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Posted: 13 years ago
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HELLO 😊 guys im going in ease with this part, please tell whether its wright or wrong😊

Part 4

The whole ward (ward of nearly 15 beds) was messed up by the kids, all were sitting very steadily, not talking not eating they are just sitting with a frowned face and all their blankets, toys were thrown around, all the things are lying on the ground. Their parents are trying to talk to them, but none agrees to it. Shaan is a bit confused at that situation, he's standing still.

Their comes Dr. Khanak, running and stops in the middle of the room, and she's not shocked by the scene, she knew this was coming. She turns and sees Dr. Shaan standing with a confused expression, she smiles at him and turns towards the kids. She takes a long breath'

Khanak: Hello kids, good morning (smiling broadly) But none answers her, all are starring at her. She goes near a bed, to a kid.

Khanak: Kya hua?? Aap log breakfast kyun nahi kaa rahe hain?? Achche bachche aisa nahi karte hai!!

Kid 1: aap jo kar rahe ho, who sahi hai?? All kids get up from their bed and move towards her, with the serious expression on their faces. Khanak senses tension, to make it cool, she coolly walks over and picks all the toys.

Khanak: Maine?? Maine kya kiya?? (innocent)

Kid 2: time kya hai abhi ?? Khanak looks at her watch, realizes that she's half an hour late, though her duty starts from 9, everyday she used to come early only for the kids sake.

Khanak: sorry (holds her ears) main kya karthi, who Aayush hai na, he woke late today, uski waja se late ho gayi, sorry!! (smiles)

Kid 3: Sorry se kaam nahi chalega (pouts) Khanak is thinking of a ploy, to make them forgive her

Khanak: Ok aap log jho kahoge na main who maanongi, please, last time maaf kar do!!

Kid 4: jo kahenge who karna hoga aapko (points a finger at her)

Khanak:Sure, karongi na, but please kuch difficult mat dena'

All kids are now grinning and rubbing their hands, they make her sit in on the bed, and they see Dr. Shaan seeing and smiling at the situation, they make him also sit on one of the chairs kept for visitors, which is diadonally opp from Khanak. All kids surround her, their parents are also smiling, as they knew all this coming up for her. One kid kneels in front of her on the bed.

Kid: aapko gaana padega, hamare liye (all kids are smiling)

Khanak: Aap mazak kar rahe ho hai na?? main gaa vaa nahi sakthi (she tries to get up, but the kids never allow

Kid: Aapko gaana padega, nahi to hum, khana nahi khayenge. Everyone pouts'

Khanak: ok fine, but one last time, ok?? All kids start smiling, and are eagerly waiting, she starts

The song is Raabta- Shreya Ghoshal's version-

Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye

Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu

Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai

Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye'

While singing, she makes the kids to eat, she cleans around and sings the song only for them, she sang the song like she's use to sing it every day. After she finished the song, all kide very happy, and hugged her, even she was happy for the kids. She noticed Shaan seeing at her, she came back to herself and she ordered the kids to go back to their bed and she went near Dr. Shaan, a bit embarrassed'

Khanak: Sorry Doctor, they are used to do this, aap naye ho na issliye aapko pata nahi hain (smiles)

Shaan: (gets up) so everyday u'll sing a song for them?? (smiling)

Khanak: nahi nahi, agar main har roz gaana gaathi, toh hospital main patients hi nahi aate (smiles)

Shaan: nahi Dr. Khanak, you sang really well (smiles) K's little embarrassed. And after that they took the rounds and Khanak had assisted him in the operation.

The whole week had passed with much spoken, but only about their proffesion, in the meanwhile, Aayush had become closer to Shaan, as Shaan had tried to get close to him, it had worked and both of them had become good friends..

It was Sunday, Khanak had promised Aayush to take him out, they had left their house by noon. They had reached a mall, K is wearing jeans and a black T-shirt, A is wearing 3/4th pant and a red T-shirt. Aayush wants to play games, so she takes him to game station.

Shaan had come out with his parents for shopping, don't know after how many days, in that matter months'They enter a mall, you can say co-incidence or destiny, even they are in the same mall.

Khanak and Aayush had left the game station, now aayush wanted to roam around. He's just twirling around and running, Khanak also running behind. She's happy to see him happy. Aayush runs until he collides with a woman, its Madhvi, Aayush feels sorry, Khanak comes there at that time. Madhvi bends down to check with aayush,

Madhvi: aap teek tho ho na???(smiles) Aayush just hugs khanak legs and slightly nods.

