged a look before entering in to the kitchen..

Khushboo: Khanak ek flavor kaaho na..do do kahoge toh sardi ho jayegi..

Khanak is in a dilemma, still deciding, whether to eat vanilla or chocolate..Khushboo was 7th month and Khanak in her 5th month..

Khanak: umm..umm..Aayush ko chocolate pasand hain, mujhe vanilla aur shaan ko dono..confusion toh haina bhabhi..(makes a sad face)

Khushboo: aww! (makes a puupy face)

Outside the kitchen..

Akshay: Shaan agar hum inn dono ko chod diya na, toh poora ka poora fridge kaali kar denge..

Shaan chuckles hearing that, they just enter kitchen..

Akshay: Khushboo..abb bas, chalo so jao..

Khushboo: Akshay abhi main sirf aadha bowl hi khaya hain..(whines and continues to eat her strawberry ice cream)

Akshay finally succeeds in getting Khushboo out of the kitchen, both of them bid Shanak a good night and leaves..

Meanwhile, Khanak has placed a scoop of vanilla and chocolate in her cup and has helped herself to the nuts which are used for desert..

Khanak: tum mujhe nahi rokhoge?? (looking down into her bowl)

Shaan: At 7th month yes! But for now, you can relish it..(winks at her)

She smiles and extends a spoonful to him, he takes it..

Khanak: abb hogaya ha, abb main aur share nahi kar sakthi..(pulls the bowl to herself and starts eating)

Shaan chuckles and watches her eating, at some point, she stops eating and stares at him as he leans more closer, she squirms in her seat..opens his mouth on her nose and licks off the ice cream, she leaves out a gaspโ€ฆhis one hand cups her cheek, and the other wounds around her waiste, bringing her up and making her lean on him, he stares unblinking into her eyes, her eyes show nervousness at this unexpected intimate moment..his fingers slowly trace on her cheeks, then her upper lip, making her shiver, his lips slowly coming down on hers, she kisses him with equal fervent..

Coming back to present..

Papa and champ are all ready..Both looking dashing, but Aayush is the most cutest and Shaan is dressed to kill..Hamare dulhe raja bhi ready hai..

Nisha steps down, wearing off white ghaghra looking gorgeous, as Raj can't take his eyes off..but Khanak is missing though..Shaan goes upstairs to look for Khanak..There she is, wearing, blue- pink combination ghaghra, blue blouse, with less sequins and pink gharghra flowing elegantly upto her ankle, her hair left out, she looks ravishing with all the ornaments on..She's sitting on the bed, her palm on her bulged tummy..

Shaan: (sits next to her, worried) Khanak, kya hua??

Khanak: (she turns to him, her eyes filled with tears) Shaan..

Shaan: Khanak!! What happened?? Why are you crying?? (startled out of his wits)

Khanak: Shaan..i just felt the movement of baby..(smiling through her tears)

Shaan: (slowly smiles) really?? (places his palm on her tummy)

Khanak: see..did you feel?? (ecstatic)

Shaan: (next moment she find herself in his arms) im very happy today!

They steal the moment for themselves..

Well ahead into the function, Khandelwal house is filled, kids for Aayush's birthday party and plus elders for Raj and Nisha's sangeet..

The lights are dimmed, Aayush stands where ever he is, music starts and there stands Shaan mouthing words for Aayush..

Shaan: Tu Agar Chahe To Dhoop Mein Baarish Ho
Phool Khil Jaayein To Teri Farmaaish Ho
Aaja Nachle Ve Nachle Ve Nachle Ve Nachle Ve Nachle Ve
Tu Vi Nachle Ve
Tu Chahe To Hawaein Tere Hi Geet Gaayein
Tu Chahe To Sitarein Tere Raastein Sajayein
(pulling Aayush into the dance, people join in, Khanak just claps and smiles)

Jitne Bhi Aasmaan Hai Tere Aage Sar Jhukaayein
Aaja Nachle Ve Nachle Ve Nachle Ve Nachle Ve Nachle Ve
Tu Vi Nachle Ve Tu Vi Nachle Ve

Khanak : (sings the song holding his hand, but doesn't dance)

Koi Dhun Masti Mein Gaaye Ja
Oonchi Neechi Raahon Mein Muskuraye Ja
Meri Sun Sapne Sajaaye Ja
Phir Apne Yeh Sapne Sabko Dikhlaaye Ja

Shaan pulls Aayush to the dance once again..

