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Posted: 13 years ago
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HELLO😊

@aasma - Thank you so much, its ok if you don't comment frequently, i can understand but please do press like button😊

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@niki - thanks a lot niki😊 & im glad that you haven't forgotten me, yes im studying medicine & i've got a month holiday, so thought of writing😉 i still have to catch up with your updates, will comment soon😊

@ yasharanrox- hey maneesha😊 i was waiting for you, coz i remember that you were the first one to comment on my welcome note😊 Thanks a lot for commenting and liking the story

@ktymfan- thank you so much saroj😊 you've got it right😊 but the path their story take won't be boring😉

@Pranjal- thanks a lot😊
i really feel happy to see your comments. i think Shaan is curious about their relation, but not jealous😊

thank you so much guys for commenting and liking the story, if you're not liking it please do tell😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

The day was over, shaan is super tired when he reaches his house, he couldn't go to his clinic. He just enters his room, showers and changes to his night clothes. He had met many people and is schedule was final, he'll be in the hospital from 9 to 12 and at the clinic from 4. He was free in the afternoon, he wanted to denote this time in useful manner, by doing research or by spending his time with his parents. He had made friends in the hospital of different departments.

He had seen children ward and his list of patients, whom he'll be seeing, was mentioned. He had seen Aayush having good time in the children ward, he was free with them and he knew each and every kid, and not to forget even the nurses. He was pampered by all of them, the doctors, the nurses, the patients parents, all knew him. He had not seen a kid like him. He thought that Aayush was strong maybe because of the loss he had gone through at really very young age. Even Dr. Khanak, she had lost her patients also, but also strong, he could never think about life without his parents.

Maybe even they are missing their family, but both of them had grown from that accident. She had become strong enough to face the whole world and she had also made Aayush strong. He had never met a girl like her, he had made female friends, but he was never close to none. Something about those eyes, it was haunting him, but not sure what the reason is'

He was disturbed by his phone, it was his brother from London. He spoke to his brother for about an hour and then sleep had taken him off the world'

Khanak was also super tired for the day. She had to work late today, as she was late in morning. Aayush had slept off at the hospital, she had carried him to the car, made him sleep at the back seat, and she drove the car, it's Polo, VW car. Her Polo was gifted by her father on her 24th birthday.

Flashback 'In the morning, she was woken up by a loud sound, she had woken startled, her whole family were there, her papa, mom, her brother and her bhabhi, aayush had been very small at that time. All were singing happy birthday for her, she was very happy, before she could reply, her brother tied a cloth to cover her eyes. She was confused.

Khanak: bhai, kya kar rahe ho

Brother: Kuch nahi, tumhare liye surprise hain (they take her out of the house, she has no idea what the surprise is, she's confused but still smiling) Her brother opens her eyes and all of them shout for her SURPRISE!!!!! She had just ran near the car, all of them moved towards her.

Khanak: yeh mere liye hain????

Dad: nahi, woh main padosi ke bachche ke liye laaya tha (jokes)

Khanak: papa (she's so overwhelmed, she goes and hugs him), thank you so much I really loved the car (speaks to her papa's chest) Kya main isse chala sakthi hun??

Bro: nahi nahi, puja karle uski (jokes)

Khanak: bhai, stop teasing, ab aap papa bi bangaye ho (smiles)

Bhabhi: aap bhi na, use ched na band ki jiye'

Khanak: suna bhabhi ne kya kaha (teases her brother, by showing her tongue out)

Bro: to rukk main abhi batatau tujhe(she runs and her brother runs behind her) Her mom stops them.

Mom: ab bas bahut hua, pehle jaake snaan karle, baad mein chala lena. That was her best birthday ever, has that was her last birthday with her parents'(flashback is over)

A tear rolls down on her cheeks, she wipes it. By this time they had reached her apartment, she carried Aayush and asked the watchman uncle to carry her laptop bag. She thanks him, when they reaches her house she shuts the door and make aayush to sleep on the bed, she kisses him on his forehead. She takes shower, changes and stand in front of her family photo, which is in her room, which was taken during her parent's Anniversary, all are smiling. She stares at the photo longingly, as though she's living that memory. Finally, she hits the bed, and sleeps next to Aayush. Aayush had got his own room, but he couldn't sleep alone.

A beautiful morning for Khanak and Shaan, he had reached the hospital early than hour, has he had to do the rounds and an operation lined for him. He wore his coat from his new cabin, which was shown by Dr.Lata and steth in his hands, heading towards children general ward, a nurse was accompanying him.

He entered the room and was shocked to see the room.

please do comment, im not sure about this part...
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Awesome update Dear ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Much needed part as this part made us more close to the character of Doctor Shaan. Doctor khanak & aayush, :) beautifully written dear, This part gave us very close & clear view about their personal life. 👏

Shaan reaching home exhausted Thinking abt his Day & Specially about the amazing Duo he met today. Khanak & aayush,. Loved that. Khanak carrying Aayush to car & Drove towards home. Its his regular routine to spend time in hospital with Mom after school. 😊

Flashback was very Touchy, emotional cute & at the same time fun to read, Loved the FB, awesome it was, A happy Family, Father daughter interaction, Bro sis fights & bhabhi supporting SIl …….Loved that, perfect picture. I loved your detailing about every activity,👏

Shanak reached early today. & Shaan is shocked to see the room ……..KYun?? DID aayush with his other friends from children's ward had arranged an surprise for his new friend Dr, Shaan??? 😕

I am curious to know about it,😃

Continue Soon, Waiting for the next part 😃


Love

Pranjal.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooow lovely update do continue asap xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the update was beautiful😊 khanak's story is emotional felt bad for her
so shan and khanak r back to thier work but wat shan c that made him shocked?
waiting for it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update
shaan thought abt his day n abt Aayush n khanak
the flashback was vry nice n emotional too
her papa gifted her a car n this was vry touchy moment n teasing part of his bro was awesome
next day both woke early n headed to thier work wat makes shaan so shocked
waiting eagerly for next part
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
lovely update
this was an imp part to get a more clear view abt the characters and how they are dealing with daily issues
shaan thinking abt ayush and khanak... and those black pool will keep haunting him
hmm the FB was cute
lukin fwd to next
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
lovely update
i am curious to know more about these
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HELLO😊

@Pranjal - Thank you so much once again for beautiful comments, im glad you liked it😊

@ktym - Thanks a lot😊

@aasma - Thank you so much yaar😊

@jaisyjazz - Thanks a lot😊

@heer - Thanks a lot😊

@ IF_rida - Thanks a lot😊

@minnu- Thank you so much😊

@yasharanrox - Thanks a lot maneesha😊

Thank you for who have pressed the like button, thank you guys for beautiful comments😊

im so sorry guys, i've editted this part for 5 times but still its not getting alligned, im so frustated, im really sorry😊😊😊
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago

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