Congratulations Manita on the 25th update, you definitely deserve acclamation for it, no need of thanks at all!
*sigh* to your Shanak. The new founding of each other again just through the initiative of the kiss again...enough for both for them to be said, the silence, motions was adequate for their relationship again....everything was said and accomplished there already...I'm lost again with them...I'm in love with they're love again *sigh* A sheer of brilliance Manita.👏👏
And the continuous of his ragging her to tell him thought out the hallway was outright adorable, felt liking being there a watching them brawl.
Awwwww....Khanak is such a cute-siee! She couldn't sleep...Shaan even the more cutieee! Loved them little interplay in his hotel room...Purely endearing, he was awoke! Here goes all the awww's and Ahaaa's with the exchange the next morning...he called her a cat! She surely is one, an fierce yet endearing one, she's so perfect for him.
Applaud to you...Take a bow for this dialogue, nothing else was needed at all after this.
'My only dream is you 'whatever rest I do is a journey, a way to reach you, I want to do things for you, achieve my dreams for you'' 'you' are the destination''" 😍😍
Ahaaaa! Where Shall I begin? Why do I think you live these characters lol! You need to answer me this question pleaseeeeeee! How do you write for them so well!
This dialogue strikes the whole chapter...I love this Shantanu Khandelwal, a practical quintessential dream of any women and Khanak, the perfect foil for him! I don't think I can even write more than this now...I'm in awe *sigh sigh sigh*
It's time for me to sigh for Khanak now, I love her reflective emotions...her wonderment of whether her love was so not enough compared to his...I was about to agree with her maybe it was, but then I remembered her forgiveness of letting go of his past, her acceptance and her willingness of togetherness with him was enough to earn respect from me. Thank you so so so much Manita for making me hopelessly in love them, which sometimes make me go haywire, I think only of them and vision them.
One doubt...I smell trouble brewing on business aspect of the story, the entry of Zarine again is getting me agitated 😡 maybe it's something to do with her...I hated her simply FULL STOP! Shaan was correct, I wish Khanak answered.
On a ending note FINALLY...I love their trust for each other, protectiveness, and possessiveness....everything that they emote😍😍. Thank you so much for the update...sometimes words are not enough to gratify you.
Maybe too early to ask for the next update...UPDATE SOON!😆😆
Edited by -Saira- - 14 years ago