Shaan: Tere Liye yahaan Pe Hai
Kuch Bhi Nahin Namumkin
Voh Jeena Kya Jeena
Jo Ke Ho Masti Ke Bin
Aaja Nachle Ve Nachle Ve Nachle Ve Nachle Ve Nachle Ve
Tu Vi Nachle Ve Tu Vi Nachle Ve

Loud clapping for the trio, has they hugged each other, Aayush in the middle..Whole Khandelwal family joining in..Khushboo is more emotional than Khanak..

Aayush: thank you mom and papa!!! (yells) Can I ask something??

Shaan: ofcourse champ! Go ahead..(smiles and lifts him up in his arms)

Aayush: Actually I have to ask Raj uncle and Nisha aunty for this..

Shaan and Khanak have no clue either, Raj and Nisha smiles..

Nisha: yeh bhi poochne ki koi baat hain?? Bolo na..

Raj: haan Aayush..

Aayush: can I be the DJ?? (with the most innocent look and pleading eyes)

Khanak: Aayush..

Aayush: Mom pleaseโ€ฆ(pleads)

Raj: achcha teek hain! We'll see..agar mujhe pasand nahi aaya toh then we'll see..(gives the challenging look)

Aayush: uske liye chance hi nahi hain..! (confident)

Raj: dekhthe hain..

Nisha: Aayush im on your side..(smiles broadly at Aayush, while Raj looks at her)

Aayush: Ok then..first..umm..we'll start with Raj uncle and Nisha aunty..Dhruv uncle aap bhi join kar sakthe hain, Nithya aunty ke saath..

Aayush whispers the song into their ears and runs off..they are not able to tell no, others are left in wonder..

Music starts..

Boy- O what a look, what a grace
Tenu hi karan main chase
What a naksh what a nain
Dil tera ho gaya fan
What a smile, what a style...
Kabhi soft, kabhi rude kinna tera attitude

Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke (x2)

Girl- O teri ankh da ishaara mujhe fraud lage
Tu toh Majnu aawaara by God lage

Boy- O kasme waade khake apni pocket money bacha ke
Aaya tere liye paise waise jod jaad ke..

Boy- Teri galli mein bhi aana start kar diya
Ik tere naam apna heart kar diya
Karne laga aankh matakka
Ab toh aashiq ban gaya pakka

Girl- Aaj abhi maine tera boycott kar diya
Teri saari harqatein main toh note karu
Tujhe thaane mein le jaake main report karu oye

Boy- Tu na kar aise fight
Tera mood main karu light
Tujhe scene mein dikha ke golmaal ke

Naam tera hi likhaya maine wedding card pe
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

Girl- Chal jhutta.. mere liye signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

Aayush enjoys his game a lot, loud clapping after the dance, Raj and Nisha were cute as thought they meant the song..Nithya was smiling broadly for a change, finally she was blending..

Khanak claps for her friends, at the same time she's pulled by Shaan, his hand is holding her arm, she looks startled at him..He signals her to be silent, and pulls her out of the cord, at the same time doing thumbs up to Misha, while Misha winks at them..

Khanak: Shaan where are you taking me??

Shaan: Wait Khanak..

They reach a room, its not theirs..Khanak wonders, she was told it was closed..But now..He opens the door for her, the room looks beautiful, he had decorated it, room is painted in combination with pink and blue, there are two cradles..Khanak looks at Shaan..

Shaan: Actually, bhai aur maine decide kiya ki, dono babies ka ek hi nursery hoga..(shrugs and smiles)

Khanak: (smiles) This is so beautiful Shaan..Thank you..(hugs him, tears flow down)

Shaan: Khanak..(wiping her tears, at the same time holding her in his arms)

And suddenly, he releases her and leans in front of her..Khanak looks at him..

Shaan: May I have a dance Mrs. Shantanu Khandelwal! (extending his hand)

Khanak: ofcourse! (holds his hand) But hum bahar sab ke saath bhi toh kar sakthe hai na??

Shaan: yeah..but yaha par ek dance aur bahar ek dance aur..

Khanak: do do??

Shaan: yep! So shall we?? (standing up, his hand wounds around her waiste, she leans in)

Khanak: aur music?? (looking into his eyes, softly mocking)

Shaan: umm..ya..

