-SS- Tum Pukar Lo Updated Epi Pg 26 - Page 12

saaz part IV outstanding akhir RK ko saaza and company taala....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣....saaz lovely yaar jo cvs nahi karpaye tune woh ss mai rahul ko jail bhijvadhi.....😆😆😆

Lovely Saaz

Saaz,why don't you apply for the job in script writing for Rbo. Its so good,so realistic and heart touching.Loved it!

What a beautiful update saaaz.......just took my heart away !!!

loved the RK sangeet company ka hashrr the most😉😉........😆.........you did it girl !! wrote what we all wanted, show mein na sahi , yahin sahi.........kam se kam dil ko thandak toh mili !!!

loved him sneaking glances at Khanak while talking to Gopi........the most beautiful was yeh sab tumhaare liye nahin tha.....tumhaare liye toh main aaya huuuu😳...........hailaaaaa you got to have a heart to say NO to that☺️.............loved Khanak standing up firm👏 !!!

The charpoi outside and he hugging his blanket with a pledge to change her habit.........waiting
for the next update already !!!

soooo heartwarming !!!

brilliant !

Thanks everyone especially..

@shal: thanks so much re, your comments touch my heart

@Vaishu: okay sorry to disappoint but next part is NOT last part..thoda plan change

@SYS: see I followed your advice..

@Deepa: Yaar, main sochu mera grey matter kissi nikkame ko kyun doon'itni meherbaan kadardaan kyun banoo😡😛

@Vat: PLEASE DO'quote and tell me what you think of each sentence..would love that

@Jess: LOVE to read your comments, they are so heartfelt, they moved even Shal. Thanks to both of you.🤗

@Vandoo: Kya bolu yaar, shaan ko bahar sona padda'mera shaan sabhi acche kaam kar leta hai..haina?

@Angel: Aww, loved how you pointed out all the right aspects of the story re..loved that

@AG: thank you my dear

@ Naveen: thanks re, hope next update also keeps you happy

@Simi: Gosh, your comments brought a smile to my face'sachi'aur muchi'

@Deepali: LOVED LOVED the way you put down your comments, I enjoyed writing rahul ki the end 'mwaahahaha🤣😡

@Adeela: Arrey yaar, tujhe tho pata hi hai, yahan pet tho 80% of my SS is repeat of golden RBO yaar, aur storyline show ka track..originality mein thoda maar khate hain hum'

@Zaara: yup, he has!

@Shai: chal tere liye, aur ek part extend kar li maine'ab bhugat'😆

@Rooji: honey, loved your song'👏🤗

@KRISHNA: OMG OMG OMG OMG'How I MISSED the PINK'..yaar kahan thee tu??? How much I have missed you re'love to your girls'😃

@Sayni: Thanks re

@Roshni: thank you dear

@hotchpotch: hope you like the next update too..

@Krazee: thanks for the comments re'okay translations..here goes'brashtachar: corrupt(ion) and avaid karobaar: money laundering business'ab kahiye thankoo😛

@Shriya: Haina mera shaan cutie pie😳'thanks

@Shiksha: don't worry re'together tho hona hi hai'enjoy the journey'thanks for your comments

@Krithika: thanks re

@Anu: yaar, likhte hi copyright ban jaata hai'my SS are an ode to Goradiyas,, it is no secret'sachii..thanks so much for your comments, they make me happy ..real happy😃

@ May: forget it May, everytime I wished for something on this show, I have not got it..but I hope that this SS gave it to me in some way..and I also hope the same for you..

@Sneha: Rahul ka THE END sab ko raas aaya'pata hai yaar..yehi tho hai man ki badhaas'😆

@Aditee: thanks for your 'real' comments ..much appreciated! Dil se!😊

@Smitha: thanks re'

@ Mani: thanks re'your comments are equally heartwarming'.they are!

@IFS: Haila...you came Teeech...gosh! almost missed your comment re...thanks for it🤗

All those who pressed LIKE: thankoo...😃

thoda plan change, yeh part nahin..the next part shall be the concluding part..sorry!

