FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 26

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Originally posted by: togepe30

Wow !!! Awesome part !!

Kya yaar.....Sumone or the other spoils their moment...

If Shaan confessed to her about his feelings then why didnt they start dating after that??? Bhang pi rakhi thi kya Shaan ne...

It was such a cute part....A teenager's first relationship.....Chooo Chweet !!

Cant wait for the next part.......I seriously wudve been bugging you If u hadnt promised to post the next part tonight itself.....LOVE YOUU !! *Muahh*

I hope this holi no one interrupts their spl moment...LOL....!!

Jaldi post kar....Lambaaaaa sa part post karna...Full of SHANAK !!

Luv,

Vandu

Awe khanak in flashback about a holi which probably changed her viewpiont on all her forthcoming holi's something good happened but followed with something bad...awe loved how shaan confessed his feelings and how he wanted to spend holi with her alone for some moments which was going well but jais accident followed I wonder how Jai accident happened because I think that is the main reason why she stopped cleverying holi and doesn't like it anywas another great update and can't wait for next 😊

Ps Thankyou for liking my comments all credit goes to your ff which make me write such comments 😊

Awwwwwwwwwww Mani !!!
Such cute update !!!!!

Why does someone always have to come betweeen them !!!
Zara Bachke rehna mujhse Zarine !!!!
*Stomps my foot* - Darn It !

Shaan confessing to Khanak in Flashback ?????
Hailaaaaa ... Really ? Toh ab itna sadu kyoon banta hain ????

Okay this is really intriguing !!!!
Jaldiiii update karo !!!!!

Loved Loved Loved it !!!!

di *hugs* gosh what a day today ..india -ireland match already took my jaan making me so eager ...finally we won and then this part...amazing! the mystery out finally.... i mean at least more than half of it...now wonder what happened ki shan achanak badal gaya ....and hope jai is fine in that incident ...i mean i knw he is alive but hope is actually fine 😲 anyways waiting for next part....😊

Mani dear. You know what ! i get to read your update in the most interesting way. Sitting at the rear end of a big car facing backwards . Away from the rest of the souls in the same car. Facing the long highway front of me wit very few cars coming close and then goin back wit soft melodious romantic songs in the b g. Reading your update was like heaven. And what an update. Gosh i ll remember this one forever. And bt your apprehension . Well the intrigue element in the relationship makes it more attractive. I just didn want this to get over. I loved every bit of it esp when she thinks that her infatuation will decrease but didnt and her fantasies bt him. Very real. Life like i should say. And when he also kinda confesses his feelings. Wow thats the best thing that could happen. And as usual the moment had to be interrupted. So is shaan not revealing his feelings because of the " being close getting hurt" thing. Whatever it is i loved that analogy in your prev update and again how real. And the best part is i get to read one more update during this journey back home. Waiting for the next one. Will comment in detail when i get back home.

Mani jaldi post kar.....1 ghanta aur intezaar nahi hota...

Kal office bhi hai...LOL !!

Thank you guys and everyone for loving part 9...reading and responding too...!!
I will thank all of you in detail after this part... I really loved all the responses and likes...

Thanks a lot !!!

once again I am nervous while posting this part...I really don't know if I justified their feelings correctly and explained their relationship...I am seriously nervous...!!

Story so far -- Plzz read page 28 and 32 for gist of story.
Part 9 -- is about Khanak's past where she remembers Shaan being her teenage crush and how on a Holi, they had come close and the news of Jai's accident came when they were about to kiss...

I am taking down the part --
Will soon write a gist that helps to understand the story 😊

Did i ! Yes i m first to comment. Yay. But i am at a total loss of words. How do you write stuff like this man that leaves the reader dumbfolded . Lol technically my g c s was 11/15. Wit the eye and motor intact. Verbal 1. A week more for the next part to come. Gosh. Ps. My folks couldn let me live in peace for sometime so they got me to shift places. Seated crushed between aunts. Yet reading the update was something else . And why r you nervous. You ve woven such a wonderful story wit so much intricasy and intrigue. Love you mani. I ll comment in detail later:)

oh manita,
tat was really a wonderful update (both the parts)..now i feel really sorry for khanak n am able to understand y she said no to shaan for his lunch invite..really i wish to know the story from shaan's perspective..i dont think the reason he gav is right..something might hav happened..if they r really in love n if they say it to their parents they wud b really happy i think..wish they both really express their feelings n be together..i felt emotional..awesome mani..its really bad that v need to wait for a week for the next update..
luv,
ramani