FF~Trespassers Prohibited~#2;Upd.49,50 - 120,121 - Page 84

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Mani, loved the update! The pain and suffering on both Savita and Shaan's part was so well narrated... 😭😭😭 As for the FF's conclusion, though I hate to say it I agree with you. Having said that I'll be going back to TresPro regularly to read again and again and again.
Looking forward to your next update..👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
emotional 😭 , lovable 😊 , romantic 😳 , cute 😉 and awesome update 👍🏼

shanak convo on the phone is so touching , shaan is such a lovable character u have portrayed di , he knows that ma wouldnt agree that he will ever cheat to anyone and just that she talk to khanak in any manner , he asked her to say all lies about him 😊, (can i get him 😳 )

khanak call back to shaan and informing him about ma's indifference , was so emotional , i literally had tears when shaan says that he is feeling completely lost 😭 , there love is such a beautiful and the way u have presented these two , i m really in love with them 😳 ⭐️

khanak's talk to ma and to tell her every thing about them was again beautifully penned , and then letter's * sigh * , i really cried when i read that part for the first time , and then after that also when ever i read that , i had tears every time , if not they shed but still its their ready to shed anytime 😭
i dont know how u can bring every emotions so beautifully , whether love,cry , romance , tease , fight , or any thing 👏 ⭐️ AWESOME AND BRILLIANT 👍🏼

this is why we love trespro so much 😳

again shanak phone convo 😍

aww i love him so much ( i want him too and me too ready to become his secretary if not CA 😆 😭 )

di i know that its better to end the story insist of stretching it with unnecessary stuff , but tresspro 😭 my heart dont allow me belive that it will end soon but its ur story u can do anything with it as u want 😭 but do come with new after MRM with the characters like trespro shanak , akshay , jai , samir , savita ma and all others too 😉 ,


love u sooo much for this beautiful beautiful trespro and for this part as it has every emotions sumed up 🤗

suchi


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Posted: 14 years ago
for ur note i completely agree wid what u said...that every good thing have to come to an end...but y everything,,that we love come to end sooo sooon 😭

will miss ur FF a lottt ...
and plzzz star a new one sooon
😭 😭 😭

d update is superrrb...there is everything every emotion...

u r fabulous di...
👍🏼
Edited by adeelakhokhar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi di..
Loved d update...
Shanak conversations r always so lovely...so touching...Perfect dey r...everythin is perfect when it comes 2 dem...
Savita must b really shaken n sad by d way she's reacting...bt she's come round...for her kids she will...hai na...
as far as ending it is concerned...I.m not saying i.m happy dat u're ending it...no one can b...neither will i say i understand y u're ending it...bcoz i just don.t want 2 understand why...lyf wil b empty widout it...very empty...bt i guess u're d writer so its ur decision...all i can say it...i.ve loved...truly LOVED every single word u've written...n i'l love watever u write in d future...Trespassers prohibited has been awesome,brilliant,superb n beyond compare...its so so so ho good dat i don.t have more words 2 appreciate it...its very close 2 my hr8 n it'l always b...n u'l always b someone i'l respect n admire very much...
Love ya..
Disha
Edited by loveindair - 14 years ago
khwaish_245 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
u didnt liked my comment 😭
Edited by suchi_245 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suchi_245

u didnt liked my comment 😭



Are you silly ??? Was so moved that forgot to click like 🤗!!!
khwaish_245 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks , just waiting for that , now bye 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh My God !!

The pm's that I am getting are overwhelming !!!

I have tried replying to all...you gals know I am talking about you !!!

please don't feel sad !!
I know that it is useless to say that it is just another story and I'll write another one!!! But still...will say it ...Hope it helps !!!

and don't you all want to see their problems end and them getting Married ???



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Posted: 14 years ago
Sigh... me was just gonna reply...
Am gathering courage...
But it was a beautiful part...
Roothe roothe hain maiyaa.. kaise manaaoo main,
Bas itna yaad rahe maiyaa, ke appka hi laal hoon main...
Beautiful mani...
Edited by jparker - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update Mani👏...You wrote the situation perfectly...And as always ShaNak were just adorable...Poor things had to wait two whole weeks...But compared to six years that is small amount of time😊...
Looking forward to reading the next few updates...And I can understand why you are concluding this beautiful version of ShaNak's love story😊...Please continue updating MRM though😃...
Edited by The_May_Rose - 14 years ago

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