Shaan: Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Khanak giggles hearing that, he sings for her

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

She completely leans on his chest, thanking all her stars to have found him for her..Her own parents wouldn't have given her so much love, he's showering her with all his love, like there's no tomorrow, he's the world to her, her happiness lies inside him, and he'll be the only one for her, forever..

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Khanak continues in her voice the next few lines..

Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi hoโ€ฆ

Lost in each other arms, they stood in their future baby's room..They would fall deeper into each other's love everyday, every minute..They would never fail bring that smile on each other's face, the only reason of happiness in their life was them! And ofcourse Aayush!

Please comment๐Ÿ˜Š

Guys im lined up for my internals, got lots to do..please oblige..i'll be back by 25th ๐Ÿ˜Š
Take care all of you๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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posted madam๐Ÿ˜ƒ
once again a not completed one๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kisses smileys Kisses smileys Kisses smileys Kisses smileys Kisses smileys Kisses smileys Kisses smileys

Lods of hugss and Kisses Sweets for jhelofying my request and i must say you are super fast yaar. โญ๏ธ Kya awesome update likha hain that too in such a short time. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

This was an ultimate cutie cute update๐Ÿ˜Š Beautiful Concept of merging Birthday and sangeet ceremony together and top of it awesome presentation. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ loved it to the Core ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ i am gonna read this again though i already did it ๐Ÿ˜› amazing dear ...Beautifully Written.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

I love this Shaan he pampers wifey so much he is too patient i must say. khanak was upset as she is gaining weight and she forget to buy something for her but Shaan can never forget his sweetheart ๐Ÿ˜ƒ he brought gift for both Aayush and Khanak. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ loved how khanak made Nisha aayush leave the room. I agree to nisha Shaan is currently having two kids and his sweetheart is youngest ๐Ÿ˜› loved the whole description of Dresses Nisha and khanak both looks ravishing ๐Ÿ‘ Aayush's demands to be the DJ Nisha supporting was a cute one and DJ's first track ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Apt for Raj and NIsha. amazingly written had fun reading it.

Loved the past described by you it was ultimately cute and i loved it very much. ๐Ÿ˜Š khusboo and khanak both eating ice creams and bro's talks loved how cutely Akshay made khushboo quit eating it. ๐Ÿ˜† Shanak kiss was hot ๐Ÿ˜‰ WOw akshay shaan created nursery for babies ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ shanak dance was supremely romantic loved the song choice its vrish's current fav ๐Ÿ˜Š Madam i do have complain ๐Ÿ˜’ why you didnt included Raj Nisha scene here as in last update Nisha was angry when she met Misha and got to know she is Raj's EX ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† i was expecting cute nok jhok our stud trying to manofy future wifey. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I'll be done with my exams in a week and surely start a new SS on shanak ๐Ÿ˜Š but as an treat will post Anokha ehsaas next part next week ๐Ÿ˜Š Happy ...you'll get your gift promise and thanks i am a dazzler now finally got rid of that yellow ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Waiting for next ๐Ÿ˜ƒ continue soon

Love U
Pranjal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww loved it chandu babe
pranjal ur gonna erite an ss yayy
x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Absolutely loved it!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ This has to be one of the best updates of Raabta!!!

Khanak is worried as she is becoming fat..Awww!!! Shaan is too good..He got her dress...๐Ÿ˜ŠShaNak date..Cool!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ Shaan knows how to make everyone happy.. He brought the spider man game for Aayush too!!! Cool!!!

Khandelwal bahus cravings for ice-creams..๐Ÿ˜† And Khanak is confused to eat which flavor..๐Ÿ˜† Too cute!!! And Shaan lets her to eat..Such a good hubby he is!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ

Wow!!! ShaNak felt their baby moment!!! Awesome!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Lovely dance by ShaNak and Aayush..๐Ÿ˜Š And Aayush wants to be DJ..He knows how to get what he wants..๐Ÿ˜†

OMG!!! Wow!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ The baby room must be a pleasant surprise and an amazing gift for Khanak..๐Ÿ˜Š

And ShaNak dance on "Tum Hi Ho" so apt..๐Ÿ˜ƒ Loved it to the core!!!โค๏ธ

Looking forward and thank you for writing a fantastic update!!!๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago

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