Part V

The morning rays hit Shaan through the blanket forcing him to peep over the blanket and just as he is about to turn his side, his eyes fall on his beautiful wife praying at the tulsi plant in the front yard of the house. She is a vision, he thinks, he moves his blanket and nests his head on his hand to form a triangle to get a better view of his vision.

She makes a turn around the tulsi, and not wanting to be caught staring at her, he pretends to sleep with one eye open, and then starts to plan a way he can hold her, so he kicks his blanket off himself, in the hope that she will put it back on him, shuts his eyes and waits with his ears looking for her footsteps. He listens to her walk, very close he thinks, closer, he wants, yes, must be really close now…he opens his eyes to pull her and sees no one except his kicked blanket at his feet. His sulking is interrupted by his phone ringing.

Akki: Good morning Chote, kya haal hai?

Shaan: Morning aapke liye good hoga, Bhaiya

Akki: Lagta hai mausam abhi bhi bahut kharab hai

Shaan: (watching his wife cooking through the window): mausam kharab hai, lekin lajawab hai!

Akki: Wah! Chote kya poetry hai.. ab utho and kuch karo!

Shaan: Bhaiya, aap bhi na..seriously din ba din Dad bante jaa rahe ho! Really boring yaar!

Akki: Acha chal all the best, chotey, Khanak ko jaldi ghar laana…we are waiting!

Shaan: Bye, Bhaiya

Shaan can suddenly see Khanak serving some food on a plate and moving towards the entrance of the house. Ah! She's coming here, and pretends to sleep again. Now, the footsteps have ended near his charpoy he is sure. He cranes his ears to hear her bangles or anklets, but a small cough is all he gets. He opens his eyes, concerned, only to look into the eyes of a 3 feet tall boy staring into him. Startled..

Shaan: Hey! Kaun hai be tu?

Boy: Main apne ma ka beta hoon, yeh lo, pee lo. (puts the glass on a stool closeby)

Shaan: Khanak kaha hai? Aur yeh kya hai?

Boy: Chai hai aur kya? Aur jaldi se pee lo, mujhe Khanak didi ko iskool leke jaana hai.

Khanak walks out calling: Bhavesh, chal jaldi kar.

Shaan: Khanak, tum isse skool leke jaa rahee ho kya?

Khanak: Nahin, (with a small smile), Bhavesh mujhe school leke jaa raha hai. Main dupehar tak aa jaoongee, aap ke liye khana bhi rakh diya hai.

Shaan: Yeh iskool kahan hai?

Bhavesh: Iskool nahin, skool! Aur dus minute ka raasta hai, chalo didi (holding her hand)

Shaan: Khanak, sun tho..

Bhavesh drags Khanak away leaving a bewildered Shaan waving his hands. "Yaar, bombay mein zilla tha, yahan pe poora gaanv, meri biwi ke paas mere liye time is janam mein tho nahin milne walla",,, He wants to follow his wife, but realizes he has to first deal with the issues that have come up at the factory and decides to wring Bhavesh's little neck with his manly fingers later…

But the issues in the factory take longer than expected, and while Shaan had hoped to pick up his wife from the school, he returns in the evening to find his wife sitting in the courtyard waiting for him. He grins, what other way to express his happiness, she returns it with a getting up and going inside, but not before revealing a small smile. He sits down on the charpoi, tired and lays back on the heels of his hands. Khanak comes to him with a glass of water…

Shaan: (taking the glass): thanks

Khanak watches him while he drinks, he has tanned, she can see, he looks handsomer than before, if that is even possible.

SHaan: tumhe chitrakaari sikhana acha lagta hai?

Khanak: (with a huge smile): Haan, bahut!

Shaan: (her smile makes him happy and sad that he is not the reason for it): aur yeh school?

Khanak: haan

She takes the glass and starts to leave, Shaan holds her wrist to stop her and whispers….

Shaan: hamare paathshaala se bhi achaa?

Khanak is quiet, she does not look back at him, lest he sees her eyes filled with tears…she tries to unfasten her wrist from his hand..Shaan lets go….

