-SS- Tum Pukar Lo Updated Epi Pg 26 - Page 10

Awwwwwwwwwww !!

Hi Saaaz

Yes I agree you should be on the RBO creative team keep up the great work, gonna go update my fic now lol

awesome update saazzy..very beautiful
your some part of that update give me crack lol !!!!!
Gopi: Acha baba ruk. Likha hai, ki Rahul Khanna ko, ek bahut bade ghotale ke case ke silsile mein jail hogayee hai aur usse adaalat mein lane ka shrey Shantanu Khandelwal ko jaata hai. Is case ke tehkikaat mein yeh bhi pata chala hai ke Rahul Khanna ke jitney bhi companies the, woh bhrastachaar aur avaidh karobaar mein shaamil the. In sab ke wajah se RK company pe taala padhne wala hai, lekin RK sangeet company ko Khandelwal company ne khareed liya hai. Baap re! Itna sab kuch ho gaya, isiliye tu yahan chali aayi kya? very good excilient🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Gopi: Kya abibhi tum apne is saheli ko kuch nahi batayegee?

Khanak: Kya bataoo?

Gopi: Sab kuch, pehle yeh bol, yeh Rahul Khanna kaun hai? Lagta tho bilkul sadela ganna hai'🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Gopi: (looking at Khanak, a bit confused): Huh? Haan haan,, wohi tho! Aur bechari Khanak nehi sab kuch kiya, shaadi ke sabhi tayaari,yahan tak ki

Shaan: (with a wide smile staring at Khanak): Suhaag raat ke sej bhi sajaaye..🤣🤣🤣

Khanak: (suddenly walks towards them making Shaan get up and stand too): Gopi, zara jaake tho dekh, Kumud chachee ke yahaan dhoodh milega kya, ghar pe kal subah ke liye dhoodh nahin hai.2nd sr ke liye badam wala doodh🤣🤣🤣🤣

Khanak: Agar aapne yahan rehne ki thaan hi lee hai, tho kripa karke yeh charpoi bahar lagaa dijiye wht the hall shaan itne door se bahar sone ke liye aya hai kya🤣🤣🤣🤣

Shaan: (confused): Kyun Khanak, bahar kyun? innocent shaan 🤣🤣🤣

Khanak: Aapke sone ka prabandh jo karna hai.

Shaan: KYA? Main bahar kyun sounga?

Khanak: Dhulwaadi mein yahi pratha hai, ghar ke aadmi bahar sote hain

Shaan: Aur Admiyon ki biwiyaan kahan sotee hai? naughty shaan to give hint to khanak🤣🤣

Shaan: (pleadingly) : Come on yaar, Khanak, bahar machar honge bechara shaan 🤣🤣

Shaan: (rolls the blanket around his hands, comes closer to her and speaks into her neck): Theek hai, Khanak, main bahar so loonga, lekin main tumhe bata doon, ki yeh pratha sirf tab tak jaari rahegee jab tak main tumhaari aadat badal na doon. 🤣🤣

by the way shaazy i loved your ss yaar.very realistic and natural all scene was amazing 👏⭐️

waiting for next update eagrly😊

well done dear........
how can u write sooooooo fantasticly yarrrrrrrr...
u are soooooooo creative .......
u can become a successful writer for sure......

nice update finally shaan arrived in dhulwadi ......


plz continue soon ................



luv zara

again a superb update 👏👏👏👏......Golden RBO ki yaad ai gai.....awww bechara shaan machro ki company mili 😆....lol.......its getting soo good n interesting n ur telling ki next part is concluding part.....nain yaar ...dont do this ....extend it for some more parts ...i m soo loving the cold war between them n dhulwadi ka mahool .......


👏👏👏 awesome .......

cheers

shai

👏👏👏

Saazy!

Saaz darling *muwah*