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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Saaaz thanx 4 d B'day gift re...wil b Eagerly waiting 4 d nxt!

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

that was gud one..aah i cud imagine shaan clutching the ruler n sleeping with a smile..update soon..

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adeelaanwar

@adeelahuju

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb yaaaar..
excellent written again.......
loved it..........
thats good that khanak has become an art teacher in ur SS..i would love to see her in this avatar in the serial....i hope cvs are reading this.
and thanks a lotttt for the pm

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Awww!!! So cuuute!! Saaazy! Charming!! I love the way you are paying attention to all the little things we question about...:)

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Nisha

@Nisha2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Hey Saaaz 🤗sorry for the late comment, finally here, sorry!

I loved all 3 parts, you write really well.👍🏼

Wow loved how you used the ruler, great touch. It was soooo good to see Shaan repenting, missing Khanak and imaging her. Love the fact that in your SS Shaan is taking some action against Rahul, something I wished to see in the show. Aww loved the mention of Chokski, Mithai Kumar, and the cloth mill, reminded me of the old days. Awesome! 👏

Looking forward to the next part.😃

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dtu

@sampar

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

superb 👏👏👏👏👏👏... i m soo loving it yaaar......loved the flashback scene.....continue soon

cheers

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Just read part two and three Saaz....Love how you have progressed the story and included all the characters👍🏼.....Excellent writing👏.....Simply love Shaan as the lovestrck burthal, unintentually stepping back to working, as a business man again....Love the fact that Khanak is using her time constructively to teach, yet still has some faith in Shaan,coming for her ....Can't wait to read more.....

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Beautiful once again Saaz.You are portraying the emotions so well.Poor Shan with the ruler!Superbly written.Loved it!

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ZARA ALI

@AzaraA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

wow dear so gud jani very well written ........please update soon i had read part 2 also and that was also gud actually i was bus since 2 days ago i m back now so i m reading all the ff and ss and every update which i had missed .................so gud going dear keep up the gud work ........

luv zara

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deepali

@-Deepali-

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

wow..saaz..first of all a great hug for counter sue of rahul🤗 cvs ne to nahi karaya per tere se hame ummed hai lol !!!!👍🏼
just read last 2 update and its realy very nice and beautiful..i loved shaan emegination of khanak,
i loved whole mithi kumar conv. between shanak very cute
i loved akshya madz conv..very nice
hahah..shaan ko dhulwadi ka LIFAFA dekhkar bhook khatam ho gayi ye to hona he tha..burdhal shaan !!!!
pl update next part soon..i am waiting😆
I liked your khamoshi songs too very nice ..gulzar lyrics and hement kumar voice was awesome

Edited by Deepali88 - 14 years ago

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