Shaan: Tumhare class mein kitne bache hain?

Khanak: Challis (40)

Shaan: Kya? Poore school ke bache tumhare hi class mein hain?

Khanak: (with a small smile): Nahin, poore school mein dedh sau bachhe hain

Shaan: Kya? Dedh sau…yeh Dhulwaadi ki pratha sirf hamare ghar mein chal rahee hai kya?

Khanak: Phirse wohi baat…

Shaan: Acha baba…ab kuch khaane ke liye bhi leke aa rahee ho, ya paani peeke sona padega…

Khanak arrives with a plate full of food and Shaan relishes his wife's cooking after so long, he is so lost in the taste, that he does not notice his wife smile through her tears, watching him intently, wiping her tears and smiling again. It takes her a minute to regain her composure and ask..

Khanak: Shanatanu, mujhe aap se kuch kehna hai.

Shaan: Haan, kaho na Khanak..

Khanak: Shaadi ka prastav aaya hai..

Shaan: (stops eating, looks at her): Kya?

Khanak: haan, aur main jaantee hoon ki bahut jaldi hai, lekin aada aur bai bhi nahin hai,,tho main kisse poochtee..

Shaan: Khanak, tum kya kehna chahtee ho? Tumne mere baare mein socha bhi nahin? Ek baar…?

Khanak: Isiliye tho main aap se pooch rahee hoon

Shaan: (extremely hurt, gets up,): I don't believe this…

Khanak: (walks behind him, offers him water to wash his hands and hands him a towel,): pehle tho main bhi aashchariya chakit ho gayee..phir maine socha ki jahaan pyaar ho…wahan dimaag ka kya kaam?

Shaan: (holding her by her shoulders): Matlab kya Khanak,, tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya keh rahee ho?

Khanak: Mujhe ladka pasand hai, Shanatanu…

Shaan: (lets off her shoulders): KYA? turns and rubs his neck in anger combined with hurt.

Khanak: haan,, honhaar hain, zimmedaar hain, usne apni padhai sheher mein ki aur waheen pe naukri bhi lagne walli hai..woh hamare Gopi ko bahut khush rakhega..

Shaan (suddenly turns): Rishta Gopi ke liye hai?

Khanak: Haan, tho suniye na…

But before she can continue, Shaan envelopes her into a tight hug, never wanting to let go, she therefore cannot see him wiping his tears on her shoulder. The pleats of her saree pallu absorb them, and he seals them with a kiss, and then lets go of her.

Khanak: Aap ko kya hua hai?

Shaan: Kuch nahin, tum bolo kya keh rahee thee?

Khanak: (decides whatever that was, can wait): Tho who ladka Anand uske maa baap ko leke kal anne waale hai, tho main soch rahee thee agar hum bhi gopi ke yahaan jaaye tho acha hoga na…

Shaan: Bilkul! ab sone chale.. (grins away at her)

Khanak: Haan, walks into the house, kissi cheez ki zaroorat ho, tho bata dijiye (and shuts the door)

Shaan: Unbelievable!! (yells towards the door) Mujhe kissi cheez ki zaroorat nahin hai Khanak, main yahaan bilkul theek hoon.

Khanak: (comes to the window): Chillayiye mat! Poora gaanv so raha hai, raat mein machar bahut aa jaate hain, main yeh khidkee band kar rahee hoon, theek hai?! (and shuts the window)

Shaan: WHAT THE??!!! Haan haan band kar lo, main tho yahan aaraam se sone walla hoon

Khanak: (grinning): Badhiya! Good neend…

Shaan: (mutters while pushing and pulling the blanket onto himself): wohee..wohee…GOOD neend!!!

Khwab chun rahee hai raat

Bekaraar hai

Tumhara intezaar hai

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Originally posted by: saaaz

thoda plan change, yeh part nahin..the next part shall be the concluding part..sorry!

Part V

The morning rays hit Shaan through the blanket forcing him to peep over the blanket and just as he is about to turn his side, his eyes fall on his beautiful wife praying at the tulsi plant in the front yard of the house. Typical..aww!

