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Akshay left a heavy breath when he saw Shaan staring at him, "What? Still planning to go away''''just one question'''you are taking Khanak with you or leaving her back?"

"You must be crazy''''I can't leave her for a day now and I have told her that all out-station meets, conferences and deals are going to be done by you as I am not leaving Delhi even for a day''''" 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

wow what a gr8 bro both shaan and khanak have (i m so jealous 😭 )

i felt heavy hearted , when shaan described that how khanak should not deserved tears and he would never ever bring tears in her eyes 😭 ( me too want this shaan abhi ke abhi 😳 , )

shanak talk always 😍 shaan know how to put her at ease , no matter how much pain he himself was suffering but he never let her know about it and always try to make her happy ( 😭 😭 me too want this shaan abhi ke abhi or even akshay bhi chalega as he is left only , rest all other have their girlfriends 😉)

oh god more than khanak , i m terrified now 😲 , what would poor girl will do , and how she would face her , (now i dont want this shaan 😡 😆 )

shaan and her respect for ma is shown beautifully di , and the childhood they spent with ma , u described each and every thing , so realistic which happens in each and every home were mom really cares for their child whereabouts 👏 * hats off *

😍 oh god me too now waiting like shaan for khanaks phone call but at the same terrified about ma's reaction 😒

lovely update

, ur characters r awesome and our two love birds r so adorable 😳 and the supporting character r becoming lovely too like jai ,akshay , samir ,savita ma 👍🏼

love u 🤗 for ur hard work of writing so beautifully and giving us back to back updates ⭐️

suchi

Hey Mani Di.

Thanks a ton for updating……..🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Beautiful portrayal of emotions…..Loved it. 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Hey I thought you will not update today. Awesome update Di. I was actually waiting to know abt shaan. 😳Coz we all knew that it is going to be more difficult for Shaan. I was worried ki with whom he will share his pain & thoughts. The update was filled with many emotions. This also made me upset (lagta hain Apne Than li hain mujhe rulane ki……Sorry *kidding*)😉 😆

I seriously don't know what should I right. I am feeling mix of emotions. 😳 Thank you for continuing part from the time when Shaan left their place(yesterday his "I don't know" has made me cry most)😭 but shaan regrets what he spoke.& before leaving Again gave her the assurance that he will never ever leave her. After leaving from terrace Shaan felt like going to Jai's room & talk to him (I wish he could have done that…it would have helped him…...coz Jay se jyada sorted banda nahi dekha maine)😊 after reaching home shaan went to his Room poor guy have to lied to the family about his condition & why he is feeling law. Loved the line "he is Shantanu Khandelwal………….. HE Was NOT WEAK". But his behaviour made everyone worried. 😔

Shaan decided to take Shower & it helped him to relax his self little bit. He thinks it is the best place to think (well actually most of us think the same…..atleast kisi ko pata to nahi chalta ap kitna roye ho)😉 Shaan is thinking about his life. He is thinking about his childhood & the time he had spand with Maa. She is the one who has always helped him to get out of the Worst. But today he made her upset. He had always gained the Love From Maa which every child wanted from his mother. That is why Shaan respected & loved her like his own Mom. (I felt bad for him his thought process made me cry😭) Di you have again beautifully show us the relationship shared by Savita Maa & Shaan. Why he respect her the So much. His thought process & how Maa played an importanty role in his life by just being their for him for his every Single need made me understand her behaviour ( I know I was the one who said that she should have atleast listen to him……but this update & their bond & relation made me understand How hurt she must be feeling 😭…..She is also facing the worst right now & how it is difficult for her to be upset at Shaan & Khanak. Infect this update made me more worried about Maa coz I am thinking that Shaan & Khanak can talk to each other & also have Jay & Akshay but Maa cannot talk to any one infect yesterdays update clarified that she even didn't speak to her husband about the same.😲 Infect She is all alone…… fighting with her thoughts)

Loved the way u described their First Smoking incidence & how Maa made them understand infect she told them they can Smoke after they turn 21 & these to waited for the time 😆 (I so remember the RBO episode when Shaan talk to his Dad about this & how Sunil had cought him Smoking & how he had reacted) 😍 Shaan wore the T-shirt given by Maa, just to feel the love which he thinks he has lost (poor Guy …u made me cry) 😭 he is constantly thinking about her & feeling extremely Guilty for his act. His line took my heart away ….so much pain & trouble when he said

'I'm sorry Ma………….never wanted to hurt you………..believe me, I tried………… I tried hard …………' 😭 😭 😭 😭

Finally Akshay is here with whom he can share his pain as you said after Savita & jay Akshay is the one.😊 (I actually had a sign of relief when he entered) their convo was emotional & touchy, Di u have beautifully described the Bonding shared by two brothers. Loved the way Akshay supported him & made him understand things (U Rock Akshay ) I felt pain in his voice when he talked about the times which they faced when Shaan left Delhi. Loved the way Akshay tease him.😔 (it made me & Shaan both relax)Shaan gave him a hug & he said he can talk to him when ever he wants….(Beautiful Di yesterday Bro-Sis Bond & Today Bro-Bro Bond….U are Simply Great) ⭐️ best part was when akshay teased him abt saying thanks. 😆

Shaan Finally Call his sweetheart and their convo continued (I was suddenly became exicted while reading it as I was damn curious to know abt what "Act" he was talking about.) loved their Convo made me understand what love is all about. Wohhha…..he told her to go to Maa & talk to her 😲(I read it thrice to confirm…. I am scared) khanak is scared but he made her feel better by his words ( which he always does) 😉 he adviced her to Start Crying if things go out of control (Aaiyo….Ramban upay…😉.i thought only girls know about it but yaha to Shaan Miya bhi jante hain iss Shstra ka istamal 😆 ) He said he is waiting for her call to know what happened?? (so are we) 😳 😳

Di please please please please please please please please please please please please want agla part jaldi. I am just able to think what is going to happen? 😕How Maa is going to react? 😕How will Khanak face her? 😕Waiting Waiting Waiting Waiting Waiting Waiting for the next part. 😊

Di U ROck...U are The Best

Lots of Hugs to you...Please update Soon 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Love u ❤️

Pranjal.

OMG Mani di… wat an update…. Full of emotions... 😭 😊 😉 😛 😆

Firstly u portrayed BRO-SIS duo very well… and now in dis part Shaan-Akki bonding… mindblowing yaar… 👏 👏 👏 👏

Love shaan's emotional trauma…. I feel lyk… go and hug him tight…. (bt u know na I can't)

Shaan chuckled, "Do you think we'll work if we go together? Your meetings will suffer."

Banda itni tension me hai fir b dekho…. try to pretend ki kuch nai nai hua…. How yaar????

U portray Savita ma's character very well di… She is great mother….gr88 lady who loves her children like ol mother…. but her love for Shaan is sooo different… more than mother… she is gr88 friend too who always be with him whenever he wants some right guidance… and she is hurt… offcourse with shanak… hey di wanna read her POV too… please…. Y she is sooo quite now ? I wanna know wats going on in her mind….

And lastly shanak phone talk is such a relief like always… Their love is so pure…. Its sooo real….

Now I m waiting for next part….. wanna know about savita ma's reaction.

Amazing update di….. u potrays each and every character is dis part sooo beautifully….

Thanks a lot

Love

Gunjan