Khanak: im so sorry, he was just excited(smiles) (pats his shoulder)

Madhvi: oh no problem, bachcha hi tho hain(smiles sweetly and pats his head)

Khanak: hmm.. I think we should leave now, nice meeting you aunty(smiles)

Madhvi:yeh, aapka bachcha hain???

Khanak:hmm.. yes(smiles)

Madhvi: aap bahut young dikte ho(shocked)

By this time shaan and sunil had reached where Madhvi was standing and Shaan is shocked to see Khanak and Aayush there and at the same time happy too, to see them .

Shaan: Hey aayush, hello Dr.Khanak (with a smile) Khanak is surprised to see him

Khanak: Hello (smiles) (Aayush sees him and he's happy to see him) Aayush runs towards him'

Aayush: Hello uncle (hugs his legs) (Shaan picks him up)

Shaan: Kaise ho aap???

Aayush: bahut achcha (smiles sweetly)

Madhvi: Shaan tum inhe jaante ho??? (she is surprised, sunil is just watching)

Shaan: Yes, mom dad, Dr.Khanak hamari hospital main kaam karthi hain (smiles)

Madhvi: So, nice (to K), aapke husband bhi aaye hain???

Khanak is silent and a bit shy, she just bites her lower lip, she's about to reply but

Shaan: Mom, she's not married (Mads is totally confused) before she could think some more,

Shaan: Mom, chill, Aayush, Khanak ki bhaiyya ka beta hain (smiles)

Madhvi: ooh, nice, kitna pyaara bachcha hain, hain na Sunil???

Sunil: woh tho hain (smiles) Chalo beta saath main khaana khaate hain (to K)

Khanak: No uncle, u carry on hame chalna chaiyiye, chalo aayush neeche utharo.

Aayush: Mom aaj Shaan uncle ke saath lunch karte hain naa?? (asks sweetly)

Khanak: lekin Aayush

Shaan: Dr.Khanak please???

Khanak: teek hain (smiles). They all leave the mall and enter into a restaurant closer by.

Please comment😊
Edited by chandu8881 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
awww so cute loved it, plz continue only have time to write this im at work loool x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
lovely chandu
very sweet update
so shaan was shocked to c the messed room n then khanak ki entry la jawab jaha khanak waha hamara shaan 😆
children r shooo sweet they were upset coz she was late
n then make khanak sing the song
love the song lyrics r awesome
they all were in the mall by destiny n Aayush collide with Madhvi in the mall
Madhvi liked Aayush n khanak said ye mera bacha hai n she thought she is married thank God shaan agaya n clear all confusion
Auyush is so sweet he insist to have lunch with shaan's family
looking forward for their lunch n talk
hope Madhvi think abt shaan n khanak
n tell shaan to marry khanak
wow! i m very filmy lolzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
lovely update
hmm the way she pacified the kids was really cute
hmm finally shaan and aayush are getting closer to each other
seems like he is fond of kids
gud enough that she is assisting him
the song selection was superb... no doubt k perfect tha
hmm khanak has met shaan's family and there is no confusion abt her being married
em lukin fwd to the lunch and more interaction other than professional talk
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
i think may be shaans parents will be interested in khanak and may be they will get them married...
lovevly update chandu...
looking forward for shanaks romance...
Edited by minnu345 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
very nice update loved the camaderie betweeen shan and aayush they seem to be very close enough now ahhh waiting for the lunch with shanak man do update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Awesome UPdate chandana ...LOved it 👏

Khanak singing for kids, kids being adamant infront of her was cute sense to witness. Shaan listning to her sweet melodious voice, khanak getting emberrsed LOved it very well articulated ⭐️ ...LOved it Dear, 👏

Mall sence was cute, First interaction of Khanak. MadHavi & aayush ..thankfully shaan aa gaya ./...this getting exciting, 😃 LOved the way shaan spoke to aayush & specially when he told mom about aayush & khanak relationship 😃 Superb part 😊

wow now they are gonna have lunch together ...Fandooo 😃

Waiting for the next part ...jaldi dena 😃

Sorry for the rushed comments i am bit busy ,,,,,,,,,,Sorry 😳

LOve
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
HELLO😊
i see that likes on each update is reducing and even the comments😔
If you feel its boring or not good please let me know, if you want any change in the story please let me know😊 if you want more twists and turns then im ready to give it😆
Ok now my thank you list.
Thank you for those who have pressed the like button😊
@aasma - So sweet of you aasma😊 you read my story at work!!! Thanks a lot for commenting😊

