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Amritha

@OlicityFan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#811

love TresPro ! are u updating mere rang mein anytime soon ?!

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Ramani

@RB81

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: -Manita-
Had a hectic day today !!

Couldn't write much...will post an update tomorrow morning ...as I have an off tomorrow !!

will have fingers crossed for the update..
take rest too mani..

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christmas

@christmas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#813

loving the stream of updates!! thank you!:)

i truly love how savita and shaan have been portrayed and what their relationship has come out to be.

i felt myself feeling the ups and downs with them as i read through. really. from eh conversation on the terrace between him and savita to their emotions after. even the conv with akshay...sigh... it was beautifully done!

and this consistent strength and maturity that khanak and shaan give out is endearing. their vulnerability and turmoil and all their tests makes them seem so childlike when they get get defeated but in the same breath all those things give them strength and bond them more without them even realizing it.

being able to joke and make each other laugh at worse of times is what keeps your sanity and together. the ending was cute...can't wait to see how khanak's conv with her mom goes..

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#814

Another wonderful part Mani👏⭐️...Always loved the bond between Akshay Bhaa and Shaan...Your FF portrays it just like the show...Made me miss Khushboo too...

Can't wait to read what happens between Savita Aunty and Khanak...

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: -Manita-
Had a hectic day today !!

Couldn't write much...will post an update tomorrow morning ...as I have an off tomorrow !!

Hey Mani Di

Please take care of your self first….dont stress yourself too much. 😔

We will wait for the update…..as u said u have Chutti tomorrow…..Aaram se likhana aur phir lamba wala update dena, & I am working tomorrow 😭 😭…..please mere upar ka bhi enjoy karna. 😉 😉 *hugs*

Love u & take care 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Pranjal.

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: -Manita-
Had a hectic day today !!

Couldn't write much...will post an update tomorrow morning ...as I have an off tomorrow !!

hasn't ur tomoro morning come yet??😭😭
waiting for the update..

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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#817

Originally posted by: -Manita-
Had a hectic day today !!

Couldn't write much...will post an update tomorrow morning ...as I have an off tomorrow !!

take care of yourself first di

🤗

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_sweet_

@_sweet_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#818

Ab shaan se jada muze jaldi hai...ke ab khanak kya kahegi?

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sunitha

@ashwanth

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#819

manita,

waiting for mom dauguter conversation,

hope khanak and her tears make her mom melt down

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#820

Hi Manita 😊

I read the parts 44- 47 earlier when u posted i read during my office breaks sorry could not post earlier just pressed the like button

I loved all the parts beautifully written as always 👏 U described everything and everyone's feelings and emotions very well 👏

Loved Shaan and Khanak's mom convo, Jai and Khanak's convo ,Shaan and Akshay's convo and Shanak's convo everything is beautifully written by u amazing writing Hats off to u 👏

I love ur long updates especially the suspense and surprise in the end 😃

Thanks a lot for the lovely parts 😃

Love u 🤗