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SJ6...

@SJ6...

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wooow what a beautiful 2nd update loved it, btw I may not comment frequently because I will be working but I will always read and whenever I get time I will pm u my comments xxx

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

lovely Chandu beautifuly penned
khanak is tensed n Raj being friend shows his concern n shaan thought der something between then
shaan feeling uncomfortable seen them kya shaan love at first sight lolzzz!!! jelous mmmhhh !!!!!
love the way u penned Aayush entry n hw he screem mom !!!! n their tight hug i was picturing it
shaan is shocked n thought khanak as a mom n started to think all signs of a married woman lolzzz
Lata is a vry nice person she narrated all abt khanak n Aayush n shaan felt bad for her
don't worry shaan tum ho na lolzzz
loved Shaan n Aayush sweet conv
their bcame friend n nw shaan will come to knw khanak very closely
Aayush is shooo sweet n i think he will a play a role to make shanak close
eagerly waiting for the next update
update soon

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minnu345

@minnu345

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

its tooo good yaar😊
plz update daily ...😛
i am loving ayush...hope khanak falls for shaan very soon 😉
shaan is very smart he is making his step through aayush...good...😆😉

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Chandu its really intersting
awesome story line
amazing updates
loved the totally duff avatar of shaan and khanak
continue soon

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jaisyjazz

@jaisyjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

totally loved it

aayush is very sweet and cute

loved the friendship bet shan and him

now waiting for khanak and shan's friendship which will turn into true love

looking forward to it

update soon😊

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niki_rbo

@niki_rbo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

hey chandhu both the updates r really beautifull i really loved this story line...they r doctors...u r studing medicine na...well its really nice...

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HarshIkaZaYa

@HarshIkaZaYa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

wow khanak and ayush are so cute...

awesome update chandu...

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ktymfan

@ktymfan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Cute update chandu..::...both ll share a great frndship , shanak AND shaan n aayush also...he ll be her support/strength/ideaL...everything , she ll fill his life wid colors...meant for each other couple...ND our little aayush ll make their life complete...waiting for nxt...

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

LOved the update ,,,,,,,,,,Beautifully written 👏

Specially shaan's interaction with aayush was super fun to read, He made an cute attempt to talk to him by offering his Iphone to play sooo amazing. ⭐️

Khanak getting restless thinking abt aayush as he is late & later when he arrived their hug & convo ,,,,,,,awesome dear the cute relationship & her concern, her love, affection was visible for me in khanaks eyes through your writing 👏

So aayush is friend of every person at hospital 😊...i loved the way he came near Dr, Lata & talked to her ...very cute kig I must say. Wow aayush ki wagah se kyun naa ho shanak stated interacting amazing for me :) Loved the whole part her addressing him as Sr, shaan ,...nicee. 😃

Shaan couldnt understand aayush calling khanak MOM & thankfully Dr. lata told him everything, chandana thanks dear for this, I wouldnt have liked it if u had draged it. ...So special thank u 😃

Ab ek hi issue hain Shaan saw raj & khanak & now he will think that they are more than close friends ,,,,,,,,,BUt theek hain shayad other than aayush yeh factor kaam aa jaye dono ko saath mein aane ke liye 😃

Super Interesting Story dear 👍🏼

Continue soon .

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Pranjal.