She is a vision, he thinks, he moves his blanket and nests his head on his hand to form a triangle to get a better view of his vision.

I somehow liked this...small detailing..😳

She makes a turn around the tulsi, and not wanting to be caught staring at her, he pretends to sleep with one eye open, and then starts to plan a way he can hold her, so he kicks his blanket off himself, in the hope that she will put it back on him, shuts his eyes and waits with his ears looking for her footsteps. He listens to her walk, very close he thinks, closer, he wants, yes, must be really close now'he opens his eyes to pull her and sees no one except his kicked blanket at his feet. His sulking is interrupted by his phone ringing.

Akki: Good morning Chote, kya haal hai?

Shaan: Morning aapke liye good hoga, Bhaiya

Akki: Lagta hai mausam abhi bhi bahut kharab hai

Shaan: (watching his wife cooking through the window): mausam kharab hai, lekin lajawab hai!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Has somebody said this to you? in your young days, ofcourse🤣

Akki: Wah! Chote kya poetry hai.. ab utho and kuch karo!

Shaan: Bhaiya, aap bhi na..seriously din ba din Dad bante jaa rahe ho! Really boring yaar!

Akki: Acha chal all the best, chotey, Khanak ko jaldi ghar laana'we are waiting!

Shaan: Bye, Bhaiya

Shaan can suddenly see Khanak serving some food on a plate and moving towards the entrance of the house. Ah! She's coming here, and pretends to sleep again. Now, the footsteps have ended near his charpoy he is sure. He cranes his ears to hear her bangles or anklets, but a small cough is all he gets. He opens his eyes, concerned, only to look into the eyes of a 3 feet tall boy staring into him. Startled..

Shaan: Hey! Kaun hai be tu?🤣

Boy: Main apne ma ka beta hoon, yeh lo, pee lo. (puts the glass on a stool closeby)

🤣🤣

Shaan: Khanak kaha hai? Aur yeh kya hai?

Boy: Chai hai aur kya? Aur jaldi se pee lo, mujhe Khanak didi ko iskool leke jaana hai.

Khanak walks out calling: Bhavesh, chal jaldi kar.

Shaan: Khanak, tum isse skool leke jaa rahee ho kya?

Khanak: Nahin, (with a small smile), Bhavesh mujhe school leke jaa raha hai. Main dupehar tak aa jaoongee, aap ke liye khana bhi rakh diya hai.

Shaan: Yeh iskool kahan hai?

Bhavesh: Iskool nahin, skool! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Aur dus minute ka raasta hai, chalo didi (holding her hand)

Shaan: Khanak, sun tho..

Bhavesh drags Khanak away leaving a bewildered Shaan waving his hands. "Yaar, bombay mein zilla tha,🤣🤣 yahan pe poora gaanv,🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 meri biwi ke paas mere liye time is janam mein tho nahin milne walla",,, He wants to follow his wife, but realizes he has to first deal with the issues that have come up at the factory and decides to wring Bhavesh's little neck with his manly fingers later'🤣

But the issues in the factory take longer than expected, and while Shaan had hoped to pick up his wife from the school, he returns in the evening to find his wife sitting in the courtyard waiting for him. He grins, what other way to express his happiness, she returns it with a getting up and going inside, but not before revealing a small smile. He sits down on the charpoi, tired and lays back on the heels of his hands. Khanak comes to him with a glass of water'

Shaan: (taking the glass): thanks

Khanak watches him while he drinks, he has tanned, she can see, he looks handsomer than before, if that is even possible.

SHaan: tumhe chitrakaari sikhana acha lagta hai?

Khanak: (with a huge smile): Haan, bahut!

Shaan: (her smile makes him happy and sad that he is not the reason for it): aur yeh school?

Khanak: haan

She takes the glass and starts to leave, Shaan holds her wrist to stop her and whispers'.

Shaan: hamare paathshaala se bhi achaa?

Khanak is quiet, she does not look back at him, lest he sees her eyes filled with tears'she tries to unfasten her wrist from his hand..Shaan lets go'.