@heer - Thanks a lot heer😊 thanks for liking the song, i guess even im too filmy😆

@IF_rida - Thanks a lot rida😊 hope you like it further😊

@minnu - Thanks a lot minnu😊 hope you like it😊

@ jaisyjazz - Thanks a lot😊 hope you like it😊

@ pranjal - Thanks a lot😊 i really like the way u wirte the comments😊 Thank you so much😊

Thank you guys, your comments overwhelm me😊 but still fell free to tell whether its right or rong😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello😊

Part 5

They all are seated in the restaurant, food is ordered. Friendly talk is going on, by this time Sunil and Madhvi had come to know about Khanak parents. Sunil and Madhvi are enjoying the company of Aayush

Sunil: we are really sorry to hear about your family (to Khanak)

Khanak: its ok uncle, formal hone ki zarrorat nahi hai (smiles)

Sunil: but I really appreciate your braveness beta, im impressed (smiles warmly)

Madhv i: I agree, warna mumbai mein akeli ladki ka rehna, its quite imposiible (shakes her head)

Khanak smiles, food has arrived, she's feeding Aayush and alternatingly eating. Shaan is just looking at her, with a smile on his face, Sunil notices him smiling, nudges Madhvi to look at Shaan. Both of them share a secret smile…

Sunil: Khanak beta this is your last year of post graduation right??

Khanak: yes uncle (smiles)

Madhvi: Kya socha hai beta, u want to work in the same hospital or you want to open a separate clinic??

Khanak: I think I'll continue working in the same hospital, not sure (smiles)

Madhvi: aur shaadi ke bare mein?? (hesitatingly)

Khanak is silent, she looks towards Aayush, Aayush is busy licking his icecream, which he ordered. Shaan senses that something is not correct…

Shaan: Mom (serious)

Sunil notices him jumping right into her rescue, hides a smile…

Sunil: Madhvi let her be (presses her hand to stop going further)

Madhvi: koi baat nahi beta, waise kyat um kal ghar aa sakthi ho beta??

Khanak: jee aunty?? Mein?? (looks towards Shaan, Shaan is looking at his mom with a questioning expression)

Madhvi: haan beta woh kya hai ki, Shaan's dadi, Akshay, mera bada beta aur Khushboo Akshay ki wife, sab London se aa rahe hai, me and Sunil had thought of giving a surprise party for them, if you don't mind can you help in organizing the party?? Shaan toh hamesha busy rehtha hai issliye??

Khanak: but aunty im not free until evening, u know hospital work (silently agreeing)

Madhvi: no beta finish of your work, we can meet in evening, hai na sunil??

Sunil: haan beta, if you want we can send a driver, what do you say Shaan??

Shaan:Dad, agar Khanak ko koi problem nahi hain, toh I don't have any problem (looking at Khanak)

Aayush: mom chalthe hai na, evenings ki achchi time spend bi hojayega, please mom (pleading)

Khanak: Ok (to Aayush) teek hain aunty I'll come to your house in the evening (smiles)

Khanak is talking freely with Sunil and Madhvi. Shaan is happy to see her mingling with his parents. They all leave the restaurant happily. Aayush is moving out with Sunil and Madhvi, Shaan and Khanak is left behind…

Shaan: so Dr. Khanak. (he's stopped by Khanak)

Khanak: its ok Dr. Shaan, u can call me Khanak (smiles, slowly walking)

Shaan: then Khanak, I think u should call me Shaan. Both of them smiles broadly

Shaan: im sorry Khanak (Khanak is confused) I don't know whether I should be asking this or not, kya tum aur Raj?? (hesitatingly)

Khanak: no no, nothing like that, he knows everything about me, because we were classmates and now colleagues, that's it, we are just good friends, he just cares for me like a friend (smiles warmly) Shaan is relieved, reason?? Still a big question mark. Both of them smile at each other and leave the place…

They both reached where Madhvi and Sunil were standing with Aayush. Khanak and Aayush bids bye to them, and starts walking, Shaan is staring at her back, Khanak as on cue turns backwards to see, both of them look at eachother and smiles, she turns and leaves. Sunil and Madhvi notices this and are happy for his son…

Please do comment😊 guys have asked something please do read my thank you note😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haha shaan & khanak started to fall for each other...😊
nice update chandu...loved it...😊

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