FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 91

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Posted: 14 years ago
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mani all yr parts r superb there is nothing tht i havent said b4 eevry new part u update is sumthing soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo more emotional connected n extremely loevveable i cannot say it in words but yr updates make me extremely senti:)
loved it n i just so wait fr u to give me a surprise everyday in d form of yr ff:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yet another well written update ... kya bolu samajh nahi aata 👏

fantastic update!!!!

Such emotional scenes, their bonding, his understanding about her feelings, her trust in him (goes and sleeps besides him on the same bed), his protectiveness ... everything is so perfect!

I wish ...

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 14 years ago
This time I promise, I will quite the whole update!!
Shall post as many replies as my heart tells....
This first one is for their beautiful moment together...
sigh so much there is in between them that can go away without saying it out loud in words.. Each action, each tender gesture, is enough to set them afire!!! Am thinking of poor Shantanu's control!! Am sure it is in shambles by now!!
And then when she slams the door in his face.. I can but only think of this song..
Rootho rootho na rootho na rootho meri jaan...
mera dil cheen ke, tum ho gaye ho kaise ye unjaan...
Main roothoongi, roothoongi, tumse main haan..
mera dil tod ke hogaye ho kaise tum unjaan....
Sigh..... more as I savour and read along....
loved it so far Mani...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Congratulations Manita on the 25th update, you definitely deserve acclamation for it, no need of thanks at all!

*sigh* to your Shanak. The new founding of each other again just through the initiative of the kiss again...enough for both for them to be said, the silence, motions was adequate for their relationship again....everything was said and accomplished there already...I'm lost again with them...I'm in love with they're love again *sigh* A sheer of brilliance Manita.👏👏
And the continuous of his ragging her to tell him thought out the hallway was outright adorable, felt liking being there a watching them brawl.
Awwwww....Khanak is such a cute-siee! She couldn't sleep...Shaan even the more cutieee! Loved them little interplay in his hotel room...Purely endearing, he was awoke! Here goes all the awww's and Ahaaa's with the exchange the next morning...he called her a cat! She surely is one, an fierce yet endearing one, she's so perfect for him.
Applaud to you...Take a bow for this dialogue, nothing else was needed at all after this.
'My only dream is you 'whatever rest I do is a journey, a way to reach you, I want to do things for you, achieve my dreams for you'' 'you' are the destination''" 😍😍
Ahaaaa! Where Shall I begin? Why do I think you live these characters lol! You need to answer me this question pleaseeeeeee! How do you write for them so well!
This dialogue strikes the whole chapter...I love this Shantanu Khandelwal, a practical quintessential dream of any women and Khanak, the perfect foil for him! I don't think I can even write more than this now...I'm in awe *sigh sigh sigh*
It's time for me to sigh for Khanak now, I love her reflective emotions...her wonderment of whether her love was so not enough compared to his...I was about to agree with her maybe it was, but then I remembered her forgiveness of letting go of his past, her acceptance and her willingness of togetherness with him was enough to earn respect from me. Thank you so so so much Manita for making me hopelessly in love them, which sometimes make me go haywire, I think only of them and vision them.
One doubt...I smell trouble brewing on business aspect of the story, the entry of Zarine again is getting me agitated 😡 maybe it's something to do with her...I hated her simply FULL STOP! Shaan was correct, I wish Khanak answered.
On a ending note FINALLY...I love their trust for each other, protectiveness, and possessiveness....everything that they emote😍😍. Thank you so much for the update...sometimes words are not enough to gratify you.

Maybe too early to ask for the next update...UPDATE SOON!😆😆

Edited by -Saira- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Manita-

Jess, Ramani..........when you start commenting, I go to some other zone and feel like as if I am reading another FF.........you write so well, especially what I have not written !!!

I am honoured!!! 😳 But I blame your FF and your talent and flair for writing.. always manage to flummox me as usual...

Originally posted by: -Manita-

This Update is very Special to me............
Reasons --

It is the 25 th Update.......
last 24 updates garnered some 24383 views...............almost 1000 + views per update !! Wow.....
love you all !!!!
Thanks for reading again and again.........
And I completed 200 pages on Microsoft word with this update !!!

WOWwwwww...... Congratulations!!!!!!!!🥳🥳 Yayyy.. party time then!! 😉😃

so am happy and satisfied that my regular readers are not complaining, as yet.............If I start dwindling.......or not that up to the mark..................Plzzzzzz do tell me !!!
I hope I am able to sustain your interest and keep you all reading !!

Manita!!!! 😡😡😡😡 How can you even doubt your abilities!!! God girl I am a ion close to losing my sanity.. so mesmerised I am with the tiniest of nuances srom your ShaNak.... So hugs to you and accolades and continue to shine and outshine yourself!! 👏👏👏🤗
So no more of that doubting!!
Sigh now back to reading it again and then drafting my loooooong reply...😳😍
Edited by jparker - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic dear, read the last 2 parts at one go and felt that I was coming along with you on a new Shanak journey! How beautifully you write about their love and their conflicts and their jealousies. It really makes them feel very real..Awesome is not an ideal word to describe this FF but then what is??:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update Manita, it was funny, dramatic , the whole works!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mannu di!!!

This is awesomeness!!! You write such beautiful romantic lines..

It's such a regular love story yet so unique in it's own way 😳 Their story is the kind every gal dreams to have for herself.... I so envy your Khanak! She's got everythin in life!


Congrats for the 25th update!!! Didn even realise it 😆
BTW i do agree wid Vandu!

Love
Neha
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi mani di
congratulations for the 25th part🥳 and i hope that you will continue till 50th
awesome update👏👍🏼 and cute dialogues ☺️
keep writing👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manitaaa .... Ofcourse I am gonnna Congratulate you ...
But before tat .... One thing tat I hate - The MD and his emergency Calls ....... Why Why Why does the MD always have an Emergency whenever Shanak are togetheer ..... Next time this happens ... I am going to hunt tat MD down !!!!!
Heartfelt Thank You and a Big Bear hug for giving us this brilliant Masterpiece !!!!!!!
Congratulations and Loads of Kisses for completing 200 pages & 25 Chapters !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ... Your Shanak are like Fevicol !!!
Majboooot Jod hain .. Kabhi tootega nahi .... Love the emotions and desperation , the insecurity , their actions and their reactions !!!!!!!!
I Love your Shaaan ! I want a Hubby like this Man !!!!!!!!
Khanak - She s the best gift you have given to us and Shaan :D :D :D !!!!
Okay ... Pleaseeeeeeeeee tell me there s NO SAD update coming up ....
Let Shanak enjoy their company and love ... Us MD ka Kuch karr yaaar ... Hook tat MD up with Zarine ...
I want Shanak to spend time together rather than Shaan flying in and out for MD !! *stomps my foot*

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