Shaan: Tumhare class mein kitne bache hain?

Khanak: Challis (40)

Shaan: Kya? Poore school ke bache tumhare hi class mein hain?

Khanak: (with a small smile): Nahin, poore school mein dedh sau bachhe hain

Shaan: Kya? Dedh sau'yeh Dhulwaadi ki pratha sirf hamare ghar mein chal rahee hai kya?

Khanak: Phirse wohi baat'

Shaan: Acha baba'ab kuch khaane ke liye bhi leke aa rahee ho, ya paani peeke sona padega'

Khanak arrives with a plate full of food and Shaan relishes his wife's cooking after so long, he is so lost in the taste, that he does not notice his wife smile through her tears, watching him intently, wiping her tears and smiling again. It takes her a minute to regain her composure and ask..

😳😳

Khanak: Shanatanu, mujhe aap se kuch kehna hai.

Shaan: Haan, kaho na Khanak..

Khanak: Shaadi ka prastav aaya hai..

Shaan: (stops eating, looks at her): Kya?🤣

Khanak: haan, aur main jaantee hoon ki bahut jaldi hai, lekin aada aur bai bhi nahin hai,,tho main kisse poochtee..

Shaan: Khanak, tum kya kehna chahtee ho? Tumne mere baare mein socha bhi nahin? Ek baar'?

Khanak: Isiliye tho main aap se pooch rahee hoon🤣🤣🤣

Shaan: (extremely hurt, gets up,): I don't believe this'

Khanak: (walks behind him, offers him water to wash his hands and hands him a towel,): pehle tho main bhi aashchariya chakit ho gayee..phir maine socha ki jahaan pyaar ho'wahan dimaag ka kya kaam?

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Shaan: (holding her by her shoulders): Matlab kya Khanak,, tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya keh rahee ho?

Khanak: Mujhe ladka pasand hai, Shanatanu'🤣

Shaan: (lets off her shoulders): KYA? turns and rubs his neck in anger combined with hurt.

Khanak: haan,, honhaar hain, zimmedaar hain, usne apni padhai sheher mein ki aur waheen pe naukri bhi lagne walli hai..woh hamare Gopi ko bahut khush rakhega..

Shaan (suddenly turns): Rishta Gopi ke liye hai?

Khanak: Haan, tho suniye na'

But before she can continue, Shaan envelopes her into a tight hug, never wanting to let go, she therefore cannot see him wiping his tears on her shoulder. The pleats of her saree pallu absorb them, and he seals them with a kiss, and then lets go of her.

😳

Khanak: Aap ko kya hua hai?

Shaan: Kuch nahin, tum bolo kya keh rahee thee?

Khanak: (decides whatever that was, can wait)🤣🤣🤣

: Tho who ladka Anand uske maa baap ko leke kal anne waale hai, tho main soch rahee thee agar hum bhi gopi ke yahaan jaaye tho acha hoga na'

Shaan: Bilkul! ab sone chale.. (grins away at her)

Khanak: Haan, walks into the house, kissi cheez ki zaroorat ho, tho bata dijiye (and shuts the door)

Shaan: Unbelievable!! (yells towards the door) Mujhe kissi cheez ki zaroorat nahin hai Khanak, main yahaan bilkul theek hoon.

Khanak: (comes to the window): Chillayiye mat! Poora gaanv so raha hai, raat mein machar bahut aa jaate hain, main yeh khidkee band kar rahee hoon, theek hai?! (and shuts the window)

Shaan: WHAT THE??!!! Haan haan band kar lo, main tho yahan aaraam se sone walla hoon

Khanak: (grinning): Badhiya! Good neend'

Shaan: (mutters while pushing and pulling the blanket onto himself): wohee..wohee'GOOD neend!!!

Khwab chun rahee hai raat

Bekaraar hai

Tumhara intezaar hai

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Next part pakka Concluding part!

saaaaaaaaaz, this is cheating ok, u said it wll b last part, and I had put all my wll power to stop myself frm reading till u write the last part and I can read uninterpted,