Tu hi Meri Zindagi last part pg 45

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So I making my most recent video on the song Beete Lamhein, and I thought why not turn the concept of the video into a fanfiction. Now do not expect this to be really long and run for a long time. It will run as along as I have ideas and I can write out the storyline without dragging it.

Here is the link to the video if you want to get an idea where this is going.

If you want to read now or tune in later, it's up to you. Thanks Shaz and Bones for encouraging me to go forward with this.
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Part One

They were back in Mumbai now. The factory had been running successfully in Dhulwadi for a few months now. The villagers were all happy that they could work and live with their families after over a years of being seperated. Mangal Bha had been admonished and no one would trust him again.

Shantanu had joined his father's office again as he wanted to continue this new venture and also expand into other ventures independently once he had the experience and knowledge to do so.

Khanak was busy helping Madvi and Khushboo learn how to cook proper Indian food. Apparently Madvi had driven Akashay, Khusboo and Sunil to dieting .

The three ladies were having a cooking session one afternoon. Madvi became nostalgic.

" I have two baus now. I wonder when I will have a grandchild?"

Khushboo started to laugh, Khanak blushed and tried to keep busy.

" Mom aap toh Dadi jaise baatein karne lagi hain. Don't worry about grandkids. Akshay and me have been married not even three years. Shantanu itna responsible nahin hai. Khanak we all know is mature but she is still young. Overall Mom aap ki umar nahin hai dadi ban ne mein.( You are not old enough to be a grandmother).

Khanak was relieved. She wanted Khusbhoo Bhabhi to have a child first. After all she and Shantanu needed to both recover from what happened with Sunny and the misunderstandings that had come from his presence. She shook her head and decided to finish cooking so she could leave the kitchen. For some reason she was suddenly not feeling well.

" Khanak beta I am thinking Khusbhoo is right but what is your opinion? I would be the coolest Dadi amongst my friend," Madvi declared.

Khanak took a deep breath.

" Bai mujhe lagta hai ki Khusbhoo Bhabhi is right. Vaise main aur Shantanu iss sab ke liye ready nahin ,"

She excused herself before Madvi could prod her more.

Khanak went upstairs. She was gonna go lie down and then maybe get up and start on the laundry.

She started to feel very cold and dizzy, she tried to hold onto something. Her balance continued to become worse. Luckily she reached near the bed. She was able to rest her head.

" I'll be ok, just need to rest," she told herself.

Shantanu arrived home two hours later.

Madvi called out to him.

" Zara Khanak ko dekh ke aana. She hasn't made much noise in the past few hours. I don't know if she got upset with our conversation earlier."

Shantanu shook his head.

" Mom I don't think so. She is probably busy with something. I'll go see what she is up to," he stated.

Shantanu smiled brightly as he got ready to enter the bedroom.

" Khanak, I am home," he declared but stopped short a moment later when he saw her kneeling with her head on the edge of the bed.

He rushed over to her.

" Khanak kya hogaya tumhe?," he inquired.

His one touch on her face made him realize she was running a high temperature.

He quickly lifted her up and covered her up with a blanket. He yelled for his mother and Bhabhi as he went to call the doctor.

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Forgive any mistakes and thanks for reading the first update!

Index
Part One pg 1
Part 2 pg2

Part3 pg 4
Part 4 pg 7

Part 5 pg 8

Part 6 pg 9

Part 7 pg 11

Part 8 pg 13

Part 9 pg 14

Part 10 pg 16

Part 11 pg 17

Part 12 pg 18

Part 13 pg 20

Part 14 pg 21

Part 15 pg 24


Part 16 pg 26


Part 17 pg 27

Part 18 pg 29

Part 19 pg 32


Part 20 pg 35


Part 21 pg 37

Part 22 pg 40

Part 23 pg 42


Part 24 og 45(final update)

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.Rupali. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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liked it👍🏼
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was so cute....
pls continue... loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice beginning.. Do continue. Sounds good!👏
-Manita- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww......cute start....loved it !
plz continue....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dis ws realy vry nice pls continue soon n i hpe der s nthn majorly complicated W*H khanak coz f her hvn high fever
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Hey nice start...........
cute part loved it...............
pls continue soon..........

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey

its so nice.......

plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am amazed at the comments for the first update, hope you guys continue to like it!
Thanks loveshanak, jparker, Manita, Shilpa,shiksha_03 and angel_9 for the comments! Will try to update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hyye loved the first part
but one request please dont make khanak suffer from som serious dieseases etc.
, and dont make it melodramatic and kekta types
Please let it be some good news yaar
please a humble request one anand is enough already i feeling very bad ki he is suffering now
I dont want khanak to suffer too please 😃

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