FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 89

OMG Roshni!!

Originally posted by: vatsalya

OMG Roshni!!

I just read it again too!! i kept reading the first few lines...lol...cuz they were so good and dint go beyond that..hehe

But this is such a sharp observation!!

And now I am worried.

manita di please!!

Thank you thank you..... 1St tym when i read i was just neglecting these things..... But the second tym when i was reading i got stuck at this line..... I read that line almost 3-4 tyms to install what it meant exactly in my brain...... Dont worry everything will be fine......

dont you feel Roshni is a big name??? Call me Rosh...... No one usually calls me by Roshni Thats why im not used to it......

Originally posted by: Roshni_M

Thank you thank you..... 1St tym when i read i was just neglecting these things..... But the second tym when i was reading i got stuck at this line..... I read that line almost 3-4 tyms to install what it meant exactly in my brain...... Dont worry everything will be fine......

dont you feel Roshni is a big name??? Call me Rosh...... No one usually calls me by Roshni Thats why im not used to it......

Love knows no boundaries, but love can be well defined.. in expressions and kind... Yes it is difficult to contain the wealth of emotions that run through thus making the loved one feel... a need, a kind of desire that tests you to limits...

Thanks Manita 😃

I could imagine reading all they re various dates while you described the past 1 month diverse events and banters...like a flashback 😆😆

Bless them both...Ground rules and them don't abide together.

The bedroom *sigh* due to the reason I loved the awkwardness between them both, it gives a whole new exhilarating turn to the relationship...Shaan, the throughout gentleman, the esteem he held's for her and restrictions in their relation is beautiful. The conclusion to the scene even more admiring, he eases her out with their tease while hugging her *sigh*😍

I have to tell you this their love for each other is enduring, we surrender to our beloved sincerely and that's what Shantanu did and will do in future also...So magnificently portrayed. He left his aspirations for her, whereas she is wounded by the fact it's due to her...She is agitated at herself, I do appreciate her, sometimes who we love dearly neither want them to forfeit for us either. One trait, I admire of her.

Both highly frantic at each other, in this process while in the plane both hurting each other instead was very subtly intense, She engross with Rohit and her cold stares are enough the make him haywire *sigh*😍. This reminds me of Natasha-Khanak-Shaan scene of the golden RBO *sigh*

And the confrontation in the hall way at the end even more zealous, hopefully this kiss will pursue with words afterwards...I want them to talk this out, I don't why I feel it be a conversation that I want to envision.

Manita, your writing transiting to changed sensation in each chapter is highly inspirational, your hold a very appealing eminence of a writer. Thank you so much for the FF. I'll be waiting for the next one, I'm so crazing over your Shanak now, wishing it will continue till they grow old with each other *sigh*

p.s. I never sigh this much, as much I do while reading your FF, just gnore them 😆😆

@vatty.....Hahaha...... Why do you think i call you vatty then???? And thanx...... Bus ab mujhe chaane ke ped pe mat chada.....🤣🤣[=)]

Intehaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Hogayiii

Mani Di........... When are you gonna update the next part???????

Originally posted by: togepe30

She will update by 11:30 !!

Today???? But its already 11.40........